StingerWolf

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Sep 5, 2017
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Can I be honest?
This VN would be better WITHOUT sex...

Story is good, characters interesting, and on the other hand, all of the sex scenes just sort of happen. Nothing to them.
I'm not calling them badly done, they just contribute absolutely nothing and lead to nothing.

Heck, for me anyway, it actually ruined a potentially really nice relationship between MC and...that girl that's his friend (sorry, I play this one only on releases and kind of forget names)...
It was just:
MC: "I'll visit her" (Is it Kelly?)
She: "Let's have sex, I wanted this for so long."
Sex happens
The end

And don't let me even get started on sex scenes with Anna (think that's her name).

I wish there was option to play PG-13 version of this one XD
I agree. Sex scenes are done really well, but they are absolutely not organic, they are just like inserts into something else. Another weakness: how can you guys distinguish between characters. Some ladies look almost like twins, with very few exceptions. I have to pay attention to names so that I don't mix them up.
 

Donnie Brasco

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Dec 15, 2018
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Can I be honest?
This VN would be better WITHOUT sex...

Story is good, characters interesting, and on the other hand, all of the sex scenes just sort of happen. Nothing to them.
I'm not calling them badly done, they just contribute absolutely nothing and lead to nothing.

Heck, for me anyway, it actually ruined a potentially really nice relationship between MC and...that girl that's his friend (sorry, I play this one only on releases and kind of forget names)...
It was just:
MC: "I'll visit her" (Is it Kelly?)
She: "Let's have sex, I wanted this for so long."
Sex happens
The end

And don't let me even get started on sex scenes with Anna (think that's her name).

I wish there was option to play PG-13 version of this one XD
The scene you described is very strange. It's pretty obvious from the start that Kelly has a crush on MC. And the sex scene comes off as something by the way. I'm not so sure she's only into sex. She is a girl who wants more than just sex in a way that sex comes from their relationship, not before it. And I'm not really a fan when there are a dozen girls in the story, each with their own personality. So that in the end, the gentlest and most romantic one would be treated like the easy one. But that's how it usually happens in all games of this type. The solution could be in more MCs. I don't know how practical it is to do, but at least the MC wouldn't have to fuck all the girls.
 

BenMeiffert

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The scene you described is very strange. It's pretty obvious from the start that Kelly has a crush on MC. And the sex scene comes off as something by the way. I'm not so sure she's only into sex. She is a girl who wants more than just sex in a way that sex comes from their relationship, not before it. And I'm not really a fan when there are a dozen girls in the story, each with their own personality. So that in the end, the gentlest and most romantic one would be treated like the easy one. But that's how it usually happens in all games of this type. The solution could be in more MCs. I don't know how practical it is to do, but at least the MC wouldn't have to fuck all the girls.
Yes, the scene with Kelly comes out of nowhere. MC shoud have needed to get news from Helen who totally disappeared in this episode, or Haley ... Depending of the choice at the bar, it's strange that MC has enough energy to fuck one of his long best-friend Kelly but fall asleep with the girl he could fall for (Anna or Haley)... It look like The Creator didn't have so much time before releasing this chapter. Even if girls are all beauties, the scene with the red-hair tennis coach (Lana ?) has no interest in the story yet. The same if you choose to stay at the bar with Lisa's brother and fuck the little brunette in restroom.
I thought that Lily would be a little bit jealous about Kelly's night... She's only protecting her (with good reasons, but still...)
 

ItsNotUs

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May 14, 2023
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I didn't have a tennis scene with Helen, was that not in the game or was i going the wrong path?
 

metamorphMP

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That explains it then, I guess I've never stopped going. I never turn down an invitation to a friend's bar
You can meet Anna even if you don't go right away.

I agreed to go to the bar. But then I chose to hang out with Lily and this photo-girl (forgot her name), after that I went to the bar and met Anna (co-worker was already gone).
 
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