English:..........8/10
User Interface:...5/10
User Experience:..7/10
Art:..............7/10
Dialogue:.........3/10
Story:............4/10
Opinion:..........4/10................
Avg:...........5.43/10 [2.71/5]
Parts of this seem familiar, so at the current time of writing, I don't remember if I've played through an earlier version of this or not. It obviously didn't leave much of an impression if it did, at worst. Anyway here at the opening, MC is made out to be some superior altruist that, after his family is murdered, he doesn't even revert to crime to keep himself alive. He's also capable of swimming to save someone against the current of a river. Later revealed that he was barely standing due to starvation no less. So tiny issues in the writing that just compound on themselves. And after meeting the queen, I remembered, I HAVE played this. The only red flag I get so far is "Chapter 4 Part 1" Why is it not just chapter 4? What justifies it to be part 1? It's already episodic in nature, what is the point in cutting it up even further? Even still this all just feels like "MC walks from room to room and all the girls love him for no particular reason." All while riding off the namesake of a character from The Boys. But really all I can hope for at this point is to not be annoyed by every part of this.
The story starts out with the world building, bad people do bad, queen built her empire. Then you see MC's family die and it cuts to him saving the princess from the aforementioned river. She fell in love immediately. Remember that line, it's going to happen with EVERY female you come across, I guess except the queen. Anywho, the queen adopts MC for saving the princess and thus begins the domino effect of nothing but amazing and good natured things happening to MC. He's adopted by the queen, because her daughter is attracted to him. Time skip, you meet Sabrina, a nervous maid that is working in place of her mother, and loves MC because he's the only male in the vicinity. Then he meets Abigail, a hobbit teacher that he somehow met before. She also exclaims that he's already smarter than most and remembers things from infancy. So, super smart, add that to the list. Right after, he trains with Miranda, somehow he, a rookie with ZERO experience, almost out maneuvers captain of the guard. He also can shoot a bow perfectly. Add perfect fighter with no need to train to the list. She also had tackled him to the ground and started to swoon over him right there. Move into the bathroom with the queen, "Wow he has big dick" She's smitten right then. And currently it is unclear what age he's supposed to be but I thought he was still a mid teenager at this point, so it felt a little weird. Also every sentence trails off when they allude to the queens brother, who I'm 90% certain was MCs dad, queueing up that dumb incest tag. Eventually you meet Maryn, she can see the future and knew before she even met him that she'll be in love with MC. He also has affinities for every kind of magic, so super strong and super powerful, add them to the list. Gary-Stu is on his way.
Onto chapter two, not only do I realize how short that chapter was. Which adds to my concerns about the ch 4 pt 1 stuff. But nothing really happened, and it time skips to MC being 18 or so. No character/relationship building, just "Yeah we had years of fun, wish you were there!" This is a recurring theme in so many of these AVNs, they skip the parts that would make you care, tell you you should, then just have yes or no sex options. It even gives a bunch of nondescript "You trained with this person, you learned a lot and had great times." But the opening went into some deeper lore? Why can't we see any of this? The whole point of a story is to get invested in characters, but it gets more and more apparent that may only be me thinking that. This also subscribes to the writing style of the characters having long, drawn-out thoughts, then saying those thoughts out loud right after. Why did we need to hear the same thing twice over and over? But most of chapter two is MC as an adult getting into sexually charged situations, one by one, to illustrate that all the women want to be with him. As if they haven't been obvious about that already. And it's all in the same day too. One of the odd things is the two mothers essentially say stuff like "I'm so happy you make my daughter happy, lets have sex." All leading to actual sex with Ariana that night. But the ONLY thing of note is the scene where MC's obscenely comically large penis, that essentially is long enough to poke himself in the neck, won't go in. And just the tip entering makes her scream out in orgasm. Whoever made this had to be laughing the whole time, there is no universe anyone thought "Yeah, this is sensual and sexy." It goes on forever too. Followed immediately by her saying "I'm a cuckquean, please have sex with others." Leading to "Look at all the fantasy women it will take 6 years to get to fuck." Wow! Cool. Not gonna wait.
