VN Ren'Py Naughty Neighbours [v0.51] [OuterRealm3D]

3.20 star(s) 27 Votes

m.miller

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Mar 17, 2025
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WOW, WHAT AN UTTER WASTE OF TIME! Unbelievable. This is a child's idea of sex. It's just relentless teasing with zero fucking. After hours of wasted time, two girls get drunk, get their pussies wet, get all tarted up, and go to a nightclub. I'm thinking "FINALLY, someone's gonna get laid," but the nightclub doesn't even let them in. What kind of robots run this place? Even a club full of gay dudes would be like "wow, you're hot, welcome!" Even if the club was having a private party for Vladimir Putin himself, those bitches would be in. Then, the girls go to an outlaw biker bar drunk, wearing almost nothing, took whatever random pills the bikers gave them, twice, and showed their bare tits, asses, and pussies to everyone while pole dancing. What did the bikers do? They acted like a bunch of virgins who don't know what to do with a woman. The president of the gang had one of the girls on a bar, completely naked, legs spread, pussy dripping, and what did he do? He fingered her, like a child. What the hell?! A man would've just fucked the shit out of her or eaten her pussy and then fucked the shit out of her. In reality, that trip to the outlaw biker bar would've been an all holes filled gang bang for the both of them. Another ridiculous thing is the random insertion of U.S. inspired characters like "Pauley" (which should be spelled "Paulie"). Pauley wouldn't say "roadworks," he'd say "construction." A straight dude who gets a free look at a hot woman's pussy doesn't trash talk said pussy. Shady, tattooed delivery drivers from New York City don't say "jeez" while muttering to themselves. "Jeez" is something prudish housewives say, it's something school children say when they know the teacher is listening, it's something broadcast TV characters say because the censors won't let them say "damn" or "shit" or "fuck." Pauley would never say "all this waiting around had better be worth it," he'd say "all this waitin' around better be worth it." Those "portable air conditioning units" are just silly. Where does the heat go? How hard is it to do an internet search for "portable industrial AC unit"? How does a guy like Pauley wind up in the U.K. delivering air handling equipment anyhow? I'm assuming that this takes place in the U.K. since most people seem to speak British English. Then, there's the pile of typos and grammatical errors, the most obvious and mystifying of which is the random and pointless use of single quotation marks. Any writer that works without an editor, or at least a proofreader of some kind, 'doesn't know their craft' (I think the censors might let that pass, instead of what most writers would say, any internet search will tell ya what belongs there). They don't even need to be particularly educated. Someone who got good grades in their high school English classes is good enough. The writer accepting corrections and criticisms is essential too though. Finally, I have to say that the proportions of Susan and some of the other women are a tad on the freakish side. They don't look natural. If I saw someone in real life walking down the street looking like that I'd think "wow, that bitch has had so much cosmetic surgery she's more like Frankenstein's monster than a human being." With a bit of work though, I think this could be a good game, but I'm not gonna hold my breath. Anyway, that's my two cents.
 
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