Overall, a pretty good update. I liked the story, and the scenes. I loved the animation too. Nice touch.
I updated my incest patch, and took care of the non-kids lines. So, I'll present what I changed the lines to:
Code:
"My husband and I were never able to have kids" =
"My husband and I never had a problem with pregnancy"
"So I guess you could say my body was spared from the struggles of motherhood" =
"Or, maybe it was the sex he loved. But not the resulting kids so much?"
"Doctors said it was a problem with me..." =
"Three were enough for him. Before his eye started to stray"
"...that was a hard pill to swallow" =
"Three small ones at home, and... all he could do was chase another skirt away from home")
"After a while, we just stopped trying" =
"He spent more and more time. On them. And not...")
"It must be Laura" =
"It must be Mom"
The laura line just seemed odd. So, just changed it to him calling her mom instead.
And, if anyone's taking note, I saw some grammar stuff while playing:
"{size=-10}To see her reaction whe she opens her eyes{/size}"
whe = when
"It's normal when you dancing at a club Ari"
you = you're
Anyway, the incest patch works pretty good.