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Urfin jus

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If that is the intention, then you sure managed it pretty well, he even push me away with the way he act to Emily, it exact one of the type of guys I never hanged out with and avoid. It feels insecure and at same time somewhat controling. And the insecurity confused me as when he makes love with her he suddenly an alpha male. Makes me wonder are there really such kinda of people out there that be confident in bed and insecure the minute their girl is out sight? He sure is a real tool that need a very very patient person to be with.
It's not enough to be husband and wife, you also have to become friends and lovers, so that later you don't have to look for them on the side, and you want to say that the girl doesn't like flirting with other guys and doesn't want to please someone else.
 
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Fitharia

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It's not enough to be husband and wife, you also have to become friends and lovers, so that later you don't have to look for them on the side, and you want to say that the girl doesn't like flirting with other guys and doesn't want to please someone else.
That I know, in a relation it important to have trust in eachother, a good communication and yes friendship and love is also a big thing. The communication though in this vn is lacking, she doesn't give him heads up on that she going be late or that it went on longer then expected, but the same he does, he goes out without telling her he does. SO yes it one of the worst things to do in a relation, giving your other significant part the doubts is he/she truthfull or does he/she cheat on me.
 

Urfin jus

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That I know, in a relation it important to have trust in eachother, a good communication and yes friendship and love is also a big thing. The communication though in this vn is lacking, she doesn't give him heads up on that she going be late or that it went on longer then expected, but the same he does, he goes out without telling her he does. SO yes it one of the worst things to do in a relation, giving your other significant part the doubts is he/she truthfull or does he/she cheat on me.
In war, trust - but verify. In the market, verify - without trusting.
In love - trust without verifying... Otherwise it will turn into war or a market.
 

Dodz1984

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The changes were subtle but well done. This is one of the best introductions when you look at all the games of the same "genre" (it is safe to say that NTR phone games are a genre now). The game has a huge potential to be the best of its kind. And I agree with the other people when they say that the BBC trope is getting super annoying. Pretty please, do not put BNWO in the game, it is the most fucked up thing in the Cuckold/NTR fetish and it is an extremely racist trope, I hate it and usually abandon everything that has it.
Good job guys, I can't wait to see what will happen next.
 

Dodz1984

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Yeah. Great reply.
The thing is, most of these writers don't actually understand what NTR is. It's not some pervert weirdo loser with some kind of penile problem getting off on his cheating wife or girlfriend. NTR is about taking a good, loyal, upstanding person - wife, husband, boyfriend or girlfriend - and corrupting them to the point where they give up their loyalty and leave their partner for the person corrupting them. Most husband's in NTR are over worked salarymen that spend almost every waking hour at work neglecting their wife and household. The wife is alone and lonely and trying to keep a so.id household. They are usual really pretty and easy to attract stalkers and admirers that see the man of the house is never around, so they move in to claim her. That is real NTR. And if Liam becomes that kind of husband it opens the door to others to try and take Emily away from him.

I think one of the positives that my guys have, and one of the leading advantages is they have me, a real girl on the team. A girl that not only understands this stuff but has experience with it. Like you said. I go to clubs. With my friends. Usually our guys are with us. Most guys - if not a majority of these writers - don't know what it's like to have your girl enter a wet t-shirt contest. I've been there several times. I can share those experiences. I was a cam girl. I can give my experiences. I've been harassed at work. More experiences. Experiences guys don't have and make up. All because I'm at the club does not mean I'm cheating. If I dance with another man, does not mean I'm cheating. If my guy isn't there, what else am I going to do? Guys, go shopping and clubbing with your girls. Put down the video games for a night.

Liam. Sex isn't his issue. He's always confident sexually where others aren't. In fact he takes out a lot of his anxiety and frustration sexually with Emily. And yes she knows this. It's one reason she chooses to go to the gym. She doesn't think she can keep up with Liam and someone more sexually powerful might take him from her. Which is the other reason she goes nuclear in that fight. Emily has her own insecurities. Liam leaving her or being drawn to another woman makes her anxious. So she does things, like going to the gym to make herself more attractive to Liam and feel better about herself. Other people see Emily as a sexy object of desire. Emily only feels that way when Liam lusts for her. If Liam pushes her away or neglects her, she might start paying attention to what other men think of her. That's real NTR :)
It is awesome to keep things realistic, and it sure give us a better experience, but I must say that women cheat even when the boyfriend isn't an annoying insecure bitch (like this MC when we choose the anxiety answer).
I actually tried to give anxiety answers since I knew this would push her to cheat, but the writing is so damn good that it got on my nerves and I stopped doing that.
But I must add my personal experience here: I have never been this annoying or insecure with any of my SOs during life and got my pair of horns anyway because sometimes people just cheat out of pure lust or boredom.
 

