The combat sequence was an unexpected pleasure, and the sex scenes were quite detailed. Great work.
The best part for me was Ves mentioning that she already knew about at least one other girl. I hope we get a lot more variety of this kind of thing, meaningful stares between girls, stumbling on each other, expressing non-sexual affection and trust to each other. The spontaneous undressing in the second scene implies submissiveness, not just lust, which is hot. For example, a scene could start, and then another girl comes in and just undresses but not interfering with the sex, just kissing the MC a bit and waiting for her turn.