VN - Ren'Py - Why Am I Here [Ep.1 Ch.2] [Zobbiored]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    Kyril87

    A few original ideas in the plot, but altogether too disjointed. The 'Engrish' seems to have been put through a second-rate automatic translator that didn't involve basic corrections of spelling or grammar.
    Graphics are okay.
    (Observation here: an engaging plot and good writing can largely compensate for inferior graphics, but exquisite graphics [which these aren't] cannot save an inferior plot and poor scripting.)
    There is hope for the future, but I'm rating on the present. If this mess is still kicking in another year I may revisit it. Until then, it'll stay deleted.