manblu

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Feb 21, 2024
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This developer's screenwriting skills feel very limited to me. If you rush one route too much while dragging the other one out, it's only natural to get feedback like this. Plus, the route you rushed had zero excitement. Hiding behind the slow burn excuse all the time, only to suddenly throw in a dull, meaningless sex scene just for the sake of it, was pretty bad and amateurish.
I totally agree with this comment. What just happened? We went from someone slowly becoming corrupted to a seasoned brothel girl. When I saw the vaginal sex tag, I said, "Wow, this is finally going to be good." But I watched the scene and was disappointed like never before.
 

StrawberryCheese83

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Jan 13, 2021
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Club Route wasn t for me. She doesn t deserve this kind of treatment....so i skipped this Update. I m excited to see what Eros has in Store for her on the other Path (Cafè). I really hope that i can keep her on the non-slut Path (with an exiting little adventure here and there). :)
 
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johnyakuza1

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This developer's screenwriting skills feel very limited to me. If you rush one route too much while dragging the other one out, it's only natural to get feedback like this. Plus, the route you rushed had zero excitement. Hiding behind the slow burn excuse all the time, only to suddenly throw in a dull, meaningless sex scene just for the sake of it, was pretty bad and amateurish.
Couldn't have said it better. It's fine that things are ramping up and we get to see Lily getting fucked in some routes, but the rest of the plot feels like it's lagging quite behind.

Episode 9 was barebones and breadcrumbs... but at least it didn't take six months to arrive, so I'll give props to Eromantis for that.
 
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CutieLvr

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Jun 3, 2020
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Eromantis, another great update. Sad to see Naomi and Lily having to part as friends. I hope that doesn't stay the case. I know I mentioned this before, but I don't remember if you responded or what you said if you did. Will you have a stats counter for Lily's corruption? Sex acts, money earned, number of partners, etc.? If she had a phone, you could put it there. I'm going to start the game over because I have a new computer and my old saves did not carry over, and I love this game. Susan, must be a very powerful and influential person. I love it that Lily is turning into a full whore. Can her hair color be optional, like a redhead?
 

Xxcvt

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Apr 27, 2024
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Yeah, that was too convenient of a setup which seemed orchestrated by the villagers not wanting Lily to leave the village and to keep her closed off from the outside world for whatever nefarious purpose that the Grandma and the rest of the Grimwood villagers have in store for her.
The plot pretty much has the town being / having a genus loci (literally, "spirit of a place"), likely awoken by all the festivals with the early settlers coming together specifically for survival, to remember escaping from persecution, and to overcome the differences that would've torn them apart counting as large scale rituals.

At least according to our landlady, anyways.

Genus loci wouldn't need any conspiracy, and/or could actually be managing it.

The town itself has been explicitly cited as paring away Lily's inhibitions and modifying her thought patterns from habitually prudish to slutty.
 
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