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King_Gonta

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No slight intended - what do you find interesting about a Jessie plotline? He's a lovesick puppy with no real value accept as a nuisance and wasted word count (Edit: that's not fair. He was valuable for the story as a narrative device but now that he's served his purpose he's taking up space that could be dedicated to better scenes). I doubt with everything Sarah knows now, that she would ever willingly fuck him again. I say willingly bc who the fuck knows at this point what Lester will do with his pawn moving forward.
He can be used at right time to distract dan and Lester can "protect " Sarah and her family from him cementing his status as a legit mate in Sarah's brain
 
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King_Gonta

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I'm still waiting to see if Sarah will really use Dan's fear against him, destroying him completely for Lester's pleasure. The "pineapple" can be used hen Sarah starts wanting to use Dan's fear against him, starting the humiliation, calling him pathetic, revealing Dan's fears to Lester, him saying pineapple asking her to stop and shut up and she continues.
Thats something I look forward too

Sarah is not just his wife but his best friend or only friend .A pillar as well as guide .till now

Having that taken away in his downfall will be absolutely crushing .

A husband wife relationship is not all about sex but many little things .
 
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I agree with most of what you are saying. I know we haven't seen eye to eye on things in the past, but I'm with you on the kids should be a background element only. However I do see why DS adds them into the narrative. This is a great example of it.

Her daughter, who called out to her earlier, must have gotten into her bed after using the bathroom. Sarah smiled and immediately felt guilty at her exchange with Lester. Sarah settled into her side of the bed, not wanting to disturb her child. And as much as she wanted to cuddle with her, she didn’t, not after what she had just done. She closed her eyes and let sleep take her.

Some of DS's patrons suggested this showed Sarah as being a selfish bitch only caring about herself. However I see it as a way of showing Sarah's remorse for her behavior and also a reminder to Sarah of how much she has fallen. Could DS have written it so that this didn't involve the kids, maybe, but would it have the same emotional impact on the reader if it was something she said to Dan. And since he hasn't given Sarah any friends to reach out to - he has done exactly what you are suggesting - written himself into a corner.
I don't know why or how I missed that, but I did. What gets me more is that she not only wouldn't embrace her daughter but her staying separate was not just because of the phone sex, that just happened, but because she most likely knew she would be thinking/dreaming of fucking Lester and it being filmed and she prioritized that over her love/responsibility for daughter, instead wanting not her but Lester and his cock.
 

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I don't know why or how I missed that, but I did. What gets me more is that she not only wouldn't embrace her daughter but her staying separate was not just because of the phone sex, that just happened, but because she most likely knew she would be thinking/dreaming of fucking Lester and it being filmed and she prioritized that over her love/responsibility for daughter, instead wanting not her but Lester and his cock.
Funny, I hadn't thought of it from that point of view - I was thinking it was more that she felt guilty; knew it was wrong and Dan might have been right about her losing control.....I think things have to start heating up or Lester just takes over.
 
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I don't know why or how I missed that, but I did. What gets me more is that she not only wouldn't embrace her daughter but her staying separate was not just because of the phone sex, that just happened, but because she most likely knew she would be thinking/dreaming of fucking Lester and it being filmed and she prioritized that over her love/responsibility for daughter, instead wanting not her but Lester and his cock.
I certainly can see how it could be interpreted that way. I guess I just read it differently. It struck me as guilt and remorse. She wanted to cuddle with her daughter but she didn't feel she deserved it bc of her earlier behavior.
 
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I certainly can see how it could be interpreted that way. I guess I just read it differently. It struck me as guilt and remorse. She wanted to cuddle with her daughter but she didn't feel she deserved it bc of her earlier behavior.
At first, I totally agreed with you and believe that is her conscious reasoning, however, when she went to sleep her sub-conscious took over and, in my opinion, took over and soothed her guilt feelings by taking her away from her daughter, in her dreams, anyway as guilt does work itself in our minds through dreams. However, her sub-C sent her back to Lester and shrugged off the guilt. I would love to see what her reaction and attitude is in the morning around her daughter.
 

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Their marriage is over, the mother does the chores of taking the kids to and from school because she has to. Dan is also a shitty father, he doesn't care about his kids, if he did he would know that Sarah was with a man at home (his daughter would ask why he didn't talk to her when he went home and didn't even say goodbye). Dan would be on alert. I wanted to see how Sarah would react to Dan getting with another woman, he hasn't had sex with his wife for a long time, and they seem to be like animals. Sarah doesn't have any friends at the hospital (nurses, porters, I know that part of the administrative team left, but she doesn't know anyone). The same Dan works there, there's no secretary or receptionist at the company. Some strange things about the story, let's see if Sarah and Lester meet anyone in town. I hope she keeps her new ring from Lester, he could steal the wedding ring that Dan gave her and then only use Lester's wedding ring. (lester is dirty and can affect Dan a lot, like that).
 

