Because there is already a girl who is cheating on her boyfriend and she won't be the only one doing this kind of stuffs
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Really enjoying the game couple of things I wanted to mention I would re go over your proof read in most of the script where it should be she it's down as he and the only other thing I wanted to mention is when Anna has the conversation about opening the relationship she says I don't want to lie to you about sleeping with other guys but at this stage they haven't opened the relationship so it comes across as that she's already made the decision to cheat on him before actually having the conversation about opening the relationship so in theory to Anna it wouldn't matter to her if the relationship is open or not she's gonna do it anyway , but back to my point just that kind of wording doesn't really fit with the conversation dynamic of discussing a potential open relationship, hope this makes sense
Also correct me if I'm wrong but during the sexting scene where Alex is the master and Anna is the slave , but doesn't it defeat the purpose of that dynamic if Anna has more than one master? Now not sure if this is something your going to explore more or if it was just for the purpose of the sexting
Also correct me if I'm wrong but during the sexting scene where Alex is the master and Anna is the slave , but doesn't it defeat the purpose of that dynamic if Anna has more than one master? Now not sure if this is something your going to explore more or if it was just for the purpose of the sexting
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I don't know if you're using a translator from italian to english or if you're just using AI to write, but this is in dire need of proofreading.
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You know...when i first saw shego I thought...wait you gave us shego and a redheaded girlfriend...why not just make the GF Kim. Then a half second later I was WAIT...fuck that...i ain't sharing Kim...THEN i thought...wait, Kim with multiple cocks inside her...
anyone knows how to increase lust for each char at start? like sierra send the pic of threesome?
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install URM (Universal Renpy Mod) so that you can see which choices give you lust with her. when it's installed every time a choice comes up you get a notification in the top left corner. you click it a box shows up in the middle showing which choices are available and even which are hidden. there are buttons "description" and "show" show shows you the outcome of that choice. No wyou never have to ask that question again for any game ever.
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Damn...she's living with a guy...starting a relationship with a guy she's living with would be a VERY dangerous idea...I hope this game doesn't turn into a forced NTR game at the end. I'm ok if it's optional, but i'm gonna duck out if it's forced.\
EDIT: why did my game just go back to main menu after the texting session in 0.1?
EDIT: why did my game just go back to main menu after the texting session in 0.1?
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Thank you for your feedback! I’ve reviewed the text more carefully, and you’re absolutely right. I use a translator for most of the text lines, and right now I try to check everything I translate myself, but you’re right: before the next version, I will hire a proofreader. In any case, I’ve fixed the errors you mentioned, and you can download the corrected version from the links on the main page!
When Alex and Anna have that conversation, Anna is not telling Alex that she will definitely cheat on him, but she is afraid that if she ever did something like that, it would ruin the relationship she cherishes with Alex. Her goal is not to force Alex by blackmailing him with the threat "I (Anna) will sleep with many men anyway," but rather to reason together about how to make the most of their long-distance relationship, which cannot foresee any physical interactions in any way.
I will post on Patreon a Route Guide to get Max Lust with every Girl in a few days
I would have really liked to add Kim to the game, but it would have turned into a parody of Kim Possible, so I preferred to add Shego and Momo instead, while keeping the other characters original.You know...when i first saw shego I thought...wait you gave us shego and a redheaded girlfriend...why not just make the GF Kim. Then a half second later I was WAIT...fuck that...i ain't sharing Kim...THEN i thought...wait, Kim with multiple cocks inside her...
But never say never, Kim could still appear in a pajama party in the future... who knows :3 Shego's route will mainly consist of Femdom scenes, but there will also be occasions where you'll have the choice to dominate her.
1.31 GB of content. I think that if you play it from scratch, it will take around 1 hour of gameplay (but only if you want to see all the possible outcomes, of course).
NTR will be 100% Optional.
That shouldn’t happen. Are you playing on PC, Mac, or Android? Have you started a new game or loaded a save from the previous version?
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I never played the previous and it's PCI would have really liked to add Kim to the game, but it would have turned into a parody of Kim Possible, so I preferred to add Shego and Momo instead, while keeping the other characters original.
Shego's route will mainly consist of Femdom scenes, but there will also be occasions where you'll have the choice to dominate her.
1.31 GB of content. I think that if you play it from scratch, it will take around 1 hour of gameplay (but only if you want to see all the possible outcomes, of course).
NTR will be 100% Optional.
That shouldn’t happen. Are you playing on PC, Mac, or Android? Have you started a new game or loaded a save from the previous version?
I fully understand the point your trying to put across with the script but it definitely reads as at this current moment she's gonna cheat , Il put in a screenshot for youThank you for your feedback! I’ve reviewed the text more carefully, and you’re absolutely right. I use a translator for most of the text lines, and right now I try to check everything I translate myself, but you’re right: before the next version, I will hire a proofreader. In any case, I’ve fixed the errors you mentioned, and you can download the corrected version from the links on the main page!
When Alex and Anna have that conversation, Anna is not telling Alex that she will definitely cheat on him, but she is afraid that if she ever did something like that, it would ruin the relationship she cherishes with Alex. Her goal is not to force Alex by blackmailing him with the threat "I (Anna) will sleep with many men anyway," but rather to reason together about how to make the most of their long-distance relationship, which cannot foresee any physical interactions in any way.
I will post on Patreon a Route Guide to get Max Lust with every Girl in a few days
To mean it doesn't read like she's saying I don't want to have to lie to you if I have a moment of weakness and cheat on you rather it reads like I'm gonna have sex in Italy regardless I'd just rather not have to lie to you about it so let's both cheat but it's not cheating as we now have an open relationship
Like I said I get the point your trying to make it's just the general wording makes it come across that way
Something like - I'm worried that either of us might have a moment of weakness due to the loneliness and do something we regret and ruin our relationship , do you think we should consider opening our relationship so that we can still fulfil our sexual desires as it will be challenging while I'm away but rest assured Il always be yours and your the only man I'm coming home too ... Or something along those lines would of worked better in my opinion
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You just said NTR is optional...is it going to be lust point based? or just a straight up obvious question at some point? I also saw you mention something about Alex cheating on Anna...how do you "cheat" in an open relationship? oh wait... she's gonna veto someone isn't she? that means i can veto the roommate? cause that just seems like a terrible idea and a definite NTR ending.
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It's PC, and I never played before so no loaded save. The file i launch from says 0.21
Edit: oh, and i DL'd from the gofile link.
Edit2: also, adn this may not be relevant. But I chose not to view Luna Trap content and at no point did it seem like i had been seen, but when i get back from the mall She comes in and acts like we saw each other.
Edit 3: I was gonna shut it down for the "night" here anyway cause it's 5am. I'll check back and hope for a solution tomorrow.
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Very good second update, ofcourse you still have to fix alot typos, but least the sentences are decent. But if you adress to a women, you use she, her. If you adress to men you use he, him and not the reversed. I dig Anna in first place, but since she is gone and going have her own fun too, the girls I love most so far is tsundere Molly and slutty hot pink Sierra, so going have fun with those 2 hotties playing with the mc's pole.