This is a really good VN & demo. Love the premise, it's out of the ordinary, though the prologue was kinda short but it's to the point. Julie being one of his past that catches up to him & Lily being his new little Monkey points to how their fate has come full circle and serves as the perfect plot device.
So far, engaging narrative and likeable characters with intriguing backstories at least on the surface. Interactions feel natural which is THE most challenging aspect for many devs. Dialogue a bit too formal sometimes. Entire package is grounded in realism and relatability, which are it's biggest draw.
Not sure if it'll turn into an action movie, black ops and agent 47 stuff, hope there's some planned but please keep it grounded. As much as i like John Wick at the end of the day it feels empty and is purely an action movie devoid of any good storytelling and unrealistic as hell. Lots of military, special forces, espionage, hitman mafia, cartel VNs out there succumb to dumb movie logic with an incredulous plot and have absolutely zero idea of what actually happens in those roles in real life.
That said, why MC recognizes the street/place of Julie's? Didn't she moved out of Tay City, so it shouldn't be recognizable.