Dodz1984

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Don't worry, BNWO and gratuitous BBC is not what A Wife's Loyalty is about. So I hope that reassures and calms some of you. There are two black men in A Wife's Loyalty but that's it. They are actual characters and not walking penises. There are reasons for things, not just having a fuck scene thrown at you just because.
Thank you so much. I can't wait to see the next updates.
 

Urfin jus

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Yeah. Great reply.
The thing is, most of these writers don't actually understand what NTR is. It's not some pervert weirdo loser with some kind of penile problem getting off on his cheating wife or girlfriend. NTR is about taking a good, loyal, upstanding person - wife, husband, boyfriend or girlfriend - and corrupting them to the point where they give up their loyalty and leave their partner for the person corrupting them. Most husband's in NTR are over worked salarymen that spend almost every waking hour at work neglecting their wife and household. The wife is alone and lonely and trying to keep a so.id household. They are usual really pretty and easy to attract stalkers and admirers that see the man of the house is never around, so they move in to claim her. That is real NTR. And if Liam becomes that kind of husband it opens the door to others to try and take Emily away from him.

I think one of the positives that my guys have, and one of the leading advantages is they have me, a real girl on the team. A girl that not only understands this stuff but has experience with it. Like you said. I go to clubs. With my friends. Usually our guys are with us. Most guys - if not a majority of these writers - don't know what it's like to have your girl enter a wet t-shirt contest. I've been there several times. I can share those experiences. I was a cam girl. I can give my experiences. I've been harassed at work. More experiences. Experiences guys don't have and make up. All because I'm at the club does not mean I'm cheating. If I dance with another man, does not mean I'm cheating. If my guy isn't there, what else am I going to do? Guys, go shopping and clubbing with your girls. Put down the video games for a night.

Liam. Sex isn't his issue. He's always confident sexually where others aren't. In fact he takes out a lot of his anxiety and frustration sexually with Emily. And yes she knows this. It's one reason she chooses to go to the gym. She doesn't think she can keep up with Liam and someone more sexually powerful might take him from her. Which is the other reason she goes nuclear in that fight. Emily has her own insecurities. Liam leaving her or being drawn to another woman makes her anxious. So she does things, like going to the gym to make herself more attractive to Liam and feel better about herself. Other people see Emily as a sexy object of desire. Emily only feels that way when Liam lusts for her. If Liam pushes her away or neglects her, she might start paying attention to what other men think of her. That's real NTR :)
Thank you for making us think that if you don't do it, someone else will. If you don't write, someone else will. If you don't call, someone else will, you won't be there, someone else will. If you don't take matters into your own hands, someone else will. There will always be someone else
 

Urfin jus

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It is awesome to keep things realistic, and it sure give us a better experience, but I must say that women cheat even when the boyfriend isn't an annoying insecure bitch (like this MC when we choose the anxiety answer).
I actually tried to give anxiety answers since I knew this would push her to cheat, but the writing is so damn good that it got on my nerves and I stopped doing that.
But I must add my personal experience here: I have never been this annoying or insecure with any of my SOs during life and got my pair of horns anyway because sometimes people just cheat out of pure lust or boredom.
I've asked my wife a lot in my life. Darling, look at dandruff in my head again - to which she replied - it's not dandruff, my love. these are horn shavings.
 

Urfin jus

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I dunno. I've known a lot of bachelor's with some really nice horns.
And some wicked uses for them haha
Sounds like advice to men. If your eyes are covered by soft little hands, your back is pressed by lush breasts and a plump belly, and from behind you hear: "Guess who?"... In any case, answer: "John, is it you?"... Believe me, it will be better this way.
 

stahalle

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Silken of D3sire ok so i dont go through all these comments but i read you care about not to have Inconsistency. so i always used to stay calm, trust emily and ignored lunas flirting. so here is my issue 1. the fight after meeting with luna. it makes no sense when the mc and emily didnt even had a fight in the first place, it just lets emily look like the one who is overreacting. 2. when sitting in the cafe with jack the mc says he saw the video in the girls chat but if you trust emily the mc never saw that video. and 3 after returning home emily talks about the mc hiding things. what did he hide? he always said the truth and tried to explain to her what happend. the first time he ever hid something was after that talk, when he got the pic from luna while watching the movie.
 

