VN - Ren'Py - Unholy Angel: Wedding Adventures [v0.4 Beta] [Bunny Devil]

I tried the game, the graphics are a bit old school, the animations are in paper comic style, audio, could be improved, the dialogues, the choices are approximate, I can't understand what the story should lead to, how many endings, and choices, the creator is much too poor in the size of the updates, and too many previews, demos, intros, and more than celebrating a wedding, it seems like watching a porn set of a movie.

A great game has a lot of potential and has a similar vibe as Good Girl Gone Bad, in the sea of netorare games this one is more interesting and has a natural feel. I will wait fore more updates, and hope that the final version will have several paths.

a game that started out as a thousand innovative possibilities, a game with perhaps couple management was finally something innovative, to date, to my displeasure, none of this potential has been exploited, the graphics have not evolved, the dialogues in many cases are repetitive, and left to chance, the times of updates released are increasingly longer, it is a shame to give a bad judgment, and I don't even want to mention the history of the game.

One of my favorite games on this site.
The 2d art style is great and a stands out from most games.
Love the female mc and the slow corruption. The storyline is hot and has great potential.
Wish the updates were quicker. Keep it up dev.

The game itself isn't bad per se, the characters are decent and the writing is fine.

The problem comes with the choices. There's lots of them and that's great, but sometimes you'll find yourself 5 choices deep in a line because you think it'll give you more scenes and then the game ends because you're caught by your spouse and that's it.

Games are supposed to be fun, not gotchas that require you to save every 5 seconds to avoid getting a game over. It's a stupid mechanic and needs to be re-worked into a 'go back to the first choice in this line' style mechanic, which would make the game infinitely more playable.

Game over style things like this really irk me in adult games. If you want hardcore, go play fucking dark souls or something.

I really like this VN and I have no idea what some reviewers are complaining about. Of course Eva Kiss is a huge influence on the Dev but it is a good thing. I like the art and the fact that you can play multiple routes and cheat with various characters. Those who play this games for the true loyal path just can't enjoy it fully. Really looking for the next updates and hopefully we'll get more action!

I lke a lot this game, is an adventure to the goal of marriage, and I find it funny and exciting, that's the goal of these kind of game.
I like that the female MC is not the usual young virgin girl, but an experienced flight attendant, wich means she is at one step of being a slut (came on, we all think it).
The dev keeps the right rules of a corruption game and develops them during the story. Graphic ok, not a masterpiece, but functionally at the story.
For now 4 stars waiting for some new character and better musics.

Unholy Angel: Wedding Adventures [v0.4 Alpha]

The game starts with an intriguing premise but ultimately falls short due to its confusing story progression.
A reason for that is the choices that are quite deceptive and don't change much for the most part except presenting you with teases when you choose anyone other than Brian.
I've tried to change her stats, but that also didn't make any difference.
Getting presented with only one choice, like when Diana is at the beach and seems like she is about to cheat while she is drunk just to get cockblocked by the only choice of "stop," is really lame.
You see flashbacks from when Brian started dating Diana that aren't that interesting and don't make much sense to me and could've easily been placed at the beginning of the game.
All of these things make the story feel disjointed and unbelievable.
The artstyle is fine, and the characters are based on pornstars, but I wish there was more variety and longer sex scenes instead of just a few static images.

Its a solid game. The writing is a bit wonky (probably because of translation issues). Sometimes its not clear why you cant pick certain choices (maybe add an indicator to it (your xxx is to low/high)).

The plot itself is quite generic but not bad and the art is quite good.

I am not a big fan of the "trial and error" flashbacks - there is no point in having choices if you have to pick the right ones. And flashbacks by nature shouldnt have choices - we are were we are because things happend in the past.

It is a waste of time that could be invested in progressing the story forward. Just make the flashbacks compact and condensed to give the player the context that is needed and thats it.

Also I dont think that the Buttons add anything - why do I have to click on a button to progress when it is just a "Go to ..." without any other options? Why bother the player with that?

The game was born with great prospects, I was very attracted to it, but with each update, unfortunately, I noticed a worsening of the plot, now too obvious, and also the DEV factor that every now and then releases some spoilers about the future, does not help, the graphics are captivating, but alone is not enough to raise the overall quality of the game, very sorry for this decline.

