HTML Sexual Troubles of a Newcomer [v0.6] [Odiosis]

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Odiosis

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Hello everyone!

First, let me thank you all for the kind words and good reviews! I'm glad that this small creative experiment has found its players/readers. I see that most of the negative reviews and comments are related to people expecting things from the game that I didn't intend (and don't plan) to add. This is my mistake - due to inexperience, I couldn't choose the right tags, description and screenshots to convey the essence of the game and not give false hope to those who definitely won't be interested in it.

Special thanks for this comment.

A really top-notch game in its category (lezdom)! Congrats to the author! (y)

I recommend rewriting the description and changing the preview images though. It's not obvious from them that the game is heavily lezdom-focused. I think many will be deceived by that.
Yes, that's right, this needs to be fixed.

I also want to apologize for the delay - as I mentioned above, I currently have very little free time and don't have enough for developing this game. I'll try to warn about such situations in the future to avoid the feeling of the project being abandoned. But I'm surprised and pleased to learn that many of you enjoy this project and are waiting for its continuation.
I'm trying to find time and am already writing text for the next update. However, this will take quite a long time. Not only because of my lack of time, but also because I want to make this update bigger than the previous ones. Each release requires work on project assembly and bug hunting regardless of release size, so I'll try to make larger updates so more time goes into creating content rather than technical issues.

I've also finally figured out in my head what this project should be like. Here's roughly what to expect:
1. Minigames. I've noticed many complain about them. First, I won't make many of them - better focus on story and illustrations. Second, I'll try to make them "entertaining" rather than "challenging". I'll simplify existing games.
2. Variability. This is good, I personally like it, but I couldn't implement it properly in this project. So going forward, the plot will remain linear, and choices will be local - you'll arrive at the same result via slightly different paths.
3. Different endings. Most likely the game will have several endings as I planned. But reaching them will be determined not by "play style" - I can't handle that, but simply by choosing one of the actions. I'll somehow mark places where "branching" will occur.
4. Game size. I've noticed many write "not bad, though this is just the beginning". I appreciate your faith in me, but I can't handle a big project alone in my free time from work and other life obligations. :) I think it's better to do less but finish it, than aim for much but abandon halfway. So this project will be small. Consider that the current version has 30%-60% of the content.
5. The game will remain focused on lezdom-content. I think adding anything different from it at this stage would disappoint those who enjoy the current version. I have many other ideas, but I'll save them for other projects.

Thank you all again! I haven't disappeared, though slowly, I am working on the game. And your feedback really helps understand what's important in this "game" and what's unnecessary or even annoying.
 

Odiosis

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Sep 27, 2024
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Version 0.5 is now available.

While I would have liked to include more updates, I felt it was important to release what I have completed so far.

In this update, Alice and Sophie attend Roxy's party. What happens there - whether they take action, discover new information, or maintain the status quo - is entirely up to your choices. The story will branch into multiple paths from here, though there will still (may)be shared "entertainment" events that don't impact the main storyline.

I've made some improvements to the image generation process which I hope you'll enjoy.
I've also streamlined the existing mini-games.

If you encounter any bugs or technical issues, please report them here.
 

Odiosis

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Sep 27, 2024
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Can we be the dom in this lezdom game please
Globally - no. I just can't imagine how to implement this technically. But since the game is in third person, you can safely consider yourself as the "dom" pushing Alice into trouble :) Also, there is one scene where Alice participates "actively". For the future updates - let's avoid spoilers for now.
 

PickerLewd

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Globally - no. I just can't imagine how to implement this technically. But since the game is in third person, you can safely consider yourself as the "dom" pushing Alice into trouble :) Also, there is one scene where Alice participates "actively". For the future updates - let's avoid spoilers for now.
I haven't played the new content yet, but the roadmap at the beginning lists the changes up to version 0.3 and the ideas for future implementation.
 

Odiosis

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Sep 27, 2024
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Version 0.6 has been released.

This is probably the biggest content update so far. I've added about 5 scenes or maybe even more. Three story branches have been completed with endings.

I've added in-game hints to help players find the new content branches. But just in case, I'll explain here as well.
Below are story spoilers, so this is for those who have already played and don't want to miss the new content.
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I hope you'll enjoy the new content. Please share your thoughts - it motivates me to keep working. And there's still a lot of work to be done...
 

robin312

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I would say that I like this game. AI generated art is consistent and author has a good ideas. Writing is pretty good to mine taste

The only criticism I have is a lack of progression. In such games we should have a progression to track the pass of corruption. One kind of progression is FMCs' holes development. Unfortunately they are returning to normal each time after treatment in med cabinet
 

L7Bear

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Really enjoy this game, and am slowly digesting it.
Currently I am only as far as waking up the day after playing maid at Roxy's McMansion.
While the party - at least the way I played it - seemed to move the story forward, it was largely underwhelming. They just sat in a side room most of the party and all of the after party. Much debauchery was teased, yet nothing particularly interesting happened. Sure, there's some teasing about with the Aunt (future content maybe) and the returning guest (future content probably.) I would have preferred this event to have some more interesting twists, turns, and abuses of power. Perhaps even Roxy's permanent staff (realizing they are better at this than Alice & Sophie) might have cut their own deal with the duo - where they got to have fun in exchange for diverting Roxy from them during the main party. Perhaps - just as the Aunt had heard about Alice from Roxy - Sophie &/or Roxy would be *special guests* during the afterparty... even if only something simple like being bound naked to Saint Andrew's Crosses and mostly just watching the afterparty except when the occasional friend-of-Roxy's took a few minutes to halfheartedly flog one or both of them. Perhaps their responses would lead to more flagellation and result in going directly to the nurse/doctor rather than bed at the end of the night. Perhaps Sophie would be bound and Alice would get the choice to either whip Sophie & join the party as a guest, or to join Sophie as a bound target. So many possibilities, and I'm not even half as creative as the author (based on previous scenarios and content.)

One of the things I really REALLY enjoy about this game is that it tends to come up with clever and debauched scenarios to explore, but in this regard the main job was rather disappointing.

note: Maybe I'm just disappointed because I'm digesting the game so slowly that I have lost track of where updates start and end. Maybe this update was jammed pack with debauchery and reasons I paused before the party really got going. Hopefully I'm not just whining/complaining, but providing some constructive criticism for the future.
 
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