Writing: 8/10
Imagery: 8/10
Gameplay: 5/10
Kinks: 6/10
Overall: 7/10
Midnight Paradise: The Essay
Can we get a tl;dr version of this? Seriously, the writing it good, but damn do they ramble on at times. I get they're setting things up for a crossover between MP and Dreams of Desire, which I consider to be wholly more entertaining and interesting, but this isn't listed as a VN, let's keep it that way.
Now, writing aside, the scenes, CGs, and models used here are pretty peak. Mother is a MILF, aunt is a rich slut, older sister is a gym freak, younger sister is a "correction required" brat, the maid is a loyal cock koozie, and your teacher is a closet pervert. You work on them to earn their love, unlock their perverted natures, and fuck them all before you proceed down the strangely expanding story that starts out with a college dropout and ends with a mafia boss.
The part that lacks is the gameplay, in a big way, this feels so close to a visual novel. There needs to be more to do to fill in the time between story progression and sexy moments, repeatable things to earn option content or may extras. Like in DoD you can unlock outfits, full on changing certain CGs, but here the only thing you can do is have the girls weirdly walk around in less clothing like it's normal for your mom to be buck naked around her horny son and sexless husband. More immersion breaking than if she was wearing a sexy dress, or a revealing bikini. (there is a pool right there)
Now I do want to say I am excited to see a return of shadow man and wincest boy, and I also liked how you can have a couple ways to end things here, but I think less dialogue would be better. Say more, by saying less.