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But are there twins in the game?
I'd love if it Zoey actually had a twin sister who was separated at birth and miraculously made her way back to Valeria and her family.

That would be amazing - then Raymond can get some hot SEXY ASF twin fucking 3SOME action between Zoey and her twin

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I hope the adjustments are made in a way that most of you will like. Can't wait to see your feedback, mate, and have fun!
Well I just finished it TLDR , I loved the game. Like I mentioned last night before my message got deleted. I'm not a fan of sandbox but this game's sandbox just works. Usually sandbox makes me not want to play more than 1 save if I play a sandbox not the case in this game. Also I love how every event is long enough that you forget it's a sandbox for a good while. I still would play a VN mode tho if ones does come out.



I do have 1 nitpick about the Sandbox not really a big deal or anything but still something I found slightly annoying. When doing the daily quest , while there is a shorter option for less money and rep I always pick the longer one for more money and rep. I just ctrl skip it because it's faster when ive seen it. I wish there was a 3rd option to just get the money and skip it straight up.

Also with the voice acting I found 1 thing that is a little off personally. Not a big deal but might be worth bring to your attention. There are some lines here and there that have voice acting but doesn't match everything that is being said if you read the dialogue. ( I tend to still read even if there is voice acting) So I noticed 1 - 2 words at times were left out of the voice acting but not the dialogue. Not a big deal like I said but something worth mentioning.

Now time for some personal opinions.

First of all wow you have created some good looking models. Valeria and Zoey in particular I couldn't decide who has the better ass as an assman ( probably Zoey just barley) as I found her sex scene really hot with the way her ass was shown more than the one with Valeria. Which makes complaints I read funny when they say there was no straight sex scenes when there literally is one even if it's a dream.

Tho I hope you don't use dreams / fantasies too often once in awhile it's fine to insert a hot scenes like the one with Zoey. Also a big fan of oil hope you keep giving us some oil scenes. It's not something I see enough of in AVN's and also your game is probably the best ive seen when it comes to showcasing oil on the girls.

Rachael went from I love this character to mixed. I still think she is a perfect LI for Zoey and the way she cares for her it's a relationship I want to see more of especially when it's only Rachel and Zoey together. As I think in that context they make a good couple. However I do find Rachael a little off putting in some of her sex scenes specifically when it comes to Anal , as she seems to be a little too forceful with Zoey to my liking. Which is fine but then she seems to force anal on Zoey which is something I don't like. ( in the dream and the vibrator / locker room scene) not a big deal but it's a negative towards her character for me. As I would of liked Zoey to give an okay to it even if there was no choice and the anal scene was forced . Just Rachael asking and Zoey saying yes would of been enough for me to like it more and not dislike that about Rachael.

I also dislike how Rachael is with Tyler I hope we can a way to end that at one point. As it seems Rachael does fool around with Tyler off screen no matter what. I only dislike this cause I don't Tyler as a character , tho id be lying if I didn't say I want her for Zoey and no one else on 1 of my saves haha. Which is why im hoping in the future we can get Rachael and Zoey in a proper relationship and get away from Tyler. While the other ones let Rachael run wild and be a slut and see alot of hot scenes.

The webcam scene with Valeria I loved this one so much. I want more of it for me this was the best scene in the update. So I may be biased here but yeah please tell me we can turn Valeria into a proper camgirl and get more scenes like this it was such a fun scene.

I also really liked how you made Evan to be a cheater and unlikeable so it makes it easier to cheat on him. I also found the scene where he is cheating on his wife with his wife funny as fuck. I still hope Valeria confronts him about that as I think it would make for a funny and enjoyable conversation / scene overall.



Everything Else I can't judge yet needs time in the oven but I will say I love how this game is serious and not serious at the same time has a nice balance of comedy and seriousness. I still need to finish my 2nd save where im not being corrupted as much but i'll do that later.
 
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Most of the new characters have been introduced to some degree. Some more than others.
The only one not introduced is Mariana…she’ll be in the next update though.
You looking for a specific character?
thanks for the answer, yes i wanted to see marianne so we will wait for the next update
 
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First of all wow you have created some good looking models. Valeria and Zoey in particular I couldn't decide who has the better ass as an assman ( probably Zoey just barley) as I found her sex scene really hot with the way her ass was shown more than the one with Valeria. Which makes complaints I read funny when they say there was no straight sex scenes when there literally is one even if it's a dream.
That was a strategic sex scene because I knew people would complain about not having a sex scene with Zoey, so I had to fill that gap somehow. But I understand the complaints—they want Zoey in a real scene with her genuine reaction.
Thanks for the detailed review, bro. You're probably right about the anal I may have overused it too much. Rachel is crazy, but she has her own reasons. We haven't revealed the whole truth yet. The dream scenes have a purpose too, and we'll uncover that a bit in the next episode.
What I'm trying to do is balance sexy content with the actual story. I'm more experienced now and know what to do. I was a bit more unorganized earlier because I didn't have a stable writer, but now I do.
Evan is basically a self-centered asshole. I decided to make him that way to justify Valeria's relationship with other guys. I'll keep using Tyler and his crew, Jenny, Betty, and Scarlett for Zoey's path, while Lin, Ryder, Don, Hog, and Raymond will be more involved in Valeria's path.
In time, we'll reach all our goals and make this game better and better. I aim for nothing but perfection. The player deserves to enjoy every line and every moment. Trust me, we're making this game enjoyable for ourselves too because, when it comes to testing, I need to see a game that's less boring and more exciting.
We're also going to bring in new music that you've never heard before. I'm investing all the money we earn back into the game. I'm serious about making this one of the best avn games out there. I hope, with your support, I can achieve that.
I love this as im a big fan of headpats and handholding ( also nose boops)
Same here head patting, messy hair, angry or seductive looks directly into your eyes... those things excite me.
 

