VN Ren'Py A Promise Best Left Unkept - Aya Edition [v0.8.0] [Hangover Cat]

[FoutL]

These people just have a problem with their own erroneous idea of a strong-willed woman. Aya fans have once again hoped that this character would never go down like Laura, not only because they completely misunderstand Aya as a person, but because they have some weird idea that Aya can easily handle a situation like this. In other words, Aya fans imagine that she's some kind of superhuman because that's the only thing they got from this character in the original game.

By the way, the same completely stale debate has been going on for decades with Rei vs Asuka in Neon Genesis Evangelion. Aya and Asuka fanatics are the same kind of people who have infinitely high expectations of a strong woman that they might find personal redemption in her. It's just as ridiculous as it sounds. Maybe to compensate for their own helplessness or because they would love to be protected by a competent woman, either way they both have way too high emotional attachments and high expectations, and complain about the writing when the cognitive dissonance kicks in and gives them a reality check.

This has to be cope

 

[HermesBinner]

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These people just have a problem with their own erroneous idea of a strong-willed woman. Aya fans have once again hoped that this character would never go down like Laura, not only because they completely misunderstand Aya as a person, but because they have some weird idea that Aya can easily handle a situation like this. In other words, Aya fans imagine that she's some kind of superhuman because that's the only thing they got from this character in the original game.

By the way, the same completely stale debate has been going on for decades with Rei vs Asuka in Neon Genesis Evangelion. Aya and Asuka fanatics are the same kind of people who have infinitely high expectations of a strong woman that they might find personal redemption in her. It's just as ridiculous as it sounds. Maybe to compensate for their own helplessness or because they would love to be protected by a competent woman, either way they both have way too high emotional attachments and high expectations, and complain about the writing when the cognitive dissonance kicks in and gives them a reality check.

Bro psychoanalyzing an entire forum ☠☠☠. Seriously the audacity of some people lmao

 

[mickster101]

Quick question: in this and the original game, how many women can Luca hook up with?

 

[Requiem1102]

All these people complaining yet acting like they're not just gonna be back next month lol.

 

[Tyyyr]

People complain because they care. People that have given up no longer comment here.
The opposite of love isn't hate but indifference.

 

[BL45T]

All these people complaining yet acting like they're not just gonna be back next month lol.

Not just to directly quote your comment but this entire idea that the dev has. I didn't mention it in the comment before but its easy to be sarcastic with "oh those cucks on the piracy forum gives me "constructive criticism"". I get it, it doesn't sound good that people shit on your game(you as in hangover, not you). And yes people will return to the game next month, I did. I didn't like the last few updates yet I liked this one because of its porn aspects. What I don't understand is this idea of vilifying people because they are disappointed in you. The "constructive criticism" was very clear and very evident. It will not sound meaningful if he don't listen to it. These people who comment are not his enemies but people who has a high opinion of him after the really good game he created with the first one. But yeah I think the message is not getting across so the best thing for all of us is to enjoy the updates for what they are and like I said before the H scenes are damn good. There is no point in repeating the same criticism if its not getting across, it just sours the mood.

 

[NovaBlast@99]

Eeew, what the fuck was this update with gay shit? Aya and Luca tricks Harry into eating Luca's cum filled lasgna? Sheesh, looks like people complaining about Luca being gay and obsessed with Harry got to the dev's head and he made that theory real

 

[Chinel]

Eeew, what the fuck was this update with gay shit? Aya and Luca tricks Harry into eating Luca's cum filled lasgna? Sheesh, looks like people complaining about Luca being gay and obsessed with Harry got to the dev's head and he made that theory real

Luca is gay. For some reason he has a hard on the idea of having Harry consuming his cum like some femboy.

 

[HangoverCat]

Not just to directly quote your comment but this entire idea that the dev has. I didn't mention it in the comment before but its easy to be sarcastic with "oh those cucks on the piracy forum gives me "constructive criticism"". I get it, it doesn't sound good that people shit on your game(you as in hangover, not you). And yes people will return to the game next month, I did. I didn't like the last few updates yet I liked this one because of its porn aspects. What I don't understand is this idea of vilifying people because they are disappointed in you. The "constructive criticism" was very clear and very evident. It will not sound meaningful if he don't listen to it. These people who comment are not his enemies but people who has a high opinion of him after the really good game he created with the first one. But yeah I think the message is not getting across so the best thing for all of us is to enjoy the updates for what they are and like I said before the H scenes are damn good. There is no point in repeating the same criticism if its not getting across, it just sours the mood.

People telling me that Aya is not the same as the original and that I should write a completely different game because she would never be corrupted by the current story is not constructive at all. The fact of the matter is that if Aya cannot be corrupted by the current story, then she would never be corrupted period. And if she cannot be corrupted, then what's the point of writing a game for her? This is not an easy story to write and anyone who makes it seem otherwise knows nothing about storytelling.