SpyderArachnid

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Thank you for that awesome comment!
-Inconsistency is a big issue with me that I try really hard to avoid. Sometimes you can
miss some things but all in all I am very focused on keeping things consistent.
Liam and Emily have several arguments about several things depending on what direction
You go with Liam's Anxiety. Let's start there:

Liam and Emily have known each other since first year college. I won't go into spoilers.
Luna and Emily are best friends and see themselves as sisters. Liam wasn't always
a high anxiety person, but events in his life made him this way. Anxiety is his inner
demon. Liam is an introvert. Not a major one but an introverted person all the same.
Emily is an extrovert and loves her freedom. Liam loves Emily for her free spirit but
it scares him that he can't measure up to that and she might slip away from him.
So he tries to be more assertive and confident to make her -and himself- happy.

Being confident doesn't come naturally to him like it does Emily.
And his anxiety can wear down onher and confidence as well.
Unlike other AVNs, Emily is paying attention to your choices and reacting to them.
A more confident Liam makes her happy. An Anxiety controlled Liam effects her
negatively and will eat away at her own confidence. So they do argue.
But even a high confidence Liam will sometimes slip up and give in to his
Anxiety.

Luna, Emily and Liam have history. They were a tight bunch once getting into all
sorts of adventures. But now Liam and Emily are married with careers that matter
to them. Luna is still caught in that need for adventure mode. All I will say there.
Emily goes off like that because she's reacting to Liam's constant pressure that she
misses check ins and doesn't always keep in communicaton with him. When he doesn't tell her about Luna, she feels he is doing it deliberately to strike back at her. And him saying he thought Luna told her is seen as just an excuse. Even Hazel and Jack tell him this. Jack takes it a step further and tells Liam to never trust Luna. But Liam is also
in the same boat as Emily. He knows how Luna is but she is family to him as well.
So can't believe e Luna would betray him or Emily.

Hope that helps. Inconsistency wise, I do pay attention to that so don't worry :)
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LUISIL

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Wow.. so.. I'm going to do a review of a review haha
Because I just have to haha. Here.. we... go:

StrawberryCheese83

2. She is the Princess on a pea...her Husband is the usual whiny wimp who lives on an island called please-dont-leave me and Wifey sailed over to the Island of bye-bye where she doesn t care at all (i need my freedom, my (toxic) friends, booze and clubnights and yeah...loooong working hours);
3. The usual BBC is also there. Boring and annoying.
4. The usual bunch of really toxic friends, who are trying to break up their Marriage

Liam does not live on an island and it is not called don't leave me haha
To say Emily doesn't care about Liam is like.. are you okay Strawberry? Do you need help?
Katherine and Luna are actually not toxic. Just selfish. This is a Prologue. And introduction to the characters. There's more development to come, I promise.
Luna likes the club life. I ,like the club life. Guess I'm toxic. I like vodka mixers. Could live on them. Nothing is far fetching here.

long working hours. I wouldn't know anything about that. What is sleeping again?
good thing i can type and give a pro handy at the same time haha Boyfriend never has to feel neglected.

no black cocks were injured.... in the making of this Prologue.

If you see a black men and immediately jump to BBC!!!!!..seek help.

Luna is married. Katherine is in a relationship. Neither are broken. Somehow.
No one is currently out to break up Liam and Emily's marriage. Unless you make
Liam a neurotic disaster.

I get it you hate NTR. With all the bad misrepresented NTR out there, I get it.
you're jaded. But please don't make stuff up in reviews. It makes you misleading.
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Wife to friend: My Boss is a creep who behaves creepily.

Boss creeps on wife, in front of MC.

MC to wife: Your boss is creep.

Wife to MC: OMG!! Hes NOT! A! CREEP!

10/10 writing. Drop the bitch.
 
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Wife to friend: My Boss is a creep who behaves creepily.

Boss creeps on wife, in front of MC.

MC to wife: Your boss is creep.

Wife to MC: OMG!! Hes NOT! A! CREEP!

10/10 writing. Kill the bitch.
The naivity of this wife is exhausting, but that's also what makes this game good. you can sort of understand the MCs stressed feelings.
 
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