VN Ren'Py Saving Paula [v0.0.32-xTz] [XTZ Adult Games]

[tony3000]

Just to be clear, this update only had that 'roommate' joining in with MC on spying Paula in the shower and Paula pleasuring herself in the shower with her toy right? (Gameplay duration ~2min )

 

[madrid3423]

Totally, since there are only two type of women on Earth, virgins and orgy mega cumdumps and proud of it, nothing inbetween. What I mean is that type of info is only good for cuck oriented games(which allegedly this isn't one), not incest ones. The taboo for the incest crowd is to get to seduce and fuck the family, not read about how everyone else in the town has already done it.

You dropped your honking nose.

Dude just let the dev make his own fucking game. If its not up your street, just move on.

 

[Xxrizz]

It's a bit more than that, actually: It's about expecting all the ladies be virgins and act as virgins - in the entertainment industry! - and then expecting them to fall on the MC's dick on the first day because, you know, that's how people work...

Ok inget your point but you don't even have two day content in the game in almost 4 years man and true what u said before some did made new profiles to shit on the game at least not me i wrote couple if times long time ago i even praised your game but the content is very weak in 4 years man that's the thing you can do reverse psychology and be "surprised" by some people talking but a lot of them are being honest when they say it's very weak on content i replayed it yesterday and i finished it in 45 minutes that's the reason i am not a paying patron that's true but do you think is fair for your patrons to be milked almost zero content in 4 years ? Just an honest question?

 

[XTZ Adult Games]

... and true what u said before some did made new profiles to shit on the game at least not me i wrote couple if times long time ago...

So you're a veteran shit-writer?
Good for you!

i even praised your game but the content is very weak in 4 years man that's the thing you can do reverse psychology and be "surprised" by some people talking but a lot of them are being honest when they say it's very weak on content i replayed it yesterday and i finished it in 45 minutes that's the reason i am not a paying patron that's true but do you think is fair for your patrons to milk the almost zero content in 4 years ? Just an honest question?

Punctuation. Please.
And my Patrons aren't milking anyone.

 

[XTZ Adult Games]

At the end of the day you didn't know what to reply to him dev he gave few good points all of them are sluts he didn't lie here .... that's the truth it is what it is i guess !!

Reply to what? To the fact that some of the characters in a porn game are sluts? Really?
And when did I claim otherwise?
What was the point he was making that needed my answer?
Just like the hilarious remarks that my characters are too sexy - how can I respond to that?
What is the point that he was making, that now you are trying to convince yourself that was "a winner" in some idiotic and self-delusional fight?
Yes, there are - clearly - many slutty characters in my porn game. That is why Paula needs saving - from them.
It's the actual name of the game, and the buildup that's already started.
And punctuation, man. Please.

 

[De jay de jay]

dudes proud to make 500$ a month xdddd. u could make more if u listen instead of arguing with everyone like your some hot shit. you think your game getting attention but your just losing reputation. if this update had at least one interaction with mc even a kiss everyone would be happy. instead, this is the 3rd update that adds nothing to the game.

 

[XTZ Adult Games]

I imagine you could still put out exclusive renders for patrons, without having to package it with an update. Ditto for showing off your work, you wouldn’t need to go radio silent for 12 months. You could still post dev blogs and the like showing off the work being done.

It doesn't answer my first point - there are quite a few that want frequent updates, and don't want to wait. And again - those who want a once-in-a-year bulk update can just visit whenever they like.
Also, the "feedback" part needs the conversation.

But I suppose the question that really comes to mind based off what you’ve said is, how much of the story here have you actually mapped out? Do you actually have a narrative, character arcs and clear progression you want to take it all in, or is it more of a vaguer concept that’s much more fluid and changeable? Like, you’ve said that the next update will feature Paula and the MC having “The Talk” and but do you have an exact idea what’s going to happen, say, 3-4 updates from now?

The main branches are already boxed out - including the end game. Parts of the story are even written here, in previous pages.
Many things along the road, though, will be fleshed out as we progress - especially as far as secondary characters go.
The next two updates are already fully scripted.

 

[XTZ Adult Games]

XTZ Adult Games Thank you for the new update, it looks great !
The only request, if I may, is to PLEASE don't force anything in the future. Make "stuff" avoidable, please!
I really enjoy this game: 1. Family , 2. MILFs , and 3. the fact that you actually have 2 protagonists with their own choices . So, I really think you have something pretty unique here with the last point...

I will not "force" anything unless it's essential to the story.
The only thing that the player can't change is the history of the characters until the separation of Paula and Dick.

Here's hoping you will have the time and will to continue this project until the end.

