VN Ren'Py A.L.I History [Ch.2] [Bychipi]

[CoffeeSaint]

Hello, I just updated the game CH2, but I don't understand why the thread is not being published.You are a member, could you help me?

hey, Bychipi,
hope this finds you well, mate.

I think you better contact Bob69 or Lerd0 for help; they are Mods and Uploaders here, and understand the mechanics of F95Zone way better than I do.
on my end, I'll report to the site that the game was updated, but not the thread.

I hope this works, brother.
cheers.

 

[Bychipi]

Thank you very much for responding, my friend.

 

[CoffeeSaint]

Thank you very much for responding, my friend.

I've alerted the Mods and Staff already.
Godspeed, brother.

 

[Garrettino]

What does this acronym A.L.I. even stand for?
Think I missed it...

 

[Gumshoe08]

Cheating Tag.
Is the friend from the past in a relationship when she met the MC again? Because that would be peak, stealing her from her boyfriend.

 

[Bychipi]

A. is for love in Spanish “AMOR”.
L. is for lust in Spanish “LUJURIA”.
I. I don't tell you because it might be spoiler for the next update, hehe.

 

[Bychipi]

Tags Rules And List

• Cheating [A significant other having sex with someone other than their partner.]

In this game, a character cheats on someone and it's not the protagonist because otherwise that would be NTR.

• Netorare [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]

 

[shamtiiomi]

so this game is in spanish,...and bcs of that i can totally say that the text ,script is for 12 years old boy,....yeah im a spanish native and this so cringy ,is like seeing one of those tv novelas,..[the true is worst than that] dev pls this is so bad ,changes need to be done to have a normal script,and is some kind of ntr,...the ntr tag is for 3 types of it ,can be netori[you steal] netorase[you can share]or netorare[take it form you] this game have it all,.....and the mc it have this stupid idea of share his secondary ladies,...

 

[Takkertje]

Terrible animations.
I'm off.

 

[OWSam000]

You make the plot to let us think Monica may be telling a lie about her marriage and having children in chapter 1. Then in chapter 2, suddenly she said she would propose a open relationship with her husband or having children with mc as a bargaining chip to her husband in order to stay as mc lover and friend, and said she love her husband a lot so she couldn't leave him if the husband refuse any of her proposals because she didn't want to be a secondary girl such kind of bullshit.

How about you just follow to the story about your hints about the lie of her marriage in chapter 1 and let Monica become mc main girl. The story is kinda messy. The way/personality you create for Monica is just a cheating bitch character, the plot doesn't do good for her, and of course not good for mc. Unless you originally want to create a bastard mc who like to steal partners from other men and all possible the love interests are two-faced cheating sluts whose only want mc as a lover instead of a partner.
I know you don't want to spoiler the story but keeping the flow of the current plot, there will be a lot of misunderstanding and the damage will be done to this game. I hope Dev can make some spoilers or something that at least clear something up.

 

[Bychipi]

The following updates will make everything clearer, my friend.

 

[Gumshoe08]

I was hoping the game is more Netori rather than Netorare

 

[Bychipi]

The dialogue has a neutral tone, which is why it feels like a novel, as you say; even if it's unpleasant for some, it's the best way to translate it so that those from countries with different accents can understand it.

 

[OWSam000]

The mc said the Monica husband situation is getting his nerve, so am I. Hope you really prove your words.

 

[Bychipi]

I was hoping the game is more Netori rather than Netorare

I don't know the difference between netori and netorare. Hehe.

 

[CoffeeSaint]

I don't know the difference between netori and netorare. Hehe.

hey, Bychipi,

in a very simplistic view — and the way I see it:

• "Netori:" the main character is the one who cheats — i.e. has a sexual relationship with a friend's partner;
• "Netorase:" the main character is the one who shares a partner or participates in partner-swapping;
• "Netorare:" the main character is the one who suffers the cheating — i.e. the MC is a damn cuckold.

hope this helps, mate.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Not a bad game but I had to laugh when he gets asked his age and he says 18 he's had some life haha , has three kids who are now going to university, was married but she passed away and had a successful business which he sold and is now retired haha boy is living the dream , having sex straight out of the womb by the sounds of it

 

[Bychipi]

hey, Bychipi,

in a very simplistic view — and the way I see it:

• "Netori:" the main character is the one who cheats — i.e. has a sexual relationship with a friend's partner;
• "Netorase:" the main character is the one who shares a partner or participates in partner-swapping;
• "Netorare:" the main character is the one who suffers the cheating — i.e. the MC is a damn cuckold.

hope this helps, mate.

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Thanks for the explanation.
This game doesn't have netorare, sorry for the spoiler, haha.

 

[14137]

Good new game.good tits bimbo.
I will bookmark this as a great little game on my computer.
If you play this game with a relaxed attitude, it will feel great.
Don't compare it with well-known works or big productions of famous companies. no need.

 

[Bychipi]

Good new game.good tits bimbo.
I will bookmark this as a great little game on my computer.
If you play this game with a relaxed attitude, it will feel great.
Don't compare it with well-known works or big productions of famous companies. no need.

I'm glad you liked it, my friend. Thanks for your comment.