RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.79] [Fujino]

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Lurker600

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Was hoping more like the previous update where Asuna slowly willing to give sexual service while having casual conversation, that was gold and unseen on NTR anywhere else. But I guess it's straight to fucking nonstop then.

Seeing how fast she fell IRL make the majority of the first part of the second game feel pointless to me. He could've make the quarantine happen on the first update and it wouldn't make much of a difference. But hey we got some bangers out of it so I'm not complaining.

And to be fair I get why he did that, even I kinda hate how invested I'm on this game at this point lol. Hope he wrap it soon and with a bang.
 
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Any Predictions for next update?

It was a good update(although we're missing the cg again), honestly i kinda predicted that the ritual was going to be a success
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and once they got back to the hotel inoda once again wormed his way into more having sex with her just like part 1 and at this point asuna no longer has the will to resist him again lol she is now truly fallen with no hope of recovery. Now liz still needs to fall i think the next updates we'll actually be more inoda and liz than asuna. This is probably the most guilty asuna is going to feel after she leaves the hotel which means she'll probably do everything in her power to spend time with kirito and avoid inoda (obviously at some point she will go back to him, probably when sex with kirito isn't enough) to try and justify herself in someway then during that time liz and inoda will be forced to be with each other while they probably try to plan for a way to separate kirito and asuna irl, which means perfect time for inoda to work his super luck big dick trope on liz. hell next updates might be asuna catching liz and inoda in the act then when asuna confronts liz about it liz will say how she knows asuna and inoda have been fucking which will basically force them to be on the same side as they now have dirt on each other :unsure:
 
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I also think that continuing with another route including a BBC is unnecessary since it would become very generic where the Black guy type steals the waifu and if there were it would be a different one without INODA appearing, but it would not call my attention, certainly the fact that Asuna thinks about telling everything to Cuckito as she says in her update is simply having hypocrisy engraved on her face and the fact that she gets angry because of worse monitoring is just a cheap excuse, I wonder at what point Liz will throw in her face that she already knows everything she does, sometime there must come a time, with Yui it is clear that she is Inoda's daughter now the only way I see for Kyoko to enter the scene quickly and have a threesome with ASUNA included is for there to be a strong fight or fight between mother and daughter and INODA somehow solve it and Cuckito looks bad or like an idiot, and Asuna realizing that the other did nothing, anyway even Cuckito's parameters are very high above 800 maybe now that IRL sex has started those numbers will go down the drain.
I think there's a lack of more IRL sex scenes in that part. Maybe He'll add it later or with Asuna's POV. I found two more scenes in the images, which are kind of weird, by the way. XD
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Guys, this is expeteced the game felling rushed when it is almost over nothing new here, many plot points will be left to a side, some plot holes will be cover and others will appear.
The way Fujino structure the the game it's the cause of this sensation of things being rushed in the end, but that does not mean he did it wrong, just he lacked the experience to tell/pace a long story like this one.
Any story only have, most of the time, one single thread from beggining to end tying everething, here always was Asuna/Inoda affair.
I can see the game was split in 5 parts more or less,
0.01(0.05) to 0.20 This was basically the part 1 recap and introdcution for the part 2 nothing major happen here

0.20 to 0.40 more introduction of new characters, new plot lines, but we were back to first part ending, Asuna and Inoda having sex again in the Treehouse event, the pacing here was ok, but the build up was way too long, almost 9 updates for the first sex scene after the part 1.

0.40 to 0.60 introduction again villain (council, church) and their plan(plot twist), here is where Fujino lost the track about the pacing, because more than half of the story had gone by and he was introducing new plot lines, the story became so convoluted/bloated the main thread was left aside with no sense of progression, we had several FOG sex scenes, but they start to fell more like a looping instead of a plot build up.

0.60 to 0.80 (now) Finally some development/delivery, but since we didin't have a proper build up prior to this we getting this felling of rushed things, Fujino should had introduced the first IRL sex scene like 3 or 2 updates ago with a conflicted Asuna afterwards and now would make much more sense she becoming Inoda sex friend.
The ritual arc was a good idea, a way to justify her getting pregnant without being completely broken, the quarantine hotel was missed oportunity by Fujino, too much blueball/foreplay.

0.80 to 1.00 It will be cramped, because Fujino has no other choice, he cant fix the pace now, and Asuna will have to fall fast in order for the plot be able to happen.
 
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