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NTR Phone Group [Ch 2.0][NtrCaptain]

I will increase the rating if the issues listed below are resolved.

The dialogues are not good at all, they are very dry,very short, devoid of any charm or tension. I mean, they are even more bland than the dialogues between me and my friends. Neither the MC and FMC part gives you a romantic feeling, nor is the NTR part tense.

NTR Phone Group enters the cheating phase very quickly, strangely, and unbelievably. The wife cheats for $400, this FMC is nothing more than a prostitute. Why should I feel jealousy, fear, or any other feeling related to NTR because of her? First, you have to fall in love with her, then the personalities must be great, then NTR makes sense. Now I don't care if the whole world fucks her.
Lack of music
Very shallow relationships
One-dimensional characters
Weak logic in the cheating part
Very similar art between the 3 games without differentiating them through minor detail changes
Lack of a deep or meaningful story

Anyway, I'm not a hater. I wrote these because I see you are working hard and I want you to succeed.
Good luck

Very good and interesting plot. Beautiful girl characters. One of the best "phone based" NTR games. Very wating for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This game has a lot of potential, love the element of showing the NTR via post-act conversation between the wife and other characters, rather than a live watching of the event. It adds another layer to the NTR. Can't wait to see future updates!

Very good so far, I was invested. Sad it ended so early. Only real issue so far is that the phone is not really a phone it's just the chat. I would like to be able to scroll up more to reread texts or to look at a gallery. I like the idea of the hidden chats that you can see. It's like you can view everything but only certain characters can see them. I would like to have a portrait of the characters shown when you say it's certain characters in a private chat so I can remember who they are.

It's your typical NTR phone game. Nothing in this game stands out from all the other NTR phone game. The character models in this game are all pretty hot. However the UI and overall feel of the game feels rushed and not polished compared to other NTR phone games. The story feels kinda rush to me, but serves its point for NTR. I'm a person who appreciates a more slow burn NTR but can understand how this caters to other NTR fan. Regardless this game does have potential of being a good NTR phone game to read and fap to.

Excellent plot build up, models are hot. please keep the current slow placed corruption build, please do not have a sex scene that pops up out of no where like other games. DO NOT BREAK MY IMMERSION! DEV
Hope regular updates/quality continue.

i think models are very hot and story is placed nice, if this updates come fast and more content.... is good. Also the game is simple click to continue.... very different and easy to other texting games i play before. I will give 5 stars before i like characters and setting .....i hope dev no fast rush story , nice game
please add more scene next update , i like kate > rachel

Came here for CRTL C AND CTRL V of this thread banner but stayed for all the drama and memes,
FC is attractive 10/10, but my main fav is the plot. But i am cautious as it is very easy to mess up, specially for NTR.
Cons-
Art needs more care
weird, creepy smiles from characters.

fix these issues and if you don't mess up the plot. I give grant you the five star
Edit- New chapter was great, update also fixed my issues. POG

Hard to judge a game when there's so little content so far.

There's a few pictures which are decently done (although AI, so that alone will put some people off). The writing is decent.

There's very little actual content though, nothing significant in terms of NTR or nudity (there's one or two nude pictures, that's about it).


Will wait to see more, not holding out much hope considering how most phone games go, in all honesty.

ART- Love the new art style, different from other game yet Solid.

STORY - Good setup for first release, But i hope we get more content in chapter 2

Characters - Love Rachel, Need to see Kate(I think i go the name right) more to judge

* Insane that you actually made a game for NTR community at an insane speed , thanks for reading and replying to pretty much every comment, wish a lot more devs did that. Good luck.

The author is actively trying to improve the game, basically revamping the game between chapters 1 and 2, with much more content and much prettier renders, and they are staying friendly in the face of criticism—just this update warrants 5★ overall, which is why I'm bumping my review to that.