VN Ren'Py The Grey Dream [Ep.6 P1 Patreon Release] [TheGreys]

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Thrawcrazed339

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Nov 5, 2020
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A potential SG in the making, awesome renders, interesting characters, please do away with the transitions(constant need to roll back), i am sure the story will become more interesting with new updates, if the Dev can improve the update pace surely it will be a hit.
That Beth BDSM thing was fucking good(those complaining shouldn't gag the dev and just not snoop around with that spy cam), the MCs good too at least not some ill face maniac. Really enjoyed hope to see episode 3 soon.:coffee:(y)
 
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Ingfire

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Is it possible to update the script/grammar to be less...awkward? At times? There's a very blatant lack of contractions, which leads to characters sounding robotic in their speech. Overall, a full spelling/grammar proofreading pass wouldn't hurt.

Just during the coffee shop scene, using "you're" instead of "you are", "I'm" instead of "I am", "Isn't" instead of "Is not", when MC is talking casually to the barista, Kelly, or even the thoughts in his own head, flow so much better and make more sense logically.
 
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offset8

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Aug 16, 2017
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Honestly, this game has no sense at all when talking about the plot. Is so weirdly paced, so many jumps that is hard/impossible to keep track of what is actually going on. Amazing renders, but the plot makes no sense.

You start working in a really important company, two episodes and we don't really know what is the MC position, the first day and instead of them explaining your role in the company, a random virgin shows you around the building, who will go to the company's gym on the first day?

Then the glory hole scene, you go to a skateplace, and the in the parking lot, the room is all white? In the ski resort, she says no, and then what? cutscene and back to a random scene and the game finishing.

What a waste of renders.
 
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Jericho85

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Swordsman83 said:
what's sigma male ? is it beta ?
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Havik79 said:
Simga is lone wolf tossers.
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homejorz said:
Cringe term used by dorks
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Swordsman83 said:
but this game girls like sigma more than alpha
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There was a discussion about this a while ago but yeah, the use of "sigma" and "alpha" in the coding are not accurate. The choices that add "alpha" points are very much not in alignment with an Alpha personality type, and the same is true with the "sigma" choices. I'm not really sure why the dev chose to label the variables in that way, except for a complete misunderstanding of those personality types.
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

The samples and summary made me come. And the result is fantastic.

The worldbuilding is well thought and varied.
The characters are few and different.
The plot seems interesting.
The artistic side is very well done.

The ride was really fun. All the characters, outside Helen, are nice. The flow of events is well integrated and feels natural. The models are all beautiful. Even the male ones are attractive. The sex scenes are well done. The dicks are realist and not just a big straight piece of meat. The sperm didn't look like plaster as usual either. The skin is asking for kisses and licking. Good work on the expressions too.
I was expecting some consequences for staying up late the day before going to the Mountain Ridge.
The side story was good. The MC was even better looking with some stubbles on.
The music is louder than usual, though it fits the atmosphere.

A default name would be welcomed (having to chose X not to have a blank space isn't ideal).
My only complain would be all those ???? on characters that aren't introduced like the guy working at the golf.

The last two galleries aren't unlocked even though I tried them after my first playthrough. It even leads to a black screen from which we have no other choice but to close the application since nothing work anymore.

Good continuation.
 
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tydog99

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Apr 26, 2022
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Very short (I think the first episode took me like 20 minutes? Second a bit longer though), but it's good so far. Renders are fantastic and girls look great too. Hopefully future chapters/episodes will be longer. I do think a proofreader is definitely needed, I noticed more than a few mistakes that may just be from English not being the first language of the writer. Either way, look forward to the next update.
 
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shivz889

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Jul 19, 2017
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Guy's my saves from episode are not working when im trying to start the side story, the game just ends at ehere episode 2 ended. any help?
 
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Havik79

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shivz889 said:
Guy's my saves from episode are not working when im trying to start the side story, the game just ends at ehere episode 2 ended. any help?
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Your saves are working, there is no main content, you have to click start and then do the side story.
 
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ThaDude1977

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Some say theres not much content so far, but theres like 4 gigs to download even the compressed is 2.5 gigs
 
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