VN Ren'Py Shattered [v0.22] [Yeda Games]

[Buletti]

sorry but that's exactly where it doesn't fit but then doesn't fit at all! It's not because IRIS says she's in a relationship with Stewart that it has to be definitive either especially since she sends many signs again and again towards Blake! On this you are not at all clear and impose a disgusting NTR relationship! You do the same thing with Rebecca by making a romantic relationship impossible between Blake. For you it's logical since you write but the narrative transcription is not clear. In addition you do not allow a second chance in a relationship. It's your AVN obviously but honestly imposing choices like that is more than disturbing given the length of the story and the number of characters.

Frankly apart from shitty and toxic relationships it's starting to be a bit much and ruins your big development work. The principle of domination or submission is not necessarily toxic I'm not telling you anything. For example, IRIS clearly says she is looking for a normal and balanced relationship: how does being trans, for example, prevent a balanced relationship? It allows for intimate connections but not a balanced life?

But if I follow your narrative idea, the only conclusion is that IRIS is just a big manipulative bitch who destroys everyone she approaches: her escape from the underworld causes Blake problems, her return to the zone causes Blake to be raped, not to mention what he has to do to try to defend Iris; Iris forms an intimate relationship with an old fart... Same with girls like Pepper and Jasmin... So why not allow several moments to simply break the friendly relationship rather than for example seeing Blake continue to listen to her venomous words: basically, look at you Blake and your superficiality while I am now someone educated and useful!

What relationship becomes intelligent and healthy? allows a common progression of the MC and an LI? none for the moment! It seems that Blake never manages to progress psychologically if we analyze the speeches of the LI around him! Iris evolves, Suya evolves, Lucia evolves, Melinda evolves... but here Blake is confined to a role of caricatured Submissive or caricatured Dominant! How can we come to believe that a person like Blake cannot choose a more settled life. but Sorry at one point I can no longer follow your story, logical or else it's the NTR that is not going at all. For you it is clear but for us readers no. It's as if you were directing Batman Begins and then at one point you change the color of the costume to pink with green polka dots! I can assure you that despite a real quality of background you will see the film very differently!

Understand well I will do a complete story with your Walktrough but I am used to making stories freely at the beginning to take advantage of the immersion and judge the quality. I love that this story is long but if I learn along the way that the IRIS path is blocked and is only allowed with a fake relationship with an old fart, then I will stop before the end because it becomes mental torture.
to answer to you: because his old teacher is an adventurer maybe?
I even asked myself: If Blake commits suicide (let's imagine that she realizes that her life is meaningless) how many people would come to see her on her grave? Well since I am currently in the chapter in Deliverance, I will say: 0. Well after 4 days of play I must say that it is more than disturbing and saying: you have chosen your path badly ..... is not a sufficient answer unfortunately.

Mate, I read your words but I completely fail to understand their meaning.

I do my 1st playthrough completely blind and I got almost exactly what I was looking for. I missed Brees sexual pass. But I cannot see this is a disadvantage as this VN is SO big that it requires atleast 2 more playthroughs for me to see the content I am interested in.

And they will feel as fresh as the 1st one due to the abundance of branches.

From your reaction about the type of relationships I would assume that you maybe got a little bit too lost in Yedas world. I would see this rather as a testament of how good the writing and the story creation is than a complaint about certain choices being final or the way they are.

The great thing about it: you can always go back, make other choices and see where they lead you. For Most characters imho it is not going to be a surprise how they react.

Cheers!

 

[jackdanniels]

Mate, read your words but I completely fail to understand their meaning.

I do my 1st playthrough completely blind and I got almost exactly what I was looking for. I missed Brees sexual pass. But I cannot see this is a disadvantage as this VN is SO big that it requires atleast 2 more playthroughs for me to see the content I am interested in.

And they will feel as fresh as the 1st one due to the abundance of branches.

From your reaction about the type of relationships I would assume that you maybe got a little bit too lost in Yedas world. I would see this rather as a testament of how good the writing and the story creation is than a complaint about certain choices being final or the way they are.

The great thing about it: you can always go back, make other choices and see where they lead you. For Most characters imho it is not going to be a surprise how they react.

Cheers!

I couldn't put it better. I'm too cynical and bad with words, sometimes.

 

[xizaaR]

Can you cross Suya and Iris true path in one playthrough?

 

[jackdanniels]

Can you cross Suya and Iris true path in one playthrough?

Nope. You can start with Iris letting her kiss Blake, but if you engage with Suya later, the route with Iris simply dies out.

 

[Yebratha]

Updated my Android port to v0.22

Hey man look, I don't want to bother ya but I've done exactly what was said.

It asked to put the archive.rpa in the thing, which I've done but the game doesnt load long before it crashes. Am I doing something wrong? Does it need *More* space? Is this a message from the universe?

Unless somebody else has an idea

 

[Wills747]

Hey man look, I don't want to bother ya but I've done exactly what was said.

It asked to put the archive.rpa in the thing, which I've done but the game doesnt load long before it crashes. Am I doing something wrong? Does it need *More* space? Is this a message from the universe?

Unless somebody else has an idea

Can you upload log.txt? (Folder above /game)
It may be a message from the universe but hopefully we can work out what it's saying.

 

[Yebratha]

Can you upload log.txt? (Folder above /game)
It may be a message from the universe but hopefully we can work out what it's saying.

Well I mean....it just closes. I've had that before with files notplaced properly or somehow notworking but supposedly placing the thingshould work, right?

