Solid start. The renders do look weird sometimes, kind of blurry sometimes or models look clay or blurry like or something just looks off, so hope those can get cleaned up in future, but you are probably a newer dev, so not the biggest issue. There are some grammar issues as well, maybe I can help point some of those out, in the future, when I have time to run through game again.
I am glad there is femdom, it is one of my fav kinks, but I do hope we get some romance mixed with the femdom, like at end girl says we are her toy, etc, but I hope maybe she begins to catch feelings and soften up and we get romance with the femdom, like cuddling after, post femdom check ins and kisses, etc. Cause I love that type of femdom. I love being her toy or dog, but then the girl showing love also.