VN Ren'Py Completed The List [v0.13] [Uncle Loco]

[Bomber86]

hmm... I have The List complete now, but what sticks in my mind is that Alexis is not (for me) the most important character in the saga, but Ellie is, and to some extent Charlotte too.
Why? It's in the conversation with Eve when she talked about the prophecy that Rob will unite all beings, humans, vampires, mages etc.
Because in the situation when Rob was possessed, you saw Ellie cast magic to open the door. It was only a short sequence, but it was clear to see.
Charlotte because she's a vampire. Here you could argue Alexis is (was) a vampire too, but Charlotte seems more powerful, just looking at her status within the community.
I still don't understand why Ellie in particular is only optional for the harem, she should have a permanent place.
I'm also not really sad that Alexis was killed, if you look at her actions, it's often pure selfishness behind it, for example in the hospital when she forces her will on Rob to go to her, gives him shakes spiked with blood, or in the action to make Rob a vampire. Perhaps important story-wise, but anything but smart (in my opinion).

The twins at the end of chapter 13 should be the exact opposite of BB and SB, because if I understood it correctly, they should be from heaven, righteous, religious (honoring Vaster and Mother), while BB and SB indulge in the sins of lust. The pronunciation of the respective twins also fits in with this.

 

[snakeplisskin]

Well Sam's wife Eve is technically dead she has no body and can only project her image through another person's mind. Hard to steal something that is technically not there.

Challenge accepted!

 

[whysoseriousss]

I played through the entire game, but I still don't understand why it's tagged as incest.
I even played it after the patch.

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[e6mill]

I played through the entire game, but I still don't understand why it's tagged as incest.

The girl from the poker game is MC's half-sis?

 

[HornyyPussy]

The girl from the poker game is MC's half-sis?

Such interesting characters at that poker game......

 

[jack brisen]

i dont understand the ending

 

[HornyyPussy]

i dont understand the ending

The game stopped.

 

[jack brisen]

it says completed thats why i dont understand

 

[Bomber86]

This is only part 1 of 5 games planned by the developer

 

[Uncle Loco]

it says completed thats why i dont understand

The List (game 1 of 5) is completed. The story will continue in The Perfect Town (game 2 of 5). After that it will be The List 2. So while the first game is complete the saga will continue. It is just how I am splitting the game up.

 

[Uncle Loco]

hmm... I have The List complete now, but what sticks in my mind is that Alexis is not (for me) the most important character in the saga, but Ellie is, and to some extent Charlotte too.
Why? It's in the conversation with Eve when she talked about the prophecy that Rob will unite all beings, humans, vampires, mages etc.
Because in the situation when Rob was possessed, you saw Ellie cast magic to open the door. It was only a short sequence, but it was clear to see.
Charlotte because she's a vampire. Here you could argue Alexis is (was) a vampire too, but Charlotte seems more powerful, just looking at her status within the community.
I still don't understand why Ellie in particular is only optional for the harem, she should have a permanent place.
I'm also not really sad that Alexis was killed, if you look at her actions, it's often pure selfishness behind it, for example in the hospital when she forces her will on Rob to go to her, gives him shakes spiked with blood, or in the action to make Rob a vampire. Perhaps important story-wise, but anything but smart (in my opinion).

The twins at the end of chapter 13 should be the exact opposite of BB and SB, because if I understood it correctly, they should be from heaven, righteous, religious (honoring Vaster and Mother), while BB and SB indulge in the sins of lust. The pronunciation of the respective twins also fits in with this.

Just wanted to address the new twins. They do have real names and will be important to the story. They come from a warrior line, and fight for family, honor, and a belief in a prophecy. I tried to address this in their dialog. I will tone it down a bit once they are introduced officially, but they will always be about honor and family. There are a lot more to these two, but I will leave that to the story to tell.

Not saying that BB and SB don't have a warrior mentality, they are more pure killers at time and will kill for fun or sport. They don't always see the difference between right and wrong. They don't look at others as their equals and unless they are told to do so or respect you for something.

