The new release is out. I hope people enjoy it more than the last!
Is the release in the OP the same file you released? If so it has a ton of junk in that doesn't need to be there. I'd suggest you look into
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- No reason to include unren, especially if you are including the .rpy files and not packaging them into .rpa's. (Also decomp.cab and other related crap)
- You included all the documentation for NQTR. You shouldn't include their wiki, README.md, etc
- The renpy powershell script in bin is also something I've not seen before, usualy in windows you just run the .exe file so not sure what purpose it serves.
- The console dir seems like a cheat/console enable script, which is a weird thing to include, normally you would just set those options (or they would be set to false and someone would later include the console enable cheat script)
If some/all of that wasn't you... then WTF is the uploader thinking?
Edit, after playing:
As far as the game itself, it's also a bit rough...
The plot is very sudden and is basically a series of non sequiturs. The whole interrogation scene was the MC spouting a bunch of stuff that we as the player didn't know/never saw, and certainly didn't know was relevant. The nurse in that scene said something about a "satisfying conclusion" 3 times in that scene, nevermind that phrase in general being an AI slop-ism you get when the AI doesn't want to push the scene/plot/smut forward itself.
It's also weird how you use the MC's dialogue with (emotions) prefixed or *actions in asterisks* and such. Typically those would be narration or set apart with stylistic differences...
e.g. Instead of this
Code:
mc "A sudden alert flickers on the screen—a glimmer of red in a sea of green indicators. The warp drive's core stabilization system is malfunctioning."
"Without it, the Ark would be grounded, its inhabitants doomed to share the fate of the Earth they so desperately seek to escape."
mc "Well, well... what have we here?"
"A critical system failure, and only I have the knowledge to fix it. If I play this right, I could turn the tables. It's now or never..."
# MC joins the crew
show ruined_city
mc "With a surge of adrenaline, I realized this might be my chance to leave Earth behind and embark on a new adventure among the stars."
mc "(With renewed determination) Casting aside the doubts that have shadowed me for far too long,"
mc "I sprint towards the gathering emergency crew. Each heartbeat resonates with a mix of dread and excitement."
I'd do something more like this
Code:
"A sudden alert flickered on the screen—a glimmer of red in a sea of green indicators. The warp drive's core stabilization system was malfunctioning."
"Without it, the Ark would be grounded, its inhabitants doomed to share the fate of the Earth they so desperately seek to escape."
mc "Well, well... what have we here?"
mc "{i}A critical system failure, and only I have the knowledge to fix it. If I play this right, I could turn the tables. It's now or never...{/i}"
# MC joins the crew
show ruined_city
"With a surge of adrenaline, I realized this might be my chance to leave Earth behind and embark on a new adventure among the stars."
"I cast aside the doubts that shadowed me for far too long and moved with renewed determination"
Good luck, dev!