Well, you're not quite right, dude. The story isn't that bad.
But... as it usually happens, "there are nuances". 50 gigabytes is indeed a bit too much for a simple story without the slightest hint of close family relations (lesbi-content is NOT count), when the more details the better, haha - now if this were a story like the one told by Ketzal, or something like "boxed in" *wink-wink* - then 50 gigabytes wouldn't be a pity. But yeah, it wouldn't hurt to compress %SUBJ%-story to 5 gigabytes.
On the other hand, if this story is made with the expectation of distribution from a hosting with per-megabyte tariffing for outgoing traffic - then 100 gigabytes wouldn't be surprising (hehe).
too much text, kill mary, keira, karen, jessica, lisa, jennifer, megan (so far the annoying ones i remember) and this game would be BAREABLE
too many girls, this is like WVM , the same shit, 2 minutes of dialogues and sex with 1 girl, 30 seconds of dialogue (i love you , i love you) then sex, 1 minute of dialogue, then sex, this kind of games are trash, too many girls, too many sex scenes that arent even well animated, if at least this shit had good scenes, even that cannot be possible with this, it is what it is