- Oct 30, 2019
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Dude that would suck!The slow flow of content is definitely not in the writing, but in the coding and art. Once they set up enough flags for most relevant events, then they would have these checks for "I'm a boy/girl", and if going for neutral terms, then they wouldn't be referencing either of the former, probably.
See the issue is, the basic fact the protagonist is male is not just something the narration has an occasional throwaway line acknowledging. the sex scenes mostly aren't written such that the person receiving the dicks could be an ambiguous generic human body if not for the odd line directly stating "I can't believe this is happening to me even though I'm a boy"
It's woven in! There are entire scenes where the specific sex act is happening because it's what the relevant lady thought would be specifically humiliating to force a boy to deal with. there's no way to flag that.
And for obvious reasons this is really good, it's good writing to make things really matter in the narration like that, but fact is if you wanted a girl protagonist you'd be rewriting like a third of the total word count.
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