- Aug 10, 2019
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- Thread starter Zemax
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Interesting game.
I will say that none of the sex scenes landed particularly strongly except the Game Over one. The others felt a bit too....vanilla? Which feels weird to say considering one of them was the player being brainwashed and the other was him fucking the inside of a girls arm.
One thing that could be improved is giving the player more options for how the MC feels about certain situations, like during the first scene giving the option to submit or continuing resisting (both having the same outcome but different text).
For the second scene I think instead of refusing the alliance resulting in a game over, instead have her rape the MC and force him to agree (same scene, just with different text) which would not only be a hot alternative to the existing scene, but would also get rid of the fake choice that's really just "Game Over" or not "Game Over".
Anyways, that's just my opinion. The renders and animations are really nice, I just think the game feels a bit too much like a kinetic novel at the moment, with no options to shape the MC's personality and most of the few "choices" being between a Game Over/loop and the choice that actually continues the story.
I will say that none of the sex scenes landed particularly strongly except the Game Over one. The others felt a bit too....vanilla? Which feels weird to say considering one of them was the player being brainwashed and the other was him fucking the inside of a girls arm.
One thing that could be improved is giving the player more options for how the MC feels about certain situations, like during the first scene giving the option to submit or continuing resisting (both having the same outcome but different text).
For the second scene I think instead of refusing the alliance resulting in a game over, instead have her rape the MC and force him to agree (same scene, just with different text) which would not only be a hot alternative to the existing scene, but would also get rid of the fake choice that's really just "Game Over" or not "Game Over".
Anyways, that's just my opinion. The renders and animations are really nice, I just think the game feels a bit too much like a kinetic novel at the moment, with no options to shape the MC's personality and most of the few "choices" being between a Game Over/loop and the choice that actually continues the story.