After playing THS and both parts of 2nd Chance my opinion is as follows.
The basic story is good, but there really should be a revised/improved new version of all 3. There are several continuity errors and a big lack of respect for the players choices, like putting a steering wheel on a train,no matter how you turn it only goes one way, also several misspellings/wrong word that alter the meaning compleatly. It is excessive in the side stories in some cases and verry lacking in others, to much filler that has no real meaning in the end just make it longer not better. For example, Viktor, is not really needed at all. The Mc is a bit player in his own story, more so in part 2. It lacks focus on the main person, the player/Mc, like he is only a inconvenience you drag along. It makes the player feel un important, not a good move for a gripping and engaging story.
The claim that the "THS" prequel to this must be a certain way to fit 2nd is also not true. In part 1 it is barely mentioned and in part 2 it is just weird.
To ask her to F Mr. Q with no prior events at all no "training" just jump in and prostitute yourself cause you might get some money and/or good will from this (to her) unknown bunch of perverts would piss off any woman with self respect. If you introduced her to the option of THS in part 1 with the Mc just after he found the sd card and built bit by bit to initiation and beyond it would possibly be a option. The Mc should of cause be her master and not some random (again, to her) perv.
And the "school", why? Make the Mc an agent and a "master" in THS and any/all of the girls could be his. At least make the Mc the principal and 50% owner, now he's a teacher's assistant at best with no say what so ever, dependant on the good will of his girlfriend, the Mc is basically a cuck.
Grade so far: Has potential but is not ready for publication.