I'm having a lot of fun writing this event! The rough draft is nearly complete. It should be a great event for the game. Happily, I laughed numerous times at my own writing. A good stress reliever at least lol.
Just some personal thoughts... if the writing for the game is a good stress reliever, you could use it as a means to vent! More specifically, you can cuck the shit out of the player base (potentially optionally) if they rub you the wrong way.
After all it's a game about being evil. Though... to a certain extent, I kind of do find some aspects of the game interesting in terms of messaging. (VtM specifically tries to make the player in that ttrpg play the role of the bad guys to kind of instill the message of "Don't be a monster in real life." by kind of showing all the complications that come with it, and how easy it is for someone to lose their humanity.)
So when I play EVIL 2, I, by parental conditioning, keep expecting the other shoe to drop, and maybe in you all's writing, eventually it will.
But at the same time, I think in a lot of the VN events to the arc, I find it intriguing. On one hand, I've managed to coerce/kidnap/purchase hundreds of women into slavery to make my life easy, but on the other hand, as an individual, I'm blowing my money, "saving" some of the women who I happen to come across.
Kind of makes for an interesting moral dilemma, since at the end of the day, this is an interesting portrayal almost of enriching the few at the expense of the many.
So I guess, where I'm going with all of this, is that you all (you, noobtrain, and the others actively working on the project) do have an interesting game here, with almost thematic gold in the way it kind of bucks expectations, and I think subtly introduces this human complexity.
I don't know if it was intentional or happened by coincidence, but either way, it IS really well done. And if these weren't things you were thinking about already, then carry on, and by no means let my framing of my experience influence or dictate the direction you plan on taking the game.
It's always interesting when things somewhat defy conventional expectation and end up somewhat showing a mirror of truth to life.