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liking the concept of this game, love the fact stats include penis size details, maybe in the future he could add a looseness meter on the females that directly are affected by said penis sizes, noticeable by smaller guys or so on, love the direction it is going, only question is will they get lazy like seemingly 90% of these adult games and then go half ass or go hard and explore the potential of stats....stats are a big win for nerds like me, like have the girl try to balance her looseness to avoid getting caught cheating or something like that
 
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Awesome update man, played the game from the first update and it is getting even better. A question about the dresses you can buy, is there a way to change clothes? I presume it will be available in the future. Also i noticed that all females in the special renders are already in the game, except that big breasted thick woman. Is she going to be in the game in the future?
 
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That was a strategic sex scene because I knew people would complain about not having a sex scene with Zoey, so I had to fill that gap somehow. But I understand the complaints—they want Zoey in a real scene with her genuine reaction.
Thanks for the detailed review, bro. You're probably right about the anal I may have overused it too much. Rachel is crazy, but she has her own reasons. We haven't revealed the whole truth yet. The dream scenes have a purpose too, and we'll uncover that a bit in the next episode.
What I'm trying to do is balance sexy content with the actual story. I'm more experienced now and know what to do. I was a bit more unorganized earlier because I didn't have a stable writer, but now I do.
Evan is basically a self-centered asshole. I decided to make him that way to justify Valeria's relationship with other guys. I'll keep using Tyler and his crew, Jenny, Betty, and Scarlett for Zoey's path, while Lin, Ryder, Don, Hog, and Raymond will be more involved in Valeria's path.
In time, we'll reach all our goals and make this game better and better. I aim for nothing but perfection. The player deserves to enjoy every line and every moment. Trust me, we're making this game enjoyable for ourselves too because, when it comes to testing, I need to see a game that's less boring and more exciting.
We're also going to bring in new music that you've never heard before. I'm investing all the money we earn back into the game. I'm serious about making this one of the best avn games out there. I hope, with your support, I can achieve that.

Same here head patting, messy hair, angry or seductive looks directly into your eyes... those things excite me.
Hey I had an idea for your game, what about a theme night, like once a week friday or saturday the waitresses would all wear like a frenchmaid outfit with no bras and panties, cheerleader outfit, playmate outfit or school girl/ hot teacher. you could put up a poll on here and patreon and let us vote on it
 

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:D Yeah, I can see it's a bit problematic in Zoey's case. People think there's a possibility to avoid Rachel, but unfortunately, there isn't. She'll be Zoey's love interest regardless of your choices. The same thing will happen with Valeria and Ryder—those are story-related love interests we can't ignore.

I admit I made a few rookie mistakes in Zoey's story, but I think it's fine. Adding too many choices to avoid things can mess up the story's progress completely. However, after this, I'll be more organized with choices and try to add as many alternatives as possible. But I won’t change the story—Zoey is bi and will have plenty of straight scenes.
I'm not a big fan of making my best girl a slut right away. She needs a build-up, but Valeria is more experienced.

In my case, that's Valeria—complete wife material :oops: But I have big plans for both girls, including my side girls.
Thanks again for you answer, i think we like alote this history, Zoey and your others characthers, i will see this game to the end.
 
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liking the concept of this game, love the fact stats include penis size details, maybe in the future he could add a looseness meter on the females that directly are affected by said penis sizes, noticeable by smaller guys or so on, love the direction it is going, only question is will they get lazy like seemingly 90% of these adult games and then go half ass or go hard and explore the potential of stats....stats are a big win for nerds like me, like have the girl try to balance her looseness to avoid getting caught cheating or something like that
The idea is amazing. We can probably do it, but following through will be a pain, and we’ll probably miss it. There are so many things we need to take care of for each scene. But I haven’t closed the door yet, I’ll see what I can do. I will let you know when we add that.

Awesome update man, played the game from the first update and it is getting even better. A question about the dresses you can buy, is there a way to change clothes? I presume it will be available in the future. Also i noticed that all females in the special renders are already in the game, except that big breasted thick woman. Is she going to be in the game in the future?
Thanks, man. Changing clothes will be available in the VIP room service missions. Plus, next dailies or specific missions will require specific clothes as well. And sometimes you'll need to buy some items to start a quest because you'll need them in the quest, which will be added later. Her name is Mariana, and HELL YES, she will be in the game. Do you think I’d waste a beauty like this, bro?:oops:

Hey I had an idea for your game, what about a theme night, like once a week friday or saturday the waitresses would all wear like a frenchmaid outfit with no bras and panties, cheerleader outfit, playmate outfit or school girl/ hot teacher. you could put up a poll on here and patreon and let us vote on it
Special daily mission once a week. It’s doable, but I will get to that later as soon as I finish the main content.

Thanks again for you answer, i think we like alote this history, Zoey and your others characthers, i will see this game to the end.
We’ve currently come up with a story that has very deep lore, including a lot of supernatural events. I’m kind of anxious because I’m not sure how the players will react. But when I told my idea to my teammates, they were all surprised but also loved it. For Zoey, in her journey, she will come to a breaking point, and I feel like most will support my decision. But I’ll stay anxious until I release the game. My idea is very simple, yet we’ve added a lot of little details and mystery. I hope you guys like it.
 

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Finally had time to play the update! Amazing stuff, love the introduction of the new characters. And opening scene rewrite is much better this time imo. The dream sequences with Zoey I think are a great idea and I'm glad you did more, although I still don't know if the hallway scene really happend or not lol. I know you had loads of new characters to introduce this update but I do hope we'll see more of the gym teacher soon, she fills a rare niche that no other weg really covers.
 
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