The game starts with a good premise but gets bogged down by a confusing intro, especially Diana’s character development.
There’s a lack of variety in the art; mostly, it’s just static images of Diana in different clothes or locations, without much action or variation.
The narrative setup offers potential, but the execution leaves much to be desired, especially in terms of character exploration and the lack of real sex scenes.
Updates are too small and slow, which makes the game feel like a waste of time.
The game’s story feels like it could be strong, but text editing and more detailed intros would help a lot.
The art is decent but repetitive, with a need for more scenes and more engaging scenarios to make the game stand out.
Despite these issues, if the game’s elements are improved, it has potential to compete with high-quality VNs

As of version 0.4

Great game. The tags are right. The character designs are taken from pornstars. So, its fun to play.
The characters of both the fiancé and her friend are perfect for corruption, also the scenario of wedding/ honeymoon in Caribbean leads to a lot of possibilities for a very naughty game. Hope there will be an oblivious cuckold scenario where the MC will be unaware of her corruption and cheating. The cg style is similar to Our Red String and EvaKiss.

Great potential! Lets see where it goes. Great exposition but a little bit slow with the upload scedule by the developer. Love the teasing towards the boyfriend. Also i like hoe this isnt a typical „boyfriend is shitty in bed and has a small dick“ kind of game. She is happy with him and he has a 6 incher so average but she just wants to experiment.

Sorry for my English, its not my native language.
Really good game and promising too. Despite the fact that the game is short now I've been pleased to play it. The drawings are great, because I don't like 3d that much, but also I don't like cartoonish ones. That's game make it middle way. The dialogues are great too. Its easy to see how author bring some common sense on that.
So, best wishes to the author and good luck for him

Graphically the game is not bad, we do not have a great story, the simple relationship of a couple that will explode during the game, something that indicates a great love, but a trip to a luxury resort is enough, that the characters only think about their needs, 90% makes us understand that the couple will not get married or will do so with a large load of betrayals, pitiful audio, but to add more cons, too small updates. Just a waste of time

perfect game with beautiful CGs and so far the story has good progress and scenes. although i would prefer original characters but it's not a deal breaker for me.
i would expect better monthly updates but the dev has done good so far.

Pretty good game for the genre, obviously taking cues from the EvaKiss style, but it doesn't look like a carbon copy and seems to enhance it for the characters, though I would want to see more variation and emotion in facial expressions for Diana and Brian, art is good and looks sexy otherwise, CG's are traced which is ok, but while the AI art is not too bad, it still gets a bit of a negative from me for its use, so I hope it isn't leaned on. Story itself is pretty plausible, and sexy, though it needs to be careful with not just diving into tropes, and making sure there is an option for a variety of relations and paths, from pure love to pure lust (which does already seem to be there to some extent) - text could use some proofing and an overall check, but otherwise a fairly good start and hopefully it heads in the right direction.

An EvaKiss style of game with a lot of branches, down-to-earth story and traced artwork. I really love these type of games and although it's a bit too early to tell, but this one seems pretty good so far.

- Art 4/5: matter of taste, if you're okay with traced art then this game is pretty good. -1 star only due to the obviously AI generated backgrounds. They are totally fine, just I wouldn't give 5 stars for AI generated stuff.
- Story, characters 5/5: so far it seems really interesting, on similar level as EvaKiss games. We'll see how it goes in future updates.
- Porn 4/5: there's not much content at the moment but what's there is good. Again, we'll see. No animation, that's for sure (as it's the case with the EvaKiss type of games)
- Writing 3/5: in general it's quite good. But it's pretty obvious AI was used for some of the dialogs (but I'm sure there're hand-written parts too). Which - again - could be fine, but some of the dialogs are so soulless, it's quite a downturn. I'm talking about the unnecessary mumblings of irrelevant information, if you play the game it will be obvious what I'm talking about.

I recommend playing this one if you like the games of EvaKiss, I'll surely follow this one closely. I really hope they won't force the BBC path, we'll have enough other options.

Really liked the game , especially the models both gf and her friend are perfect for
corruption, also the scenario of wedding/ honeymoon in carribean leads to a myriad of possibilities for a ver naughty game. Hope the developer continue updates regularly, also hoping for a path were husband is oblivious about fmc cheating/ interracial . Cant wait for future updates

There's not a ton of content to fairly critique, but I'm seeing a lot of potential for this to have unique storylines? or even branching endings.

I like the art style and with enough updates, Unholy Angel: Wedding Adventures could become another hidden gem in the Choose-Your-Own-Story type of game.

Overall, I won't directly compare this to other games, & I'll simply say this. (If the primary focus for this game is to generate a strong pledge/donation structure, each release HAS to really create content for a player-base which results in genuine excitement for each release.)

Hopefully within the next few months we'll have enough content to really get a good idea about what the plans are for the future. I'm looking forward to seeing this project really take shape!