Promising first release, with some contradictory systems currently in play.
For a game supposedly about freedom of choice and paving your own way, the forced submissive dream-rape opening is quite horrible. Give me a way to shank the fuck and I'm good. Forced sexual encounters should really be a choice, as weird as it sounds.
The needs system is also very intrusive for being a first pass. It could do with being a lot more lenient until it is actually needed for progression or something similar.
Other than that, the world building is nice so far, I haven't seen the models anywhere else and they're pretty, and the dialogue is alright besides the grammar and spelling.
7/10 for a 0.1.
Hi, the dream sex scene is made for a lot of reasons:
1) to show gamers this is a hardcore adult game
2) to demonstrate sex scenes will be possible in the future (Ashley is shy, so it'll be a long path to this kinda interactions) (Actually common things in games for example in star wars the force unleashed you have to play Darth Vader with all the cool abilities and effects, and then you get back to reality playing weak young jedi)
3) it's not a dream rape, she actually desired about a dream like that, because she was aroused after these train events (if its not obvious, we will try to visualize it better), so this dream is the first step to fight her inner modesty(which all the game is about)
And need system wasn't tweaked very good, I already wrote about it above. We don't punish players for not satisfying the needs (yet)