- Thread starter Belial Husk
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- Feb 16, 2018
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So far I really like what i've seen.
The Heroine gets a 9/10 , docked a point because no bush. Still excellent though! I nutted.
The Cave section could use some work. I managed to complete the game, however this was not without a ton of trial and error.
There's some classic LJN bullshit going on there, you've got too much shit in front of the heroine that you can't see what's going on. I get that caves are supposed to be dark and spoopy, but too much of that translates to not being fun. You need work on better indication on what is land-on-a-able and what is foreground/background.
The Camera, it was kind of all over the place and made me go cross eyed wondering what the fuck just happened for a few minutes. In fact, going back, the Cave in general made me go cross eyed, which is probably working as intended as it's a tangled mass of fossilized dicks.
The scenes were excellent. I have no real complaints there, I liked what I seent. My only tiny complaint is with the tentacle scene, in that the heroine has some magnificent titty nipples, and you chose to cover them. Sheeeeeeeeeeeit. I still busted though.
In all, just keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
The Heroine gets a 9/10 , docked a point because no bush. Still excellent though! I nutted.
The Cave section could use some work. I managed to complete the game, however this was not without a ton of trial and error.
There's some classic LJN bullshit going on there, you've got too much shit in front of the heroine that you can't see what's going on. I get that caves are supposed to be dark and spoopy, but too much of that translates to not being fun. You need work on better indication on what is land-on-a-able and what is foreground/background.
The Camera, it was kind of all over the place and made me go cross eyed wondering what the fuck just happened for a few minutes. In fact, going back, the Cave in general made me go cross eyed, which is probably working as intended as it's a tangled mass of fossilized dicks.
The scenes were excellent. I have no real complaints there, I liked what I seent. My only tiny complaint is with the tentacle scene, in that the heroine has some magnificent titty nipples, and you chose to cover them. Sheeeeeeeeeeeit. I still busted though.
In all, just keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.
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there is an issue where if you turn down the mayoress' offer or tell her you're going to think about it you can't go back into the castle, it automatically exits back to the village
otherwise looks like a game with lots of potential
otherwise looks like a game with lots of potential
So I randomly had an idea or two
As for the morality of 'getting knocked up left and right', I think going with the "this place could really use more kids so not an issue if you keep getting knocked up lmao we'll take care of it all" seems to be the easiest way out of that issue (if you could call it that)
About people's biggest complaint, I think upping the brightness to the point that the darkest spot could be at most described as "dimly-lit" (you could still see the outline and most obvious traits of things but still dark) would be alright, keeps the tone and keeps the game playable
As for the morality of 'getting knocked up left and right', I think going with the "this place could really use more kids so not an issue if you keep getting knocked up lmao we'll take care of it all" seems to be the easiest way out of that issue (if you could call it that)
About people's biggest complaint, I think upping the brightness to the point that the darkest spot could be at most described as "dimly-lit" (you could still see the outline and most obvious traits of things but still dark) would be alright, keeps the tone and keeps the game playable
So far a very strong demo! Impressive for your first game!
I think the story gets off to a strong start, and made me interested in all the characters currently present. My only issue is with the invisible wall text, and how long it takes to get through it before you're let through. The platforming was relatively intuitive, compared to some other games on here, and despite some issues already mentioned (lack of visibility in places, some sluggish controls, especially when sliding), it was pretty easy, once you'd died a few times, to work out when and where to jump, run, slide, etc.
1. Can we know which villagers/route will give what kind of transformation/corruption?
2. Will we be locked into a villager's route once we start staying with them, or can we switch between?
3. The size of some rooms is too large for how empty they are, and feel like they should either be smaller or have some NPCs for population.
4. The auto run level was certainly out of the box for this type of game, and while I definitely didn't mind it, it did feel a little empty.
Definitely looking forward to more!
I think the story gets off to a strong start, and made me interested in all the characters currently present. My only issue is with the invisible wall text, and how long it takes to get through it before you're let through. The platforming was relatively intuitive, compared to some other games on here, and despite some issues already mentioned (lack of visibility in places, some sluggish controls, especially when sliding), it was pretty easy, once you'd died a few times, to work out when and where to jump, run, slide, etc.