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this isn't directed at anyone in particular, so no one take offense: do you see how every character typed about the kids in this thread is just a bummer? there is absolutely nothing sexy about arguing about who is or isn't a good father or good mother. it's just an anvil around the neck of the story. it adds weird stakes to a story that should be about fucking and sucking and turns every blowjob into, "okay, but was that BJ fair to the well-being of their toddler?" its such a narrative blunder by don, he should release a no-kids cut of the story or something.
 

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Yeah I really don't like it. It takes me out of the story anytime they're mentioned

Plus the pregnancy angle would be hotter if she didnt have kids. Impregnating a young woman who's husband has failed or who's been previously against it is juicier than doing it to a mother of two
 
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King_Gonta

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Their marriage is over, the mother does the chores of taking the kids to and from school because she has to. Dan is also a shitty father, he doesn't care about his kids, if he did he would know that Sarah was with a man at home (his daughter would ask why he didn't talk to her when he went home and didn't even say goodbye). Dan would be on alert. I wanted to see how Sarah would react to Dan getting with another woman, he hasn't had sex with his wife for a long time, and they seem to be like animals. Sarah doesn't have any friends at the hospital (nurses, porters, I know that part of the administrative team left, but she doesn't know anyone

Applying any sort of logic to NTR (except the ones which help ) defeats it's purpose .

The story is simply about two people now. Sarah and Lester .both these characters are interesting in their own and together .

At first it was about dan too but as Lester came in foreground .dan has diminished as a character. He has already been cuckolded and emasculated . his character arc is boring to read unlike Corey from "Ascending Lauren ".

My unpopular opinion is relegating Dan in background while Lester and Sarah revel in their relationship for a few chapters .

Also Dan and Sarah's marriage should remain intact cuz breaking it will also defeat the story's purpose . It was never about their marriage

Lester can always be her one "true" love while Dan will be the father and husband who ocassionaly visits his family . Dan's ultimate punishment will be loosing the passion he hoped cuckolding will bring in their marriage
 
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Applying any sort of logic to NTR (except the ones which help ) defeats it's purpose .

The story is simply about two people now. Sarah and Lester .both these characters are interesting in their own and together .

At first it was about dan too but as Lester came in foreground .dan has diminished as a character. He has already been cuckolded and emasculated . his character arc is boring to read unlike Corey from "Ascending Lauren ".

My unpopular opinion is relegating Dan in background while Lester and Sarah revel in their relationship for a few chapters .

Also Dan and Sarah's marriage should remain intact cuz breaking it will also defeat the story's purpose . It was never about their marriage

Lester can always be her one "true" love while Dan will be the father and husband who ocassionaly visits his family . Dan's ultimate punishment will be loosing the passion he hoped cuckolding will bring in their marriage
We have to remember in "Ascending Lauren", the characters Corey and Lauren are much older than Sarah and Dan, their children are already adults, unlike Sarah and Dan's daughters who are still children and are totally dependent on adults. Sarah's corruption goes through this too, destroying Sarah's mother, and this impacts the husband and wife relationship (Dan was pissed when Sarah practically forgot about her daughters at school). Lester also has a different profile than Alex. And let's be honest, Lauren didn't leave her husband for Alex because it's a fictional story, the emotional betrayal, the detachment and the lack of love are clear in the story, she loves Alex and likes to humiliate her husband. I don't know how Lauren didn't have sex with her own daughters or have an orgy with Corey's 3 women and completely destroy him. Corey is 61 years old and Dan must be around 30, Corey can't get an erection because he's old, unlike Dan. Besides, in Corey's case, he could do a TRT (regain more strength and youth, he has money). While Lauren made Corey eat sperm from her hands, Dan has these realities as his fears, darker and Sarah doing this to him will destroy him, it would be Lester's final victory and the end of the relationship. (Note: I'm Brazilian, we have a different culture than people in the US, who have an easier time discarding what they don't want), that American life profile. Dan doesn't stay with his wife, doesn't have normal moments as a couple or with his family, doesn't have sex, doesn't talk to his wife and daughters for weeks "not even on the phone". So it's normal for him to take the team off the field and the marriage to end, or for him to have a fit of rage and end up killing Lester and going to jail and Sarah ending up as a prostitute (and it's dangerous for you to take people to extremes). And what kind of love is this person? It is not part of their daily lives. They are only remembered to be humiliated and forgotten. They are betrayed beyond sex. Their wives spend only a few minutes with them. It gets complicated. There is no way they can stay stuck in this drug forever. When their daughters become mothers? They will not have a normal set of grandparents. The grandmother is a whore who only enjoys sex and the grandfather is clueless.

For Dan and Sarah's children to be left out of the story, they should not have such children. This is the real problem with children, because they will always be there, until they are independent.