Some people think Aya is not the same, fair enough. But I think she is the same. And since I'm the writer, I guess people will just have to deal with that fact.

 

[ItsNotUs]

People telling me that Aya is not the same as the original and that I should write a completely different game because she would never be corrupted by the current story is not constructive at all. The fact of the matter is that if Aya cannot be corrupted by the current story, then she would never be corrupted period. And if she cannot be corrupted, then what's the point of writing a game for her? This is not an easy story to write and anyone who makes it seem otherwise knows nothing about storytelling.

Some people think Aya is not the same, fair enough. But I think she is the same. And since I'm the writer, I guess people will just have to deal with that fact.

I'm the writer
A writer who can’t come up with anything new, the game about Aya practically repeats Laura, the other games are almost similar to each other! Is this writer's block? Or have you outlived as a writer? Because there is nothing new in your scribbles and games - everything is the same, just in different wrappers!

 

[FoutL]

Discussion got very heated very quickly

 

[ItsNotUs]

This is exactly what he means by not knowing anything about storytelling lol. If you've read the game and think that it's a repeat of Laura or that there is nothing new then you're proving his point exactly. I don't really even understand how someone could read this game and think it's a copy of the first game

Same characters, same story!
- Laura - cum sendwich
- Aya - cum lozainya
Storytelling or "copy-pasting"?

 

[HangoverCat]

I'm the writer
A writer who can’t come up with anything new, the game about Aya practically repeats Laura, the other games are almost similar to each other! Is this writer's block? Or have you outlived as a writer? Because there is nothing new in your scribbles and games - everything is the same, just in different wrappers!

How constructive. Thank you.

 

[Zasor]

Same characters, same story!
- Laura - cum sendwich
- Aya - cum lozainya
Storytelling or "copy-pasting"?

True, it would have been much better if Aya had been abducted by aliens. But without any penetration, as that would be too close to the original. A 800k word slow burn genjutsu, everything is an illusion. The game ends with it being just a dream, last scene is a mirror revealing the reader has been a clown all along.

 

[8947289hkd]

i gotta have hard agree i don't know if this is storytelling or "copy-pasting"
- laura - has sex
- aya - has sex
there's even a character named harry in both stories who looks similar

no originality at all. there's even netorare in both...

 

[xeratzy]

True, it would have been much better if Aya had been abducted by aliens. But without any penetration, as that would be too close to the original. A 800k word slow burn genjutsu, everything is an illusion. The game ends with it being just a dream, last scene is a mirror revealing the reader has been a clown all along.

Better add a unicorn that makes people into willing cucks by stabbing them, much more appealing plot and would def make it more realistic.

 

[ZUBiDAM]

Same characters, same story!
- Laura - cum sendwich
- Aya - cum lozainya
Storytelling or "copy-pasting"?

good guy wins in the end?
yes so that's the majority of any fiction, it's pretty much a rule.
in ntr the Heroine gets corrupted, that's a rule.
in 99% of the games here there is mc pushing his dick between a girl's cheeks, are they all the same?
just giving one example of something similar between two seperate works doesn't make them exactly the same.

 

[Requiem1102]

Luca is gay. For some reason he has a hard on the idea of having Harry consuming his cum like some femboy.

would be a funny ass bonus scene if he ntr'd harry so he could turn bro into his bitch LMAOOOOOOOOOO

 

[xcalibar4]

So there's gonna be 2 ending at-least!!
I hated this variant of Harry more than Laure variant but in this update at-least he is coming around.
Maybe this time Aya will understand that Harry is human like everyone else with flaws and faults.
And Luca will be dealt with this time for sure!! I know wishful thinking , then when will he corrupt Sara & Laura with Aya's help?

 

[Requiem1102]

So there's gonna be 2 ending at-least!!
I hated this variant of Harry more than Laure variant but in this update at-least he is coming around.
Maybe this time Aya will understand that Harry is human like everyone else with flaws and faults.
And Luca will be dealt with this time for sure!! I know wishful thinking , then when will he corrupt Sara & Laura with Aya's help?

i dont think theres gonna be that much of a change


Ending A. Harry goes into the infirmary mentions laura as Aya gets fully corrupted threesome scene with laura and aya whatever happens to harry happens either be it his death or abandonment


Ending B. Harry doesnt go into the infirmary Aya prob doesnt get fully corrupted (i doubt it though) either she doesnt kills Luca and/or her father after Luca tries to make her have a threesome with Laura or she fails gets corrupted and we have a oblivious cuck ending for Harry since it would be likely that harry doesnt chase after Aya when shes going to sneak out if he doesnt enter the infirmary