1. Can we know which villagers/route will give what kind of transformation/corruption?
2. Will we be locked into a villager's route once we start staying with them, or can we switch between?
3. The size of some rooms is too large for how empty they are, and feel like they should either be smaller or have some NPCs for population.
4. The auto run level was certainly out of the box for this type of game, and while I definitely didn't mind it, it did feel a little empty.
Definitely looking forward to more!
- Jun 15, 2017
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What happens is, if you die to the boulder in the previous area, you respawn and then do it again, the boulder doesn't trigger either. This sequence break is probably what's causing the dialogue to fail as well and thus the wall never gets removed.
Since it should now be very easy to replicate for you (just die to the boulder, and then go through it again), you should be fine on fixing it, too. Reloading the save, by the way, fixes the boulder trigger and therefore also the dialogue trigger, and the invisible wall disappears normally, too.
- Sep 17, 2023
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Yeah, it's a nice way to do it since they are trapped in there. I could let the Mayoress explain that point.
Thanks for the ideas!
I have planned everything in regard to the story, but as you can see... I'm definitely open to changing things considering my dumb-ass brain. The transformation is progressive and completes itself at the end.
1. - Doctor Boto -> Procedural Fishling(blue scales), egg-laying.
- Sofu -> Even bigger booba and ass maybe. He's human after all, nothing much there. And as you said, i guess it's more of a "corruption" if she decides to stay there.(One could say... she "transform" in the wife/mother
)- Mayoress -> It's hard to explain(too much lore) but she will get more like her but not in size/height.
- Kur -> we already saw what happened with him so yeah, definitely a golem (it's part of their relationship after all. "Think like a golem" leads to that.
- Hero will never be romanceable or seggs-able.
I'll never do that, that dude is hell-bent on escaping. Even someone like Kiera can't sway him(he's a sigma male chad).2.No, no, no! It's all about the fuck around, figure out. You are free to do that.
3. 4. Got it. I'll see what I can do to fill the scene up.
5. Thanks for taking the time to write me about it!
- Sep 17, 2023
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Oh damn, now I get itWhat happens is, if you die to the boulder in the previous area, you respawn and then do it again, the boulder doesn't trigger either. This sequence break is probably what's causing the dialogue to fail as well and thus the wall never gets removed.
Since it should now be very easy to replicate for you (just die to the boulder, and then go through it again), you should be fine on fixing it, too. Reloading the save, by the way, fixes the boulder trigger and therefore also the dialogue trigger, and the invisible wall disappears normally, too.
You really helped me on this oneThanks!
i would be stoked if she could take some of the minor things outside of the dungeon with her, unknown to her... and then x months later.Fair question, as a fan of that content myself I always wonder the same in videogames(I've been blue balled so many times
- In the Demo is a bad end (It's in the preview thumbnail)
- If she get knocked up by the villagers... well that would stop her from escaping. And some of them will try to do just that
- I've planned a quest with Boto the Doctor. He needs a "worm monster" for his medicines. She can get pregnant by that slug-like monster. Keep it or sell it to Boto the Doctor. If she keeps it... well, things might escalate. Many times.
- The second level of the game will involve a frog monster that has little eggs petrified by the cave(Lore moment) she can decides to revive them by unconventional means. But giving life implies taking responsibility during her adventures(she can go back to visit him)... well, things might escalate.
- I'm open to suggestion of course! I can change the type of monster or creature of course.
have a semi-good end or a semi bad end where she becomes her own/ someone elses research object.
- Apr 28, 2017
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Tried your game, but I just found it too dark to be able to tell what was happening.
To everyone who is getting error 0x80004005, I found out that you can avoid this problem by extracting with WinRAR. Hope this helps.
i'd suggest adding a brightness setting in the future, its so hard to see what im doing i just level skipped the platforming stuff, the scenes are awesome though