RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.79] [Fujino]

[Infeno2.0]

Are we in the "NTR fatigue" era of NTR stories now? Like with superhero movies? Can we expect more deconstruction of NTR tropes now? LOL!


I been feeling a lot less sympathetic towards Kirito lately. Maybe it is because I am making him to do choices that get him action from other girls. Maybe it is because he and Asuna are just not spending anytime together. But that is the direct result of EVERYONE forcing them apart so it is not his fault. I don't know if Kirito's unintentional popular kids looking down at the unpopular kids (Inoda) attitude was meant to make us feel like he is should be cucked. But it just doesn't make me like this Kirito. This is a fanfiction after all. Even if the characters doesn't act like their canon selves it is alright. It is not like anything that happens in this story will make us change our opinions about the canon characters, right?

Is not me sayng it is the market, I wouldn't say "NTR fatigue", but more as stale genre with nothing new, you can tell just check how many doujinshi about incest/ntr are been released every week, many authors are seeing the necessity to try something new.
The problem with Kirito even in the canon SAO is the fact he is a OP poorly written caracter thats why he is not liked.
Here like you said is a parody/fan ficition with a lot of potential and very good ideas by Fujino, but not much different of many others ntr based games, You awake up, go into the map, do somenthing, you see somenthing happening and can't do nothing about it, log into the game maybe something happen or not them you endup at the memory room, rinse and repeat.
Instead why not change the POV or let the player cockblock the bull that would be funny.

 

[kinglionheart]

I might genuinely like Suguha more after playing the game, but this might be a side-effect of me exaggerating my feelings for the meme here.

More like you been hanging out with a bad crowd.

Hanging out with Suguhaphiles like Alter and 4-kun long enough will turn anyone into a raging Suguha fanatic unless you already have a unhealthy obsession with someone else like me.

Not trying to shame you Suguha mains out there. It is all in good fun!

 

[4-kun]

More like you been hanging out with a bad crowd.

Hanging out with Suguhaphiles like Alter and 4-kun long enough will turn anyone into a raging Suguha fanatic unless you already have a unhealthy obsession with someone else like me.

Not trying to shame you Suguha mains out there. It is all in good fun!

Well, I like her story and charater the most, so I’m rooting for her in this installment. so for now, I’ll draw as many people into the Suguha fan club as possible.

but that doesn’t mean I’ll go and read the LN or watch all the seasons of the anime

 

[4-kun]

are there any inodaphiles too? lol

Like the majority, no?

 

[4-kun]

afaik, the majority hates him

I've a feeling the majority hates Kirito

 

[kinglionheart]

afaik, the majority hates him

I've a feeling the majority hates Kirito

Call me a hetro but I just don't have strong feelings for any of the men one way or the other.

 

[Silent Anu]

btw is there a gallery in part 2? If yes, can i have a save file for it please

 

[Aniky Light]

I've a feeling the majority hates Kirito

I hate everyone, I hate Kirito because he's stupid, I hate Asuna because she makes things too easy for Inoda that he no longer needs to bribe her, I hate Liz because she's a bastard like Inoda, I hate Asuna's mother (she should mind her own business and not dictate rules) but Above all, I hate Inoda because he's a slimy worm who takes advantage of Asuna when he has the chance, you die badly, you fat bastard.

only those who are saved are: Suguha, Alice, Shinon, Klein, because the only ones who didn't give me a nervous breakdown

 

[The Jailer]

I hate everyone, I hate Kirito because he's stupid, I hate Asuna because she makes things too easy for Inoda that he no longer needs to bribe her, I hate Liz because she's a bastard like Inoda, I hate Asuna's mother (she should mind her own business and not dictate rules) but Above all, I hate Inoda because he's a slimy worm who takes advantage of Asuna when he has the chance, you die badly, you fat bastard.

only those who are saved are: Suguha, Alice, Shinon, Klein, because the only ones who didn't give me a nervous breakdown

real question, if you hate the game like that why do you follow it ? (i hope you dont take it bad its a geniune question !)
Because for me it's a NTR game all that's happening is normal, Asuna is gonna be dumb and make it easy for Inoda or there will be not ntr at all...
And if you look at the past games fujino made the MC is MUCH MUCH dumber than kirito lmao like look at this dialogue (btw i didnt read / watch SAO so maybe thats why iam not so attached to the character and how fujino portrait them ? idk maybe)

 

[Saisoul25]

How to fix this bug?

 

[Infeno2.0]

Asuna is gonna be dumb and make it easy for Inoda or there will be not ntr at all...
And if you look at the past games fujino made the MC is MUCH MUCH dumber than kirito lmao like look at this dialogue (btw i didnt read / watch SAO so maybe thats why iam not so attached to the character and how fujino portrait them ? idk maybe)

Yeah, but there is a limit for how dumb the MC/FMC can be before the plot goes to shit, because after this point there is no story anymore just repetition remember you never go full retard.
Nah to enjoy games like this (Which is a good game overall) you can't sympathize with anyone you are there just for the ride, Fujino knows this, because if you think about it nobody is likeable, Kirito is a OP morom, Asuna is a dumb slut, Inoda a slime motherfucker you got the jist.

