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LexiTV

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Jan 24, 2018
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A buggy mess of a game. Tedious walking around, nothing finished, it starts after 5 minutes that "Coming Soon" appears everywhere.
Constant mess where you get stuck behind invisible walls and always bounce back like here:

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Overall, this is a generic AI game with EXTREMELY BAD WRITING.

Things I Actually liked, though:
- Good use of AI art
- It's a somewhat new and interesting story that hasn't been done in RPG Maker yet, I think

Overall ... MEH. Should have waited to release it. Way too buggy, almost no content. No proofreading. The writing is just terrible.
 

Saucier

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Feb 21, 2025
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A buggy mess of a game. Tedious walking around, nothing finished, it starts after 5 minutes that "Coming Soon" appears everywhere.
Constant mess where you get stuck behind invisible walls and always bounce back like here:



Overall, this is a generic AI game with EXTREMELY BAD WRITING.

Things I Actually liked, though:
- Good use of AI art
- It's a somewhat new and interesting story that hasn't been done in RPG Maker yet, I think

Overall ... MEH. Should have waited to release it. Way too buggy, almost no content. No proofreading. The writing is just terrible.


Spelling is the part I’m focusing on improving for the next update. I know there are mistakes, but I’ll do my best to make sure it doesn’t happen again.

It’s a demo, I mainly use invisible walls to guide the player during the intro. I’ll use fewer of them later on, but some will stay to maintain consistency in the story and prevent the MC from wandering around places where he wouldn’t normally go!
 
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xcalibar4

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was waiting forever for a similar story concept for a game, so will wait few more months until this game is developed further.
 
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Febui

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the next update should add much more.
I'd suggest sending the next update to that fellow who offered to proofread, when the update is ready, and don't post it for a couple days. Let them catch some of the easily-spot mistakes and then put a better foot forward for your first update.
But you don't have to listen to me. I just think putting your best foot forward would do well for you in the long run, and that proofreader is going to be at their most willing while the game is still quite new and fresh for them. They might lose enthusiasm over time.
 

LexiTV

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Jan 24, 2018
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Spelling is the part I’m focusing on improving for the next update. I know there are mistakes, but I’ll do my best to make sure it doesn’t happen again.

It’s a demo, I mainly use invisible walls to guide the player during the intro. I’ll use fewer of them later on, but some will stay to maintain consistency in the story and prevent the MC from wandering around places where he wouldn’t normally go!
You misunderstood my point! I got stuck behind an invisible wall and couldn't leave.
It's fine to use them to keep the player away from parts of the map where he isn't supposed to go, it's not okay if you can get stuck behind them. I posted the screenshot with the exact location where I was stuck (after peeping).
 

Saucier

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Feb 21, 2025
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You misunderstood my point! I got stuck behind an invisible wall and couldn't leave.
It's fine to use them to keep the player away from parts of the map where he isn't supposed to go, it's not okay if you can get stuck behind them. I posted the screenshot with the exact location where I was stuck (after peeping).
Ahhh! I see, I'll fix that, thanks!
 

Saucier

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Feb 21, 2025
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Hey everyone!

The next update is in the testing/proofreading phase! I can’t give an exact date yet, but it should be out soon! :)
 
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LexiTV

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Hey everyone!


The next update is in the testing/proofreading phase! I can’t give an exact date yet, but it should be out soon! :)
Good decision to do some proofreading.
You can even use AI. It's free and cheap. Just copy paste. If you want, you can add a prompt to slightly increase the level of writing.
 
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Saucier

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Hey there!

Update 1.1 is out! Feel free to check the changelog to see what’s new, or just dive in and discover it all in-game.
There are quite a few changes, especially to spelling and quest indicators, which could be a bit messy at times.

One of the new changes is the launch of a !
I know that can sometimes raise eyebrows, but the main goal is to help cover the cost of RPG Maker MV asset packs, plugins, and the Adobe license.

That said, I want to reassure you: there will never be any content locked behind a paywall.
In the game, the Patreon subscription only gives access to a small quality-of-life item, all in-game scenes and images are, and will always remain, free.

I’m also planning to open a Discord server in the next few days!

If you're playing the game, thank you! I hope you enjoy it.
 

Canto Forte

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Too much info in the work place. What is a: ”formation on how to walk in the woods” ???
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Do we need a course on the many steps needed to walk in the woods?
If you're playing the game, thank you! I hope you enjoy it.
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Wow ... just ... wow!
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What is a sub-forest? On the screen, MC is literally sitting in the forest up top.
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The worker told MC to keep the scyte but be mindful not to break it as it is company property. MC already has one on him, according to the dialogue before with the worker. Whew! MC automatically used it to cut those vines down.

At the pub, just clicking on the circles and having MC sit in them initially did nothing (using the mouse), then after a lot of clicking around the circles and back a couple of cubicles, the dialogues started.
 
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TLF

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Mar 16, 2019
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Got stuck after talking with the goblin girl.
I approached the goblins from the right side and the MC jumped to the right instead of back and now its stuck trying to walk forward.

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3.50 star(s) 2 Votes