- Nov 14, 2017
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Finding old versions is the only thing that lewdzone.com is good for. In this particular case they haven't found 0.19 yet, but even in general they don't throw away the links to older versions. In this case they even still have links to version 0.4, although unsurprisingly none of them is working any more.
For those who are having save problems, because of the change in the name of the game, I who usually leave more than 20 different saves in the game (usually about the choices) I used a save in the fifth or fourth before the last one and it worked, different from the one described on Patreon, but it really worked
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Okay, after three weeks I finally completed my English re-write of this game. It was a massive undertaking , considering how far into development the game is, but I felt the game deserved some TLC. Elsa94 created a very cool game, with a good story, and a number of appealing characters.
Ver 0.19
What I did:
1- Corrected the English translation. It was the only thing, IMO, that was really dragging down the game.
2- Fixed name mismatches. There were many instances where the dialogue on screen did not match the correct person.
3- Enhanced the dialogue during the heart warming scenes.
4- Added more humorous lines to the crazy characters. Especially Allana and Glory. Also the study group and test scenes.
5- Stayed true to the original story and the characters. I have been in conversation with Elsa, and this was a concern of hers/his(?). If anyone feels I strayed too far, please let me know.
6- Removed a lot of redundant lines and replaced them with more relevant dialogue. I felt the reader didn't need to be constantly reminded that it was a government sponsored program.
What I didn't do:
1- Fix some coding issues.
2- Deviate from the story. I believe it is true to Elsa94's vision.
3- Fix every single line. I would say that I covered about 95% of the story. There was an awful lot, and I may have missed some dialogue here and there.
I do not know if old saves can be migrated into this version. I would suggest starting from the beginning anyway, to receive the full impact of these changes.
I hope you like it.
Ver 0.19
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What I did:
1- Corrected the English translation. It was the only thing, IMO, that was really dragging down the game.
2- Fixed name mismatches. There were many instances where the dialogue on screen did not match the correct person.
3- Enhanced the dialogue during the heart warming scenes.
4- Added more humorous lines to the crazy characters. Especially Allana and Glory. Also the study group and test scenes.
5- Stayed true to the original story and the characters. I have been in conversation with Elsa, and this was a concern of hers/his(?). If anyone feels I strayed too far, please let me know.
6- Removed a lot of redundant lines and replaced them with more relevant dialogue. I felt the reader didn't need to be constantly reminded that it was a government sponsored program.
What I didn't do:
1- Fix some coding issues.
2- Deviate from the story. I believe it is true to Elsa94's vision.
3- Fix every single line. I would say that I covered about 95% of the story. There was an awful lot, and I may have missed some dialogue here and there.
I do not know if old saves can be migrated into this version. I would suggest starting from the beginning anyway, to receive the full impact of these changes.
I hope you like it.
So is Elsa94 going to roll some or all of your changes into the next release? If so, I can wait for that to happen.
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So many people have offered to help with the language here before, to no avail. I'd be surprised if they did.
- Jan 12, 2022
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Thank you so much! I have pinned it to the front thread as "English fix"
If anyone would like to try would be welcome to do so.
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Долго хотел написать после обновления но так и не написал ничего. Сейчас немного мыслей напишу.
I wanted to write after the update for a long time, but I still haven't written anything. Now I'll write a few thoughts.
About the update.
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I wanted to write after the update for a long time, but I still haven't written anything. Now I'll write a few thoughts.
About the update.
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Just a video.
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wow, i didnt play the new version yet, thats incredible, very nice update, thanks for sharing the vids
Hello game maker I like your game I follow from Itch.io and I like all girls in your games especially Olivia. Are you have any planning to add Malaysian uniform because I wantto see Olivia in school uniform! I read you teaching a new game maker on Patreon, I support Malaysian game maker like you and I want to make games also if You want to teach! Please add more hijabi girls in game like in our country and also Indon hijabi!
- Jan 12, 2017
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Elsa has said she had to replace all the school uniforms, and rename the game to "college", to satisfy Patreon rules. It's not likely she would put those or variants back in again.
- Nov 14, 2017
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*steam's rules but anyways those won't comeback like you said.
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