VN - Ren'Py - NTR Phone Group [Ch 3] [NtrCaptain]

Hi, I'm going to post a review of the new update.
Chapter 3 has recently been publicly available.

Let's start with the images:
These are still of good quality. There are few, if any, errors.
I'll have to replay the game to double-check.
The characters are pretty decent, nothing to complain about in the first two chapters.
Special mention for John, he's a change from the muscular, supermodel character who's so appealing.
The new characters, however, are a bit clichéd but overall it's still okay.

Now let's move on to the story.
It began with a desire to help John, then a change in attitude sends Rachel into a new setting. I would have appreciated spending a little more time on the developing relationship with John, because the sudden change broke the pace for me. But maybe we can make up for it if we revisit this relationship with John in future updates.
The story between Rachel and Jason develops quickly and the introduction of his girlfriend adds a plus, but that too develops quite quickly.
Then, the relationship between Eddie and Kate takes an unexpected but rather interesting turn, to be continued

So overall I really enjoy this game but making relationships last a little longer would be a plus, not necessarily pushing this one to the limit. Just a little longer to create passion, then make a change to open a new story, without forgetting the previous one.

I'll keep following the progress and look forward to the release of Chapter 4. Overall, great work, keep it up

"This romance novel hooks you right away with that addictive will-they-won't-they tension. The writing shines when characters exchange loaded glances or have those charged conversations where every sentence feels like peeling back wallpaper - you keep discovering new layers underneath. Their subtle gestures are gold: a hand lingering too long when passing tea, inside jokes that only they understand, all those quiet moments that scream "KISS ALREADY!"

But man, the pacing's like watching someone flip through a photo album at double speed. Just as you're savoring a sweet midnight rooftop confession scene, BAM - next chapter they're suddenly giving each other cold shoulders at a wedding with minimal explanation. That big argument in Chapter 7? Felt rushed when the female lead dropped her guard - I wanted to swim in that vulnerability longer before the plot yanked us forward. Even the timeline jumps sometimes leave emotional whiplash, like when the male lead's old flame reappears out of nowhere in Episode 12 without proper buildup.

Still, the chemistry crackles like static electricity. You can practically taste the unsaid words whenever they share an elevator or "accidentally" brush fingers reaching for the same book. The writer absolutely nails how real attraction works - those micro-moments of breath-catching eye contact matter more than any cheesy love confession. It's the literary equivalent of slow-burn incense... if only they'd let the scent linger properly between plot turns instead of fanning the flames too hard."

Very good so far, I was invested. Sad it ended so early. Only real issue so far is that the phone is not really a phone it's just the chat. I would like to be able to scroll up more to reread texts or to look at a gallery. I like the idea of the hidden chats that you can see. It's like you can view everything but only certain characters can see them. I would like to have a portrait of the characters shown when you say it's certain characters in a private chat so I can remember who they are.

It's your typical NTR phone game. Nothing in this game stands out from all the other NTR phone game. The character models in this game are all pretty hot. However the UI and overall feel of the game feels rushed and not polished compared to other NTR phone games. The story feels kinda rush to me, but serves its point for NTR. I'm a person who appreciates a more slow burn NTR but can understand how this caters to other NTR fan. Regardless this game does have potential of being a good NTR phone game to read and fap to.

i think models are very hot and story is placed nice, if this updates come fast and more content.... is good. Also the game is simple click to continue.... very different and easy to other texting games i play before. I will give 5 stars before i like characters and setting .....i hope dev no fast rush story , nice game
please add more scene next update , i like kate > rachel

Came here for CRTL C AND CTRL V of this thread banner but stayed for all the drama and memes,
FC is attractive 10/10, but my main fav is the plot. But i am cautious as it is very easy to mess up, specially for NTR.
Cons-
Art needs more care
weird, creepy smiles from characters.

fix these issues and if you don't mess up the plot. I give grant you the five star
Edit- New chapter was great, update also fixed my issues. POG

Hard to judge a game when there's so little content so far.

There's a few pictures which are decently done (although AI, so that alone will put some people off). The writing is decent.

There's very little actual content though, nothing significant in terms of NTR or nudity (there's one or two nude pictures, that's about it).


Will wait to see more, not holding out much hope considering how most phone games go, in all honesty.

ART- Love the new art style, different from other game yet Solid.

STORY - Good setup for first release, But i hope we get more content in chapter 2

Characters - Love Rachel, Need to see Kate(I think i go the name right) more to judge

* Insane that you actually made a game for NTR community at an insane speed , thanks for reading and replying to pretty much every comment, wish a lot more devs did that. Good luck.

The author is actively trying to improve the game, basically revamping the game between chapters 1 and 2, with much more content and much prettier renders, and they are staying friendly in the face of criticism—just this update warrants 5★ overall, which is why I'm bumping my review to that.