Pretty good overall.
I enjoy darker stories, especially in game form.
The animations i felt were really good, as well as the models felt really well done(not in terms of fidelity but just attractive non plastic feel)
I think its very well done in terms of the production side, if most games had visuals/animation like these this would be a huge step up overall.
so why only 4 stars?
The writing is nothing special, its not bad its not mid but its not great either.
This might be a very specific personal problem, but having redundant prompts. example: "she opens her eyes" click "and then she" click " looks back at him" click "and says" click... etc etc. you get the point. I feel like in a game that takes around 20minutes to explore from start to finish with out skipping takes 800 clicks. You can have the opposite problem aswell. By having too much text and drowning in endless smut fiction.
Overall cutting to different angles having one word or two words prompts doesn't add OR adds so little it becomes meaningless. Feels like needs an improved writing angle or storyboarding in a more sophisticated way.
Lastly.
Maybe im missing something, i didn't visit the patreon and maybe theres 9 chapters worth of content, but i played this game mabye 3 or 2 and a half years ago. It has one chapter? and it doesn't even seem finished to me either. Not like im paying for this so i dont know if its fair for me to complain. But still its a negative.
I wrote more negative things then positive about this project but overall im just giving engagement and hoping this helps, overall the games good you did a great job. Hope you continue your work .
I enjoy darker stories, especially in game form.
The animations i felt were really good, as well as the models felt really well done(not in terms of fidelity but just attractive non plastic feel)
I think its very well done in terms of the production side, if most games had visuals/animation like these this would be a huge step up overall.
so why only 4 stars?
The writing is nothing special, its not bad its not mid but its not great either.
This might be a very specific personal problem, but having redundant prompts. example: "she opens her eyes" click "and then she" click " looks back at him" click "and says" click... etc etc. you get the point. I feel like in a game that takes around 20minutes to explore from start to finish with out skipping takes 800 clicks. You can have the opposite problem aswell. By having too much text and drowning in endless smut fiction.
Overall cutting to different angles having one word or two words prompts doesn't add OR adds so little it becomes meaningless. Feels like needs an improved writing angle or storyboarding in a more sophisticated way.
Lastly.
Maybe im missing something, i didn't visit the patreon and maybe theres 9 chapters worth of content, but i played this game mabye 3 or 2 and a half years ago. It has one chapter? and it doesn't even seem finished to me either. Not like im paying for this so i dont know if its fair for me to complain. But still its a negative.
I wrote more negative things then positive about this project but overall im just giving engagement and hoping this helps, overall the games good you did a great job. Hope you continue your work .