VN - Ren'Py - The Abyss [v0.1.4] [Black Pearl Game]

Very nice idea! Good plot, beautiful models. But english is awful, it breaks all the pleasure from the game. Also, lack of content makes the game quite boring. Fetishes are not progressing, despite all the characters are completely up to more stuff.

In general - a good start, but english is something you should really think about and fix somehow.

What a disgusting trash, there are some sick games on this site but this... How sick can you be to come up with it. Missing tags of rape and slavery and everything in between. At least give people a warning when putingsomething like that in public. Dev should also go into therapy.

Visually attractive enough and with a story that at least contains the possibility of being interesting and different, this game is almost impossible to play because the dialogue is so choppy and disjointed that it is impossible to get a feel for any of the characters. The story would also need a lot of work to make it possible for the reader to suspend disbelief.

Some of the problems may be due to poor translation, but even with a perfect translation the game would still not give the layer any reason to choose one option over another, in those very few cases where a decision is even possible.

Bottom line: I can't see any sign that the dev is concerned with making the game interesting to the player, other than some visual candy.

I give 4 stars because it's true there are things I would have liked more, for example when he decides not to drink and dies, it could have been more branched out but it's only the beginning so it's acceptable.
The pictures could be better but the DEV is still early days so they will improve.
And then both the Dev and the language of the game are Italian.
Congratulations Pirate, keep it up.

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Do 4 stelle perchè è vero ci sarebbero cose che avrei voluto in più,esempio quando decide di non bere e muore,poteva essere più rammificata ma è solo l'inizio quindi è accettabile.
Le immagini potrebbero essere migliori ma il DEV è ancora all'inizio quindi miglioreranno.
E poi è Italiano sia il Dev che la lingua del gioco.
Complimenti Pirata continua cosi.