I also realise I mayhaps misplaced mybrain

 

[dav121]

21gig. Is there a bigger game on this site? I think not. In all fairness, KUDOS to the dev..

 

[erosp]

i tried to play alla possible routes but god there are many.....my head hurt for trying

 

[Wills747]

Well I mean....it just closes. I've had that before with files notplaced properly or somehow notworking but supposedly placing the thingshould work, right?

I also realise I mayhaps misplaced mybrain

Some earlier Android versions have trouble handling RPA files (more commonly Samsbung 7.0/7.1)
Try this, delete original archive.rpa and extract the contents of game.7z into game folder (same place as deleted archive.rpa)

game.7z

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[Yebratha]

Some earlier Android versions have trouble handling RPA files (more commonly Samsbung 7.0/7.1)
Try this, delete original archive.rpa and extract the contents of game.7z into game folder (same place as deleted archive.rpa)

game.7z
Mega

Yeah, it's going now.

Cheers friendly plane!

 

[YedaGames]

I recently released a new demo for v0.23 which should be penultimate for this update (if everything goes right, and it never does). Available on Patreon.

 

[Charroumane]

After some pretty harsh posts about my first blind try of the game which honestly had me terribly frustrated, I come here again to say that I have, since then, done several complete courses using the official guide.
The results are quite different and sincerely, after Jack Daniel's advice, I completed the VANESSA path and I really liked it and I pray that this relationship lasts and has a Happy ending. In this path I opted for a Dominant position turned Woman and suddenly I appreciated Blake's evolution much more including his relationship with Melinda and Rebecca. This also allowed me to better understand the background of the story, the secrets....
YEDA so I thank you for your enormous scriptwriting work and I must say that the main LIs and many secondary ones are really magnificent. Finally, our only disagreement is about Rebecca who in my opinion would have deserved a path (maybe later obviously) in love with Blake, just like Melinda who at one point could lose her initial choices to enter in particular in the last chapters towards a balanced romantic relationship with Blake. After all, doesn't Blake act towards Rebecca and Melinda as a "healing" character of their lack of compassion, love......
Finally IRIS, the beautiful IRIS that only her sister surpasses (in my opinion) remains for me a big sentimental disappointment. I foresee for the continuation but I will really wait for the following update(s) to do it because it is a path strewn with frustrations.

To close: If Blake could in the continuations of the evolving story by reading a little, take the lead following certain information that he learns it would be a huge plus in this Monumental and well-crafted story! Thank you YEDA and I must say that only one other AVN has given me such determination to try other paths, it's BADIK

 

[WomenWorshiper]

Is there already a romantic netorase/submissive cuckold route with Rebecca?
I'm waiting literally years for this to return to play! ;-;

 

[jackdanniels]

Is there already a romantic netorase/submissive cuckold route with Rebecca?
I'm waiting literally years for this to return to play! ;-;

No. Just some trivial sexual things, like Blake can be her fuckbuddy or 'friends with benefenits' also can dominate her. I was expecting some sharing at least in those sub sub sub routes, but it's just some random events, nothing romantic.

 

[WomenWorshiper]

No. Just some trivial sexual things, like Blake can be her fuckbuddy or 'friends with benefenits' also can dominate her. I was expecting some sharing at least in those sub sub sub routes, but it's just some random events, nothing romantic.

 

[YedaGames]

Is there already a romantic netorase/submissive cuckold route with Rebecca?
I'm waiting literally years for this to return to play! ;-;

This isn't something that's in the game yet but I was planning on adding more Rebecca's events, and expanding them as well, after the game is finished. They won't really be ntr-oriented as Blake isn't and won't be in a formal relationship with her but some kind of teasing/controlling dynamic, hopefully, will be implemented.

 

[reidanota]

This isn't something that's in the game yet but I was planning on adding more Rebecca's events, and expanding them as well, after the game is finished. They won't really be ntr-oriented as Blake isn't and won't be in a formal relationship with her but some kind of teasing/controlling dynamic, hopefully, will be implemented.

He should get a piece of the pie, too, if you pardon my language. I like it that changed Rebecca can be nice to Blake. I steer clear of the more masochistic routes (not criticizing those who don't). Still haven't played up to dom Blake so I don't know how well he owns the fact that he gets laid with multiple people, while also being on one character's main route, but I like that you can play that way.

 

[YedaGames]

He should get a piece of the pie, too, if you pardon my language. I like it that changed Rebecca can be nice to Blake. I steer clear of the more masochistic routes (not criticizing those who don't). Still haven't played up to dom Blake so I don't know how well he owns the fact that he gets laid with multiple people, while also being on one character's main route, but I like that you can play that way.

Dominant Blake is a pleasure-seeker but only within your own limits. And Rebecca does get tamed by Blake relatively easily. After all, she's a pretty simple girl, so pushing her buttons isn't that difficult. Of course, being a bimbo influences that as well.

 

[Charroumane]

Blake le dominant est un assoiffé de plaisir, mais seulement dans ses propres limites. Et Rebecca se laisse apprivoiser par Blake assez facilement. Après tout, c'est une fille plutôt simple, donc la pousser à bout n'est pas si difficile. Bien sûr, être une bimbo influence aussi cela.
[/CITATION]
Ce sera formidable de voir Rebecca comme une partenaire aimante de Blake uniquement sur la route de sa mère : style une sœur aimante !
Please Yeda : a good happy story for Blake and Vanessa and IRIS too ^^