Interesting
But when you look at the story from the FMC’s perspective, don’t the feelings tied to netorare get lost? It kinda turns into a female protagonist thing
The other day, I had a useful half-hour discussion about this with another friend
I’d love to know your perspective too
What do you do with the MC’s thoughts? You don’t have the FMC’s POV, but you do have the MC’s POV. Don’t you read the MC’s thoughts?
I'm not sure if I fully understand your question, but personally, I don't feel like the netorare aspect gets lost when the story is told from the FMC’s perspective. That might be because I tend to view adult content more from a third-person perspective, so it feels natural to me.
That said, when it comes to more traditional storytelling—like movies, novels, or regular games—I do prefer the MC's perspective, since I need that deeper immersion. So I guess it comes down to what I'm used to and how I usually consume the content.
I’ve played it for half an hour so far
In terms of art quality, it’s on par with the highest-quality AI games on this site
In terms of animation: it takes the top spot among all AI CG games!!
@NTR.ai
But one important thing I think you should pay attention to: when the first version of this game was released here, as soon as I saw its three-word overview, I closed the page because the first thought that comes to someone’s mind is that no effort was put into this game! I know it’s not a justifiable reason, but I’m sure a lot of people have had this thought and closed the game’s page without even trying it. So, I think you should change the overview so someone like me doesn’t miss out on this game
Thank you for the detailed feedback and review—I really appreciate it!
Overview: That was actually written by the uploader, and at the time, I figured it didn’t hurt to keep it as-is. But I agree it could be more appealing, so I’ll come up with something better.
Story: My current plan is to introduce just one more character. Honestly, I don’t think having only a few characters makes the story less believable—I've played other games that worked really well with a small cast. But do you think it might help to occasionally mention background characters like passengers, coworkers, or neighbors—without showing them—just to flesh out the world a bit?
Dialogue: I’ll work on making the narrator less present moving forward. That’s definitely something I’ve been thinking about adjusting.
Relationship Dynamics: Yeah, I personally feel that for NTR to work, the FMC should still love the MC—at least before ending. Her eventual corruption is part of what gives the story its emotional impact. As for the MC being too naive or oblivious… yeah, that’s always a tough balance. I’ve found that leaning into NTS sometimes makes things a bit easier to write, plot-wise.
All in all, thank you again for your thoughtful suggestions and warnings. I’ll definitely keep them in mind as I move forward!