VN - Ren'Py - Blood of the Dragon [v0.2.1] [Twin Axe Games]

For being 0.1.0 its pretty good, its short but so far the story is good and the LIs are sexy.
I am interested to see what's up with the MC and what this world is like, The renders are pretty good. The combat system is meh so far, never been a big fan of turn based combat in VNs like this so hopefully they add the option to just skip the fight like others have.
We need a text box option and the UI needs some work, I prefer when I can right click and the save menu pops up instead of a option menu like this VN
Hopefully updates are steady, it is deff a VN I will be keeping my eye on to see how it progresses.

soo...

• the premise is good.
• the few characters (personality and renders) I've seen so far are fine.

but

• the combat is RPS with different names and a rest option. bleh.
• and the GUI needs either a text size option, a text box with opacity option, or an ADA-compliant (contrast) option. as it is today, I can't read most of it on my admittedly large, high res screen.

I'm normally into this kind of thing, and I hope to keep reading/ playing along; but the GUI and combat make that more of a chore than I care for at the moment. I'll check back in later versions to see whether those are addressed. for now... good enough for some, but too annoying for me to put in the work to play.

Loved first chapter ,the pacing and story so far is interesting ,also being a harem lover,harem I welcome with open arms
It will not please monogamy players and I personally loved the combat , can't wait for next update
Loved the elf girl even if she is not a real li,hope to see more of her
Hope the developer keeps this spirit and thanks for share dev ,goes to my watch list

Though it's very short, what's in their is very solid. Great 0.1 I'd say. Looking forward to see where this goes. Renders are very pretty. The turn based combat is interesting, would love to see new powers and moves. Best of luck. Hope this game is as good in the future updates as well

VERSION 0.1.0: Very good, but needs more work, devil is in the details.

PROS:

1. Lovely and gorgeous models
2. Animations are very good, only short and...see CONS
3. Sound is good, fits and sexual ones are not AI (least from what I could tell)
4. Writing and structure is good but there are some typos and grammatical errors, some proof reading is needed.
5. Nice lewd scenes and you don't wait until mid game for the first vanilla one as some developers love doing, so Yay for that

CONS:

1. Animations are short and stop while there is action, almost like they were there as an idea but never went all the way. Animations in this kind of game, with these kinds of high quality models are IMO critical, you do the game an injustice not having more. A still here and there are fine, but during lewd scenes there should be more animation, that goes with the sounds, now its only sound and stills...not really great IMO
2. More still images during sex scenes would be nice, where it actually follows the text. e.g.
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3. Some images in scenes are not in sequence or do the scene justice, as mentioned more still images are needed to make lewd scene better and review of content is needed, right now it feels half baked IMO.
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4. As with some scenes where images are not following script, so does sound start with script but images not, silly but should be done right IMO.
5. Combat (if first combat is indicator) is a waste of time, slows game down, does not provide anything of interest to the VN. No skill is required, its not like a proper DnD game with stats that matter, gear, build etc. IMO, just take it out.
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6. SUGGESTION: Regarding combat, I would suggest going for something like the system Telltale games employs, where you have ques to push up, down, left or right with timers. Adding maybe a hidden scene into success or just having an option to skip it completely. This could make combat or any scenario more dynamic with potentially alternative outcomes, other than die or live...

TLDR: Needs some work, a bit of extra here and there, add some refinement and you have potentially one of the best games here. I highly recommend you try it, support the dev (provided they pay attention to critique)

This is both a great looking game, and a whole helluva lot of fun. I hated to see it end, and can't wait to get back to that world! Good job, Dev! Now we just need a mod to make Mary Beth and Lila "real family" heh.

At first, I assumed this was another Game of Thrones parody game and almost didn't try it - I'm glad I did. Low fantasy, medieval setting, turn based combat, a quite decent H scene to boot. Check it out, and if you like it enough, toss the dev some money yeah?

Played the demo, feels a lot like Of lust and pride, which is now abandoned unfortunately. But i can definitely say that this has a lot of potential, the story looks good from the way its played out in the demo. The combat feels good though a bit simple. However i think once magic is implemented, it'll be a lot more engaging. I hope there are options to explore areas in the future, be it in traditional rpg way or in a VN way. The characters look good and the H-scenes are erotic as well. Overall, looking forward to how this game progresses. (First time rating a game btw, hope i didn't do too badly?)

[v0.1.0]

This was a dope first release. The action scenes are very well done, and I thought the turn based combat was fun too as imo the fights are short and sweet. The writing is high quality and has very few grammar/spelling mistakes. The renders and anims are excellent, and the adult scene is great. It even has sex sound effects which is quite rare. Wish the dev all the best.

5- star placeholder for now will have to see more to be sure. probably somewhere between 4 and 5

The writing is well done and the charecters introduced are likeable with a good flow. Dialog seems natural and not edgy or cringe.

The renders are clean with attractive women. bonus points for not having the same cookie cutter vaginas you see in every daz game hopefully its a trend with different looking ones for each woman.

There is only 1 animation so far a BJ scene and it is well done with slight lighting change. There is sex in the same scene but for some reason it is not animated but it does have multiple positions and angles aswell as sounds.

Turn based combat is simple rock-paper-scissors esk though the unwinnable part of the totorial serves no purpose.

The font is a little too small some textbox options would be a nice addition.

Excellent start, the game has a story that can become quite deep if the dev knows how to develop it, the characters have different personalities that make them unique and the combat system, although it is not the best, it fulfills the objective of the game very well.

This shows an excellent potential, highly recommended.