Chapter 3 is just a victory lap to get more intimate with the LIs. The only thing that happens is MC loses his virginity and the whole world knows, literally. So this story is quite literally going to be MC's penis is the solution to everyone's problems. It's almost wholly asking if you want sex with the girls you've met. The story handles at the beginning and end just foreshadow that MC will be the macguffin. And I started to completely lose interest around when chapter 4 starts. None of the dialogue matters. It's just there to fill out space between getting from girl A to girl B. Chapter 4 just ends abruptly because they couldn't think of a good way to get to sex with the next girl, so they farted out an update. And MC starts acting like he's god's gift to women, which is ungodly annoying. But the saddest part is, with the story going the way it is, he probably is. They try to hint at some global conspiracy, but, I'm not sure if you noticed, all the scheming villains were women. So sex is the solution. I guarantee you will see this one around forever to milk it for what it's not worth and it will become this boring milquetoaste story where MC tries to be disgustingly wholesome then getting rewarded with sex from everybody like a couple of other longer games on this site. The clearest "inspiration" for this is about a guy that returns to his House with his Grandma.
All in all, it's nothing too special. All the women look like bimbos made of wax. The one "slow burn" interest is just that to fill a checkbox. MC is super smart, strong, intelligent, powerful, agile, and any other super- you might want to add. Boring. The description should be enough, touting the "No NTR" and "Sorry there's two 'forced' love interests" I won't go into how dumb I think some people are for feeling so attacked they're "forced" to be in a relationship in a harem game. Meanwhile they can't handle another male being in the vicinity of a certain bundle of pixels, my god. The English is good. More than a few spelling and grammar mishaps, but someone that speaks English has a direct hand in what is put out, so I have not a lot to complain about. The UI/UX is partially customized, I think the font is a bit much, but default everything else is an eyesore that needs work. The art is alright, the subsurface scattering makes everyone look like hollow wax dolls and even then they have the typical DAZ "Plastic surgeon's delight" look to them. Dialogue is either "I'm such an innocent young lad what ever do you mean?", "Haha, we're so quirky and relatable!", or "Yes! I'm your dirty slut fill me up and breed me!" Not to mention the over use of exclamation points, I can practically hear their over-dramatic sighs in my head. No one is that excited or cheerful, tone it down. The story, frankly, doesn't exist yet. We "don't" know who MC's parents are. Even though we're sure it'll be the queen's older brother and his mother is a queen somewhere, and he'd been gifted gods magic for some reason, yadda yadda. Nothing remotely interesting in terms of writing has, or WILL happen. Problems will all arise, take place, and be solved off screen, and if not, MC will be all big and tough and solve it with his penis. If your ego is so fragile you need to live vicariously through Gary-Stu here, here ya go. If you're looking for a fantasy tale that is well written with sexual elements, move along my kindred spirit, you unfortunately won't find that here.
User Interface:...5/10
User Experience:..7/10
Art:..............7/10
Dialogue:.........3/10
Story:............4/10
Opinion:..........4/10................
Avg:...........5.43/10 [2.71/5]
Parts of this seem familiar, so at the current time of writing, I don't remember if I've played through an earlier version of this or not. It obviously didn't leave much of an impression if it did, at worst. Anyway here at the opening, MC is made out to be some superior altruist that, after his family is murdered, he doesn't even revert to crime to keep himself alive. He's also capable of swimming to save someone against the current of a river. Later revealed that he was barely standing due to starvation no less. So tiny issues in the writing that just compound on themselves. And after meeting the queen, I remembered, I HAVE played this. The only red flag I get so far is "Chapter 4 Part 1" Why is it not just chapter 4? What justifies it to be part 1? It's already episodic in nature, what is the point in cutting it up even further? Even still this all just feels like "MC walks from room to room and all the girls love him for no particular reason." All while riding off the namesake of a character from The Boys. But really all I can hope for at this point is to not be annoyed by every part of this.
The story starts out with the world building, bad people do bad, queen built her empire. Then you see MC's family die and it cuts to him saving the princess from the aforementioned river. She fell in love immediately. Remember that line, it's going to happen with EVERY female you come across, I guess except the queen. Anywho, the queen adopts MC for saving the princess and thus begins the domino effect of nothing but amazing and good natured things happening to MC. He's adopted by the queen, because her daughter is attracted to him. Time skip, you meet Sabrina, a nervous maid that is working in place of her mother, and loves MC because he's the only male in the vicinity. Then he meets Abigail, a hobbit teacher that he somehow met before. She also exclaims that he's already smarter than most and remembers things from infancy. So, super smart, add that to the list. Right after, he trains with Miranda, somehow he, a rookie with ZERO experience, almost out maneuvers captain of the guard. He also can shoot a bow perfectly. Add perfect fighter with no need to train to the list. She also had tackled him to the ground and started to swoon over him right there. Move into the bathroom with the queen, "Wow he has big dick" She's smitten right then. And currently it is unclear what age he's supposed to be but I thought he was still a mid teenager at this point, so it felt a little weird. Also every sentence trails off when they allude to the queens brother, who I'm 90% certain was MCs dad, queueing up that dumb incest tag. Eventually you meet Maryn, she can see the future and knew before she even met him that she'll be in love with MC. He also has affinities for every kind of magic, so super strong and super powerful, add them to the list. Gary-Stu is on his way.
