VN - Ren'Py - Once Upon a Time - In a Isekai World [v0.2] [NekoFairys/Kuro-Neko]

Though I agree with the previous reviewer that the dialogue gives me a headache at times. I believe the story is more in line with comedy rather than seriousness. Also looking at the previous games this creator made, they have been doing it since 2019. Some abandoned games, and a completed game, with a few ongoing. (Hopefully not a sign of overextending themselves to the point of exhaustion, leading to abandonment of games)

All in all, I felt the game was decent for how new it is. Some aspects are clearly lacking, however it gives a fairly clear direction on where things are heading. Decent graphics, animation is mid. Which is why I give it four stars as of the current release in March 2025.

okay story concept and visuals, brought down by an unskilled/novice writer.

lore dumps in the style of people talking "as you know ...". tense changing from one sentence to the next. time jumps where nothing actually happens, the MC learns nothing of the new world he's in, yet literally growing up there.

take a class in writing/storytelling where a teacher can properly describe/teach how to overcome these common mistakes.