 

[The Jailer]

Yeah, but there is a limit for how dumb the MC/FMC can be before the plot goes to shit, because after this point there is no story anymore just repetition remember you never go full retard.
Nah to enjoy games like this (Which is a good game overall) you can't sympathize with anyone you are there just for the ride, Fujino knows this, because if you think about it nobody is likeable, Kirito is a OP morom, Asuna is a dumb slut, Inoda a slime motherfucker you got the jist.

yeah and i agree with you for the stupid mc but (for me at least) Kirito is not that stupid for me when you compare to his other game... and he was suspicious at some point in the game (not so much lately yeah) so i dont think fujino will go full retard with him

 

[Infeno2.0]

yeah and i agree with you for the stupid mc but (for me at least) Kirito is not that stupid for me when you compare to his other game... and he was suspicious at some point in the game (not so much lately yeah) so i dont think fujino will go full retard with him

Well theres even a Anxiety Bar to show that but, that never will go 100% i think otherwise would be game over.
Suspicious kind of, he still let his girlfriend hangout alone with other guy in his apartment, which by the way is glued to his how the hell he nerver notice anything, see thats why everyone thinks Fujino is making him way to stupid because the plot ask for it

 

[4-kun]

Yeah, but there is a limit for how dumb the MC/FMC can be before the plot goes to shit, because after this point there is no story anymore just repetition remember you never go full retard.
Nah to enjoy games like this (Which is a good game overall) you can't sympathize with anyone you are there just for the ride, Fujino knows this, because if you think about it nobody is likeable, Kirito is a OP morom, Asuna is a dumb slut, Inoda a slime motherfucker you got the jist.

Actually, Kirito isn't OP in Fujinos universe, in this AU he wasn't able to save Asuna, instead her Father somehow manage to save her.
As for his brain, well yeah, the characters got downgraded to some extent, but in part 2 it doesn't even matter, he could be the smartest guy in the world, but because of the Admin he can't get suspicious at all

 

[Infeno2.0]

Actually, Kirito isn't OP in Fujinos universe, in this AU he wasn't able to save Asuna, instead her Father somehow manager to save her.
As for his brain, well yeah, the characters got downgraded to some extent, but in part 2 it doesn't even matter, he could be the smartest guy in the world, but because of the Admin he can't get suspicious at all

I see well i only watch the first seasson and a just 2 episodes of AU.
In the FOG yes, but this also apply IRL? i cant see how.
I think in the end all this is more due to Fujino listening to his patreons, the story got bloated with too many side charecters and also how he keep the 1 month update pace, he has to use some plot conveniences. Let us see in the next update

 

[4-kun]

I see well i only watch the first seasson and a just 2 episodes of AU.
In the FOG yes, but this also apply IRL? i cant see how.
I think in the end all this is more due to Fujino listening to his patreons, the story got bloated with too many side charecters and also how he keep the 1 month update pace, he has to use some plot conveniences. Let us see in the next update

Actually, it’s the other way around. She doesn’t seem to do much in FOG, because Inoda's ability is already beyond broken, so there is no need. But she literally deletes Kirito’s suspicions in real life. For example, if you watch scenes on your PC, there’s a notification that his memories fade once you finish watching.

Yeah, too many characters, but at least Alice's story will be finished soon, it seems.

 

[Infeno2.0]

Actually, it’s the other way around. She doesn’t seem to do much in FOG, because Inoda's ability is already beyond broken, so there is no need. But she literally deletes Kirito’s suspicions in real life. For example, if you watch scenes on your PC, there’s a notification that his memories fade once you finish watching.

wow now you mentioned i never knew why he lost his memory after look inoda's blog.
That just lazy writing

 

[Misarmor]

That just lazy writing

Sad but true. The whole Administrator thing has been the most obvious lazy plot device I've seen in a while.

 

[4-kun]

wow now you mentioned i never new why he lost his memory after look inoda's blog.
That just lazy writing

To be fair, there is at least an explanation, even though I don’t like the whole godly interference in real life stuff. In other games, the MC is just too dumb to make a 100% obvious conclusion. But yeah, still lazy writing

 

[Infeno2.0]

To be fair, there is at least an explanation, even though I don’t like the whole godly interference in real life stuff. In other games, the MC is just too dumb to make a 100% obvious conclusion. But yeah, still lazy writing

If thats is the case, we not going to get any story progression for a foreseeable future, a bunch of sex scenes (wihch is cool) is on the menu. But see that is the problem with plot conveniences the story will be frozen until Fujino remove the admin BS.