Onto chapter two, not only do I realize how short that chapter was. Which adds to my concerns about the ch 4 pt 1 stuff. But nothing really happened, and it time skips to MC being 18 or so. No character/relationship building, just "Yeah we had years of fun, wish you were there!" This is a recurring theme in so many of these AVNs, they skip the parts that would make you care, tell you you should, then just have yes or no sex options. It even gives a bunch of nondescript "You trained with this person, you learned a lot and had great times." But the opening went into some deeper lore? Why can't we see any of this? The whole point of a story is to get invested in characters, but it gets more and more apparent that may only be me thinking that. This also subscribes to the writing style of the characters having long, drawn-out thoughts, then saying those thoughts out loud right after. Why did we need to hear the same thing twice over and over? But most of chapter two is MC as an adult getting into sexually charged situations, one by one, to illustrate that all the women want to be with him. As if they haven't been obvious about that already. And it's all in the same day too. One of the odd things is the two mothers essentially say stuff like "I'm so happy you make my daughter happy, lets have sex." All leading to actual sex with Ariana that night. But the ONLY thing of note is the scene where MC's obscenely comically large penis, that essentially is long enough to poke himself in the neck, won't go in. And just the tip entering makes her scream out in orgasm. Whoever made this had to be laughing the whole time, there is no universe anyone thought "Yeah, this is sensual and sexy." It goes on forever too. Followed immediately by her saying "I'm a cuckquean, please have sex with others." Leading to "Look at all the fantasy women it will take 6 years to get to fuck." Wow! Cool. Not gonna wait.
Chapter 3 is just a victory lap to get more intimate with the LIs. The only thing that happens is MC loses his virginity and the whole world knows, literally. So this story is quite literally going to be MC's penis is the solution to everyone's problems. It's almost wholly asking if you want sex with the girls you've met. The story handles at the beginning and end just foreshadow that MC will be the macguffin. And I started to completely lose interest around when chapter 4 starts. None of the dialogue matters. It's just there to fill out space between getting from girl A to girl B. Chapter 4 just ends abruptly because they couldn't think of a good way to get to sex with the next girl, so they farted out an update. And MC starts acting like he's god's gift to women, which is ungodly annoying. But the saddest part is, with the story going the way it is, he probably is. They try to hint at some global conspiracy, but, I'm not sure if you noticed, all the scheming villains were women. So sex is the solution. I guarantee you will see this one around forever to milk it for what it's not worth and it will become this boring milquetoaste story where MC tries to be disgustingly wholesome then getting rewarded with sex from everybody like a couple of other longer games on this site. The clearest "inspiration" for this is about a guy that returns to his House with his Grandma.
All in all, it's nothing too special. All the women look like bimbos made of wax. The one "slow burn" interest is just that to fill a checkbox. MC is super smart, strong, intelligent, powerful, agile, and any other super- you might want to add. Boring. The description should be enough, touting the "No NTR" and "Sorry there's two 'forced' love interests" I won't go into how dumb I think some people are for feeling so attacked they're "forced" to be in a relationship in a harem game. Meanwhile they can't handle another male being in the vicinity of a certain bundle of pixels, my god. The English is good. More than a few spelling and grammar mishaps, but someone that speaks English has a direct hand in what is put out, so I have not a lot to complain about. The UI/UX is partially customized, I think the font is a bit much, but default everything else is an eyesore that needs work. The art is alright, the subsurface scattering makes everyone look like hollow wax dolls and even then they have the typical DAZ "Plastic surgeon's delight" look to them. Dialogue is either "I'm such an innocent young lad what ever do you mean?", "Haha, we're so quirky and relatable!", or "Yes! I'm your dirty slut fill me up and breed me!" Not to mention the over use of exclamation points, I can practically hear their over-dramatic sighs in my head. No one is that excited or cheerful, tone it down. The story, frankly, doesn't exist yet. We "don't" know who MC's parents are. Even though we're sure it'll be the queen's older brother and his mother is a queen somewhere, and he'd been gifted gods magic for some reason, yadda yadda. Nothing remotely interesting in terms of writing has, or WILL happen. Problems will all arise, take place, and be solved off screen, and if not, MC will be all big and tough and solve it with his penis. If your ego is so fragile you need to live vicariously through Gary-Stu here, here ya go. If you're looking for a fantasy tale that is well written with sexual elements, move along my kindred spirit, you unfortunately won't find that here.
