- Oct 25, 2019
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The lesbian stuff somehow feels worse than the cuck scenes because there's this sugary undertone which is just nasty, as in, "see how sweet they are?, how hot their pure, rax, sexual nature is?, maybe true love was sapphic all along!, and you could be part of this too unless... You don't want to" and then your options are being super into it,, but casual, being super into it while also wanting to cuddle or saying no, but almost as if ashamed to do so
Seriously, at least with the whole ntr tangent I know the fetish is emotional distress and in the cuck variant, make the champion even more of a fool by playing with their insecurities (futadom does this constantly but that's another beast), which is hard to take seriously because almost every companion and love interest is a massive slut, despite knowing their grubby fingers itch to write their self insert banging that one character that you, the player, are invested on
Brienne because of that will always be at risk, and if they cared less about pissing off their costumers you know she would get a dong the size of a house, or being stuffed with a dong (not yours) the size of a house
Tobs is... Complicated, I get what he tries to convey almost always, he's just really dumb about getting his point across, as in, you want Kinu to learn about maturity and not living at her parent's shadows and all of that?, well mature people know that is ok to ask for help, and good parents also want their children to be self reliant, but that doesn't mean that letting them at the hands of some psycho is somewhat reasonable because "she totally can take it"
Seriously Kinu, the guy wanted to gut you and your siblings, including mini Kohaku who happens to be a baby. There's zero reason to just shrug about it and wait for part three
If I were a competent writer and could work my way around modding I would like to try my hand at it, your daughter doesn't like you and you can barely understand her, and no one is really at fault. Now that she's here you want to be part of her life, because your other kids get to see you on a regular basis, but she doesn't care. You're a stranger for her, what is more, her cultural background makes you an uncouth barbarian, and almost every other kitsune besides your mom, and mostly other outcasts from your society, dislike them or see them as a fun novelty that should be keep at a safe distance. Your titles and the recognition of basically everyone that matters being meaningless, this counting her very own god who came to the mortal realm to meet you (he does this casually but still)
At no point you, as the player, get to question this. The whole process is a never ending line of, "yes dear, yes I'll stay here and nod and smile while you do your thing"
Now there could be something there, about how despite not understanding each other, your daughter loves you and you love her, and that she better accept that she's also part barbarian because she is, like it or not, she is from the same shitty place where all other kitsunes dump their unwanted
Whole thing feels like Kinu punishing both set of parents because of what her mom did but only you as the champion gets to feel bad, and man, I don't want to be part of whatever exercise of self therapy was put there, it doesn't feel right
Punishing the reader because you have an imaginary fight with them doesn't work, in fact, it will hurt your work. Savin should know this and learn to curb that really, really stupid tendency they all have to write either from spite or the flavor of the week, keep at least a somewhat consistent tone all across the game