 

[FatYoda]

it says completed thats why i dont understand

for the same reason that Fellowship of the ring is a completed book....??? It's the story of his time during his Vampire Creation, and his Creator...she died and now he has moved to a new city. It's an extremely natural transition to a new book in the series.

 

[ItsNotMeToo]

Saw the completed tag, decent rating, and enough genre tags to interest me.

I'm into episode 2 and the writing / storyline is a bit... elementary. Main character mary-sue'ing his way to getting immediately laid by women throwing themselves at him (especially one after telling him about SAs...)... does the writing / story get better? I'm not looking for hyper-realism, but hoping the story improves soon.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Saw the completed tag, decent rating, and enough genre tags to interest me.

I'm into episode 2 and the writing / storyline is a bit... elementary. Main character mary-sue'ing his way to getting immediately laid by women throwing themselves at him (especially one after telling him about SAs...)... does the writing / story get better? I'm not looking for hyper-realism, but hoping the story improves soon.

Yes

 

[Uncle Loco]

Saw the completed tag, decent rating, and enough genre tags to interest me.

I'm into episode 2 and the writing / storyline is a bit... elementary. Main character mary-sue'ing his way to getting immediately laid by women throwing themselves at him (especially one after telling him about SAs...)... does the writing / story get better? I'm not looking for hyper-realism, but hoping the story improves soon.

I have been told that a lot of people really start enjoying the story starting around chapters 3-5. It is different for everyone, but the biggest complaints I hear are all about chapters 1 and 2. I am not saying I am an excellent writer by any means but I feel the story improves a bit each chapter.

 

[FatYoda]

Saw the completed tag, decent rating, and enough genre tags to interest me.

I'm into episode 2 and the writing / storyline is a bit... elementary. Main character mary-sue'ing his way to getting immediately laid by women throwing themselves at him (especially one after telling him about SAs...)... does the writing / story get better? I'm not looking for hyper-realism, but hoping the story improves soon.

I played episodes 4-11 in one sitting...i would have read the whole thing through, but it was like 4am...so i liked it a lot. the Mary-sueing will make sense later. At least in terms of his physical and mental abilities. I think he explained the women being drawn to him part...but i can't remember for sure.

Edit: Also, this is one of a five part (game) series. Think of this as the first book in a five book series. It does end in a sort of natural progression into a new book. Everything that needed to happen in this book did, but there is obviously more story to be told.

 

[Ghost'']

The List [v0.13] [Uncle Loco] Unofficial Android Port + KoGa3's Mod

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[ItsNotMeToo]

Yes

I have been told that a lot of people really start enjoying the story starting around chapters 3-5. It is different for everyone, but the biggest complaints I hear are all about chapters 1 and 2. I am not saying I am an excellent writer by any means but I feel the story improves a bit each chapter.

I played episodes 4-11 in one sitting...i would have read the whole thing through, but it was like 4am...so i liked it a lot. the Mary-sueing will make sense later. At least in terms of his physical and mental abilities. I think he explained the women being drawn to him part...but i can't remember for sure.

Edit: Also, this is one of a five part (game) series. Think of this as the first book in a five book series. It does end in a sort of natural progression into a new book. Everything that needed to happen in this book did, but there is obviously more story to be told.

Appreciate the responses, I'll keep going with the story.

 

[Joi_fan]

This is my first time playing the game and it ended for me at the hospital where I learned the family died.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

i still dont get this part

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i am pretty sure alexis did her mindtrick on both of them
atleast thats what i got from the writing

m "Yeah, I think it's time to get a good fucking again. Oh man, what is wrong with me?! I was always so shy about sex, and now all I think about is tearing his clothing off and riding him until he begs me to stop."

a "Wow, you are sounding more and more like Kelly! Just get him ready for me okay, and don't break him. I still need his confidence up so he will be ready to make that decision when the time comes."

what's the meaning of this ?

i , personally , would not touch this 3 lying woman if given the choice
(well , we can ditch one , and madison tells the mc later ,but ...)