No worries!

Again, PLEASE, don't change things in the future and make us loose control over our choices. Personally, I don't like sharing (especially the women from the household). Nothing against those people that want to see something else in-game. If the request is high, I get it to put stuff like that in, but please let us make the choice. And the routes also (I very much like a "purity" route so to speak, at least with the fam. members) so... please keep that in mind.

There are things that will not find their way in the game regardless of requests - sharing is one of them.
I hate sharing.
NTR is different - it's called "loosing" in the game, but it is driven by choices so players can choose to go there.
Sharing, on the other hand, has no purpose in the game, so it's not an option.

Also a question: I see that you added harem as a tag. Will you create 3somes, 4somes etc scenes between the fam. members... as a "big, happy family" thing, you know?

Well, it's not a family by default, but any combination of MC and ladies is a fair result.

Thank you and good luck!

Thank you!

 

[XTZ Adult Games]

dudes proud to make 500$ a month xdddd. u could make more if u listen instead of arguing with everyone like your some hot shit. you think your game getting attention but your just losing reputation. if this update had at least one interaction with mc even a kiss everyone would be happy. instead, this is the 3rd update that adds nothing to the game.

"Proud" of making 500$ a month?
Do you know how much an experienced 3D lead artist makes?..
It was because I was asked about my goals, and what would it take for me to make the game my "day job."
Please learn to read and understand context, it will make what you write relevant.

And I don't take the temperature of my shit. I just flush.

 

[Vleder]

And I don't take the temperature of my shit. I just flush.

Pure gold, man, pure gold!

 

[Xxrizz]

Reply to what? To the fact that some of the characters in a porn game are sluts? Really?
And when did I claim otherwise?
What was the point he was making that needed my answer?
Just like the hilarious remarks that my characters are too sexy - how can I respond to that?
What is the point that he was making, that now you are trying to convince yourself that was "a winner" in some idiotic and self-delusional fight?
Yes, there are - clearly - many slutty characters in my porn game. That is why Paula needs saving - from them.
It's the actual name of the game, and the buildup that's already started.
And punctuation, man. Please.

I am not a writer i barely speak the language but you understand me i guess and, what about that, that u barely have any content in the last 4 years you don't even have 2 game days worth of content for me that's disappointing i mean i truly wish there was moore content at least some sexy time but almost nothing till now if u count masturbation as sex then i don't know what to say ....this novel could be very successful but to bad ....you didn't know how to sell it

 

[Xxrizz]

you're a veteran shit-writer?
Good for you!

Well at least iam not biased and insulting anyone, you can only do that cuz you don't know what to say cuz deep down you know the truth and a lot of things said here are true so I'll be the better person and not succumb to your level ....and insulting you cuz clearly is not worth it i just wanted to ask something ,but cuz this is a porn forum clearly you don't know what u want ypur direction of the game to go cuz if u did u was gonna have moore content and not give stupid excuses they work once or twice not all the time ,i just hope your patrons get what they paid for .....to bad really

 

[piechank123]

Paula's next step is The Talk with MC in his room.
How that goes depends very much on Paula's feelings and decisions in the bathroom scene.

You will release that update in 6 months. It will be a handjob at the very most and judging by the seizure animation Paula had in the shower, I'm not expecting much. The update 6 months after that will be the son actually ejaculating from the handjob or not. I guess it depends on how Paula feels about her shower seizure.

1 more year to see a handjob making a total of 4 years of development...

 

[Six0]

No, the MC and the player doesn't think anything. They know what they are from the start beacuse they are not treated like idiots, they don't need useless info rubbed in their faces that they can be inferred on their own.

If there is a mom in the game, you don't need to see how the kid was conceived, or be told how many others have creampied her before, or after the kid was born to know she is not a virgin.

If a girl says she likes doing it in a sex position, you understand she is experienced, you don't need to show, or hear her reminisce about how many times she has been fucked in that position.

You don't need a girl you met at a gloryhole to talk about previous clients, or read her thoughts comparing dick tastes to know that she is promiscuous.

If there is a stripper that does anal in the first meeting with the MC, you can infer she must have done that with others as well, you don't need it spelled out for you.

...unless you are making a cuck game, where them being portrayed as ultra massive whores and those details are the goal.


Bottom line, their games don't insult players intelligence with loopholes and technicalities, thats why you don't see people scream about NTR there even if threads are huge. You would think that would be hint enough that its not about players wanting virgins, but then again I doubt that they are coming into the topic in good faith, or otherwise they would be transparent about the content of their games from the get-go.

