VN - Ren'Py - Shattered Dreams: Redemption [v0.2] [Nebula Dreams]

To be honest, this is not a plot, but some kind of mess. There's the first number of the NBA draft, the mafia, and a famous singer. The story is incoherent and not at all catchy. There are beautiful pictures, but it's not enough for a good game.

It's one of those games where the story keeps you so entertained that the sex scenes are almost secondary. The plot is very engaging, with well-developed characters and a promising narrative that hooks you from the start.

This VN is an example of how being good in every aspect leads to a great final product. It has a simple yet surprisingly well written story. The writing isn't novel or ground breaking, but it is very competent and enjoyable.

I also like the characters - the women are varied, well written and memorable. I also like that the MC isn't a blank doormat. It excels in the visuals department too - the character models look great and the lighting and backgrounds are very well done.

This VN is an example of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts and I'm really looking forward to future updates.

Shattered dreams v0.2

Renders and models are good. Plot seems good. Mc is not a creepy asshole either. Girls are pretty and got their own characteristics. There's character development. Main LI is also gorgeous.
Writing is also good. This one's not a fuck fest but there are fair amount of scenes for a v0.2. Dev did put a lot of work in renders part.

Overall i enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work dev looking forward to next updates.

OThe game is very good, congratulations, thank you, it deserves its place among the games I play, everything is perfect. I hope the image and sound transitions don't take long to update. I can recommend the game to everyone. The MC and other player characters are very nice.

At the moment it's basically a demo but it does give some insight to the future of the game.

I have no idea why the MC doesn't just dump his father and move on, it would probably be better for the father as well given his gambling started around the time of MC's injury, that would also eliminate the MC's need to work(problem solved the end).

Sex scenes are nice if a little standard, the character models are great, there is not enough content to get a good grasp on the characters personalities but at the moment i was put off three of the girls.

Not enough content to tell if the choices are effective or not.

Story 3/5 (simple to solve)
Art 4/5 (good)
Sex 3/5 (fine)
Fetishes 0/5 (none)
Choices N/A (too early)
Characters 3/5 (ok so far)

This is a relly good first attempt of the game with a generally speaking good story, interesting characters, (mostly) good dialogues and impressive renders.
Pros:

• Nice athmosphere of the game
• Likeable MC
• Fantastic renders
• Nice animations
• Good, atmospheric music
• Okay and enjoyable dialogues
• Interesting and various LIs
• Interesting main plot

Cons:

• main plot has a few doubtful moments: like the mafia boss giving the MC a pile of money for nothing... and then off he goes and shoots two people
• Dialogues not always are smooth. There are a few awkward moments - not many though
• Translation is good for a while and then out of nowhere you get a lot of weirdly translated sentences. It needs another proofreading by the actual native English speaker
• That insta girl is out of place. An insta model who decides to rent out the rooms to 2 athlets. This sounds like a cheap porn. Oh wait...
• empty locations. I get it that it is timely and expensive to fill up lcoations up with the actual 3D characters, but the dev didn't even bother to use those cardboard characters you see in every AVN

All in all, good game and I look forward to another update

VERSION: 0.1
SUMMARY: Solid start, decent content, worth checking out.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

1. Models: 4
2. Animations: 4
3. General Visuals: 4
4. Characters: 3
5. Story: 4
6. Writing: 3
7. Pacing: 4
8. Content (amount): 4
9. UI & Sounds: 3
10. Lewd & Kinks: 3

Average: 34 of 50 possible points giving a 70% rating i.e. 3-4 stars.

PROS:

1. Good looking MC and love interests.
2. Animations are nice and smooth.
3. Optional POV during lewd scenes are nice.
4. Music is not bad, sounds in general are a nice touch.
5. Writing is generally decent, flows nicely and is structured relatively well.
6. Story is pretty good, has some intrigue and drives my curiosity at times.
7. Decent amount of content for an initial release.
8. Seems like a decent amount of love interests that are available to the MC

CONS:

1. Dialogue needs some review, phrases like "i barely forgot how big you are" that's just bad English
2. Lewd scene sounds is a tad disappointing, great that there are some though. Just a nitpick not exactly a con.
3. No choices really, more story driven, no choice on some of the MC love interests (at least so far)

FINAL THOUGHTS:

• Really good start with a decent amount of content, I really hope this one goes far.
• Hopefully we can expect some more tags and kinks in the future.