The art looks nice enough and is what brought me in.
The dialogue is... clumsy. It was really bothering me for a little while, since I couldn't place exactly why, but then I realized: the game directly quotes poorly translated JVNs constantly. I don't know why, because the English is overall fine. But then you get hit by a line or two which feel like they were pulled straight from JVeNglish. It's somehow worse than when everything is written like that, because it mostly isn't.
For example, something along the lines of "you want to do... that?" (If you know, you know) Can't be bothered to go find specific examples, but the sex scenes in particular are full of it. I half expected someone to say "h stuff."
Generally speaking there just isn't much good to be said for the writing. Relatively few of the scenes really advance the plot, insofar as there even is one. It kinda just wanders, with a lot of time and effort having been put into some generic sword training scene or something which doesn't achieve anything and doesn't feel believable.
Overall it's fine. The sex scenes have some variety if you can get past the writing. The art is overall better than average. But I ended up putting it down before hitting the end of the current content, just because there's nothing to keep me engaged.
The dialogue is... clumsy. It was really bothering me for a little while, since I couldn't place exactly why, but then I realized: the game directly quotes poorly translated JVNs constantly. I don't know why, because the English is overall fine. But then you get hit by a line or two which feel like they were pulled straight from JVeNglish. It's somehow worse than when everything is written like that, because it mostly isn't.
For example, something along the lines of "you want to do... that?" (If you know, you know) Can't be bothered to go find specific examples, but the sex scenes in particular are full of it. I half expected someone to say "h stuff."
Generally speaking there just isn't much good to be said for the writing. Relatively few of the scenes really advance the plot, insofar as there even is one. It kinda just wanders, with a lot of time and effort having been put into some generic sword training scene or something which doesn't achieve anything and doesn't feel believable.
Overall it's fine. The sex scenes have some variety if you can get past the writing. The art is overall better than average. But I ended up putting it down before hitting the end of the current content, just because there's nothing to keep me engaged.