VN Ren'Py Temptation [v0.21] [XRSCZ Games]

[Forgotted]

The men are minor characters that I still have to work on a lot, this is just a small sample.

You might want to put this in the first post or you'll be repeating it over and over and over.

Since this is a demo? You might want to mention this as well.

Maybe even the Kinetic Novel tag or a mention of it since it's not a game at this point.


Cheers and Best of Luck!

 

[Canto Forte]

First game playthrough:

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[xmilteach]

thx

 

[XRSCZ GAMES]

You might want to put this in the first post or you'll be repeating it over and over and over.

Since this is a demo? You might want to mention this as well.

Maybe even the Kinetic Novel tag or a mention of it since it's not a game at this point.


Cheers and Best of Luck!

Corrected Thank you for your reply

 

[XRSCZ GAMES]

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I know the game is short, I will continue to improve it, I just needed feedback from players on what needs to be improved. The scene with the young man is a dream, not reality, thank you.

 

[Fzoner95]

Sims with AI ... I like the idea.

 

[Cabin]

The protagonist is a woman, there will be more characters.

Ooh now u got my attention. Will check it out

 

[Lion18]

Grandpa seems her brother.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The art is good. I see potential in the game. There is not enough content to comment on, really. Maybe work on grammar and syntax.

 

[XRSCZ GAMES]

Grandpa seems her brother.

I'll improve it, there's still room for improvement.

 

[XRSCZ GAMES]

The art is good. I see potential in the game. There is not enough content to comment on, really. Maybe work on grammar and syntax.

Yes, I know, it's my first time playing with ai and renpy. I definitely want to keep doing it, I'm enjoying it.

 

[Lion18]

I'll improve it, there's still room for improvement.

Yeah mine was a simply feedback, I did't want to be rude.

 

[cry32wolf]

is NTR planned for future updates?

 

[XRSCZ GAMES]

is NTR planned for future updates?

Yes

 

[cry32wolf]

Yes

on top of my wishlist than.

 

[ohwonders]

Meh.. I generally stay away from games with ai cg tag, but I had to check it out after seeing the protagonists tits. To my disappointment, how the tits looked changed in the handful of renders. So, I'll just take this as a lesson to keep staying away from ai cg tagged games

Brief opinion: this was a weak way to start your game-making journey. Not a fan of the introduction, the dialogues, AI not being consistent.. Got a long way to go before it'll become anything above average

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Geigi]

Cringe.

 

[justnolol]

Why do granddaughter and granddad look like the same age?

 

[XRSCZ GAMES]

Why do granddaughter and granddad look like the same age?

This issue will be fixed in the next update.