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What you're saying is that the MC is 18?
Natalie would be 36 when the crash happened (Not now). And the MC is 36 years old.- Thread starter 7767
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Natalie would be 36 when the crash happened (Not now). And the MC is 36 years old.
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Yes, there were several unforeseen incidents that caused problems, both personal and equipment issues. Things should be on track for an update much sooner than this, probably 3-4 months.And i dont want to come off as an asshole; But do we need to wait another ~9 months for 0.3, or did some unforseen incidents happend to prolong the update? I just LOVED the update btw
Agreed lmao, that definitely makes him useless. Maybe the author will give us a good reason next time, because, "That was my grandfathers house", and "Tired of your sports car", and "Hot young chicks running around" (I know I'm paraphrasing a little), just aren't good excuses.
Holy Bacchus
Yo, I know you are probably not interested in the dark paths, but you mind asking the dev if they have plans to address the issues pointed out in the thread?
1. It doesn't fit MC's default personality.
2. Rather than being domineering or dark, it comes off as childish, unstable, or sociophatic outbursts.
3. If a route or choice is presented in the game, it should make sense for the character to act that way. Motivations, personality, goals etc.
4. All of the above makes it seem very bipolar when you pick dark options.
Yo, I know you are probably not interested in the dark paths, but you mind asking the dev if they have plans to address the issues pointed out in the thread?
1. It doesn't fit MC's default personality.
2. Rather than being domineering or dark, it comes off as childish, unstable, or sociophatic outbursts.
3. If a route or choice is presented in the game, it should make sense for the character to act that way. Motivations, personality, goals etc.
4. All of the above makes it seem very bipolar when you pick dark options.
Just my two cents...as I DO like the game, but...
Unless it's just a gaming trope
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Unless it's just a gaming trope
- Oct 26, 2020
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Not to sound rude or anything but there are plenty of extremely hot looking women in their 50's and a lot of them look like they're in their 30's so no the Devs doesn't need to change anything about Natalie because she looks accurate.
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I wouldn't necessarily say "accurate", her face could look a little more aged, but I agree with the sentiment about hot women in their 50s.
- Oct 26, 2020
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Ok sure, a wrinkle here and there but you get what I'm saying. People act as if some women don't age well or have good genetics.
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*sighs*....that doesn't help development time though does it? Nor excuse it.
That really isn't the only issue...would you like me to point them all out for you, in case you missed the last 10 pages. Would be acceptable if you did...all their testers appear to missed blatantly obvious errors too. (and that's just errors, never mind the actual terrible writing/plot).
We get it...as per usual.. We get you're also a patreon and will defend this to the death. This episode has numerous issues....a lot of them...and they all come down to bad writing. Defend away though....not like it's just me critisizing it....
As for Glen...utterly pointless character. Actually amazed Alorth didn't say wtf about the this whole 'plot'. if he not relevent, not going to be around much...why even fecking bother with him at all then? Won't take focus of the girls? Hah! Half of this update wasn't even with the girls. Seriously. Again...I'll tell you why, shoddy writing once again. Renders, animations, absolutely top notch.....but the rest? Not good and unfortunately, I think a lot of people's fears about this have been realised. It's gone into a completely different direction and territory from what the demo teased. If this is actually what Damned wanted..well, he already has this type of crap in Polarity (maybe you should try it for yourself). This VN didn't need it, nor did it even hint at it.
- May 30, 2017
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Yup, I cringe when mc always mention the girls are 18 and the fbi/chris hansen stuff. Ugh
Thank you for phrasing this so well.
For me I really enjoyed the art, but I find it hard to enjoy the game with the story just being so unrealistic in places. The general tone of the story is serious and these bad scenes just keep removing my immersion.
Also Alorth mentioning they took more than a month rendering the sex scene. I totally believe that, and it seemed hot, but I don't think most people (including me) care much about that scene due to the sloppy setup (waitress jumping on you in a date!?). It's a shame, because I can see how great most of the art is in the game, but I can't enjoy it due to the writing.
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Happens to me too,I just DL the compressed version or paste the mega link in Firefox instead.
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I don't care if Glenn is a cop MC should've kicked his ass when he said that, but he was too busy being stuck in beta mode. Calling my beautiful flowers whores is grounds for "early termination".
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Yeah assaulting a police officer seems like a great idea
So, they wasted their best animation (it was pretty good) on a side character.
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Except that it does help it now that things seem to have calmed down for both of them after the issues they were having. Considering the fact that prior to this, Alorth was was working on about 7 different games whilst holding down a full-time until earlier this year, the workload for the 3 projects Alorth works on now should, in theory, be no more than those who produce one game with substantive updates every 3-4 months. So barring anymore issues, the next update for this game should be much sooner than this one.
Aside from this one, I didn't notice any other particularly glaring issues. Maybe a few minor grammar and spelling errors, but all games have those so it's noting to get worked up over.
I'm critical where I think this game needs critiquing, like with the Glenn character, Natalie's young appearance, and some inconsistencies in the story, so just because I'm a patron doesn't mean I will defend it 100%. But honestly, I didn't find too much wrong with this update and it neither exceeded nor dashed my expectations in any way. I've played quite a few games with really terrible writing and awful stories, but this is not one of them as far as I'm concerned. It's not necessarily the best in some areas, but it's by no means the worst.
Personally, this game gives me vibes of some elements of DMD, Sisterly Lust, and Light of my Life all rolled into one, and since it's still early days, it has great potential to improve.
Plenty of games have side characters who have animations, so this doesn't seem like much of an issue, especally when you consider that it's still too early for that sort of action with the girls or even Brooke, and Vanessa was basically a bit of an easy slut. So it's like in most games where, as you build up good relationships with the main LIs, there are plenty of side chicks to keep you entertained on that journey.
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