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really? damn, that's great, yeah I was checking it with a mod
good news, she will be a good competitor for Anna (in my playthrough at least hahah)
just look at this cutie:
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Yeah, I went checked the coding after I read your post, cause she's sitting as my #1 at the moment.really? damn, that's great, yeah I was checking it with a mod
good news, she will be a good competitor for Anna (in my playthrough at least hahah)
just look at this cutie:
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my top list so far would be:nope, you're not the only one, so, slow down there, tiger
BTW thanks for recommendation man, it's definitely not slowburn romance, but I enjoyed the story so far, the writing is... it could be polished let's just say, but renders and LIs are of HQ, somehow I managed to spend 20+ hrs on it already
out of all girls I am into Anna, Lisa & Lily, though Lily doesn't even have RP bar, so I doubt she is a LI, it's strange considering how many content we got already with her comparing to Lisa for example, if she was a LI - I think she would be probably my #1, as of right now it's Anna
1) Anna
2) Lily
3) Lisa (need more content with her but she is interesting) / Beth (I would like to tame that dominating bitch heheh)
I love how easy going Anna and Lily are, feel very comfortable around them, they know how to crack a joke or they can be serious. And while Lily more acts like our Bro (at least so far), with Anna you can kiss, cuddle and simply watch a movie, that home hangout with her was sweet. I didn't like the way she was introduced in a game and how we hooked up the 1st time, but I really grew on her after some time.
We had some sweet moments with Kelly but it always feels like she is on the edge or smth... So it made me avoid her in a favor of Lily.
As for Haley/Helen - I just don't want to be dragged into sisters drama, Helen is our EX (and I still stick to "EX should remain EX" hahah ), and Haley is her sister and all that stuff, but out of two of them if I had to choose - I would go with Helen I think.
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Besides me just liking the whole getting back together with EX's thing. It really depends on the game for me if i'm playing that path because I just want to see it and I do like getting back together aspect or if the EX is actually a good character. Like im willing to get back together with Vulvamorth ( if you know you know) just to see it once. As i've seen a few they broke up because of bad luck / circumstances and no one is at fault but that is a bit more rare usually there is a reason for it in these games. Like im sure Helen became a Ex for good reasons in this game haha , seeing her attitude and how she acts sometimes.
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I restarted because I had been using the mod, and wasn't for sure if my save would work. Was hoping this would have been addressed from the first time I played. Kind of hard to read, for me at least, the way it is. Really could use a text box or something.
- Aug 27, 2017
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A patch so Haley's path doesn't get locked even if you do everything right.
The same happens with the version downloaded directly from Patreon.
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no idea about this update yet but for me the last 2 it got better and better especially the last one. Might just not be your cup of tea.
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Alright, I'll try to be more constructive.
It seems to me that the author didn't have a clear idea of the story from the beginning and is improvising a bit. My advice is to write all the narrative archs before developing the AVN.
There are also several problems with how the adult scenes are built.
There are too many characters that interfere with the stories of potential LIs. You don't see a character for half an hour then suddenly you meet them again and the relationship move ahead so quickly that you tell yourself "wow, that's a quick progression!".
Also, I like the casual sex but it lacks pathos and eroticism.
Man I know it's casual but this is just shallow.
My advice to improve a litte: try to focus on the most important characters, describe their feelings, write some dialogues with the MC where we can get an insight of what are they feeling.
In my opinion, the story isn't a progression of things the MC must do but a narration of how the relationships are built and progress then you build the story around this.
I hope this gives the developer some things to think about because I like this project and I don't want to see it descend into mediocrity. It's a 4 star rating on here which is already below the good quality treshold, let's hope it doesn't go below 4 stars.
It seems to me that the author didn't have a clear idea of the story from the beginning and is improvising a bit. My advice is to write all the narrative archs before developing the AVN.
There are also several problems with how the adult scenes are built.
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There are too many characters that interfere with the stories of potential LIs. You don't see a character for half an hour then suddenly you meet them again and the relationship move ahead so quickly that you tell yourself "wow, that's a quick progression!".
Also, I like the casual sex but it lacks pathos and eroticism.
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My advice to improve a litte: try to focus on the most important characters, describe their feelings, write some dialogues with the MC where we can get an insight of what are they feeling.
In my opinion, the story isn't a progression of things the MC must do but a narration of how the relationships are built and progress then you build the story around this.
I hope this gives the developer some things to think about because I like this project and I don't want to see it descend into mediocrity. It's a 4 star rating on here which is already below the good quality treshold, let's hope it doesn't go below 4 stars.
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I'm going to say it's the price to pay for updates taking so long to come out. They needed a sex scene with one of the LI and Kelly had to do since it was easier to justify story-wise, everyone is still in her path, she had never had a sex scene before, plus it still leaves people wanting for more with other characters like Haley that I feel are more popular. Sure, it could have had at least more buildup within the episode itself, but I think the scene was more shoehorned than planned and that's the result.
I enjoy this game, but really, the way the sex scenes are written, as in the dialogue while it's happening, is just not good. It feels like all the scenes are a version of the classic "MC, I love your big cock, fuck me with it, fill my pussy" poor smut writing you can find in a lot of bad fanfics.
As you say describing the feelings, sensation and so on would make things better since we can already see the action and we don't need a description of it.
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are you compressed for ep 5? i don't find any compressed for this game from search feature (i setting with Relevance).
- Jul 26, 2023
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I searched by Member using SonsOfLiberty and it was there.
https://thef95zone.info/threads/the-grey-dream-ep-5-thegreys.125324/post-14496360
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