I think get it now. You're upset this isn't playing out like most other harem games where the women ONLY talk about the MC and how fascinating his huge cock is. Or whining about how horny they are and can't do anything about it because female masturbation isn't a thing until the MC is in the picture somewhere to conveniently spy on her, catch her in the act, or tell her what to do like a puppet. Except this game has basically done that twice now, so it's got all the other awful harem tropes you'd want. It's just that the story isn't anchored down by the MC enough for you. It already does that annoying BS where you only get to see the fun stuff from his POV. Not exactly cuck material just because we get to hear about the women's experiences that DON'T involve him. It would be if we had to watch them with other men while we're stuck being the MC with his dick in his hands.

 

[Xxrizz]

So you're a veteran shit-writer?
Good for you!



Punctuation. Please.
And my Patrons aren't milking anyone.

Edited you're milking them happy now ???

 

[NebulousShooter]

Reply to what? To the fact that some of the characters in a porn game are sluts?

some

Name one that doesn't have almost their entire volume of dialogue/monologue in the game so far about how much of a slut they were and still are. ONE. I'll wait!

You didn't replay because there is nothing you can refute, I didn't post opinions, I post stuff from your own game to contradict every little disingenuous stuff you keep spewing in here. You are at odds with your own game and inability to be honest, not with me.

I think get it now. You're upset this isn't playing out like most other harem games where the women ONLY talk about the MC and how fascinating his huge cock is. Or whining about how horny they are and can't do anything about it because female masturbation isn't a thing until the MC is in the picture somewhere to conveniently spy on her, catch her in the act, or tell her what to do like a puppet. Except this game has basically done that twice now, so it's got all the other awful harem tropes you'd want. It's just that the story isn't anchored down by the MC enough for you. It already does that annoying BS where you only get to see the fun stuff from his POV. Not exactly cuck material just because we get to hear about the women's experiences that DON'T involve him. It would be if we had to watch them with other men while we're stuck being the MC with his dick in his hands.

If that's what you got out of multiple dissertation length posts on the topic.... Its filler text that adds nothing but make the so called Love Interests in the game as undesirable as possible outside of the FMC, or NTR crowd, which was the whole point from the start. To ask for transparency that this is a game targeting that audience. Only them are salivating about gangbang sluts as main characters. Its not a difficult concept to grasp, or maybe it is I guess, since we are still using the virgin mom clever joke, so clearly we aren't dealing with the best fit individuals to debate the topic.

 

[Bacara]

You will release that update in 6 months. It will be a handjob at the very most and judging by the seizure animation Paula had in the shower, I'm not expecting much. The update 6 months after that will be the son actually ejaculating from the handjob or not. I guess it depends on how Paula feels about her shower seizure.

1 more year to see a handjob making a total of 4 years of development...

You're being unbelievably optimistic there pal

 

[Six0]

If that's what you got out of multiple dissertation length posts on the topic.... Its filler text that adds nothing but make the so called Love Interests in the game as undesirable as possible outside of the FMC, or NTR crowd, which was the whole point from the start. To ask for transparency that this is a game targeting that audience. Only them are salivating about gangbang sluts as main characters. Its not a difficult concept to grasp, or maybe it is I guess, since we are still using the virgin mom clever joke, so clearly we aren't dealing with the best fit individuals to debate the topic.

Well, what you consider undesirable is what I consider desirable. Then again, I'm only paying attention to the mom and couldn't care less about the other THOTs. If the mom said she once fell on 37 dicks before falling in love with your father, that wouldn't make me any less interested in her. But if she said your father was the only man she'd ever been with and they only ever had sex once, I'd find that boring AF.

 

[NebulousShooter]

Well, what you consider undesirable is what I consider desirable. Then again, I'm only paying attention to the mom and couldn't care less about the other THOTs. If the mom said she once fell on 37 dicks before falling in love with your father, that wouldn't make me any less interested in her. But if she said your father was the only man she'd ever been with and they only ever had sex once, I'd find that boring AF.

Since you mentioned taking issues with the MC pov, I assume you like normal FMC games. Therefore, I was speaking about the romance and incest tag main demographic for a vanilla male MC, which get baited with 'very avoidable NTR' disclaimer, when in reality there isn't a single character worth pursuing unless they are just like yourself turned on about them being as depraved as possible.

 

[Six0]

Since you mentioned taking issues with the MC pov, I assume you like normal FMC games.

Yup, that's me. I always prefer a female protagonist and can't stand when there's an interjected male POV. Likewise, when there's multiple protagonist, I don't see why a FMC can't have some alone time without the MC's presence. (ie: soon as she touches herself, we're put in his shoes to be given his thoughts about the situation rather than focusing solely on her)