Pixillin'

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This gets a little more armchair developer than I'd like but if I was the one calling the shots, it would be a very different project.
If I know for a fact I want to meet a monthly release cycle, there's no way I include lewd scenes with most of the characters we've gotten. Especially when I notice that I'm having to make certain decisions in order to meet deadlines.

I think it would benefit greatly from being scaled back. Did you really need 3 different maids (with multiple lewd scenes) for the castle chapter when you're already providing the Queen and Princess? Have Taron beat up Frida instead of threesome maid A. It hurts MC because of the prison arc, hurts Amelia personally, and just sounds better in my head. Did you need multiple lewd scenes with Kelly when you're already going to have Pearl and Kira as LIs in the same arena? On that note, did you need to fuck her mom too just so you could slap "milf" in a tag? Did you need Alice at all if you've got Eliza? You can't even set up a jealousy angle with Eliza/Alice because Eliza blows her out of the water as a character and then Alice gets written into the school arc. It's just optimism at this point that I'm expecting Alice to blossom and actually contribute to Act 2 and onward. Don't even get me started on the Lust City arc.

I could go on but like I said to start, it's more armchair dev than I normally like to be. As far as the banner, I'm honestly not sure what was on earlier banners. I don't quite remember when I first started this.
I'm just playing it the way I intended to from the start, no matter how nonsensical it becomes - that I'm away from home and running around the world trying to help people that I despise. Although it has pushed me completely to the dark side, and I'll hapily lend a hand to those who are trying to hurt my enemies good friends and Lis.
 

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This gets a little more armchair developer than I'd like but if I was the one calling the shots, it would be a very different project.
If I know for a fact I want to meet a monthly release cycle, there's no way I include lewd scenes with most of the characters we've gotten. Especially when I notice that I'm having to make certain decisions in order to meet deadlines.

I think it would benefit greatly from being scaled back. Did you really need 3 different maids (with multiple lewd scenes) for the castle chapter when you're already providing the Queen and Princess? Have Taron beat up Frida instead of threesome maid A. It hurts MC because of the prison arc, hurts Amelia personally, and just sounds better in my head. Did you need multiple lewd scenes with Kelly when you're already going to have Pearl and Kira as LIs in the same arena? On that note, did you need to fuck her mom too just so you could slap "milf" in a tag? Did you need Alice at all if you've got Eliza? You can't even set up a jealousy angle with Eliza/Alice because Eliza blows her out of the water as a character and then Alice gets written into the school arc. It's just optimism at this point that I'm expecting Alice to blossom and actually contribute to Act 2 and onward. Don't even get me started on the Lust City arc.

I could go on but like I said to start, it's more armchair dev than I normally like to be. As far as the banner, I'm honestly not sure what was on earlier banners. I don't quite remember when I first started this.


The only thing I disagree with you on is having Taron beat up Frida, because I don't believe Frida would be capably of lying and saying the mc did it.
 
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The only thing I disagree with you on is having Taron beat up Frida, because I don't believe Frida would be capably of lying and saying the mc did it.
To expand on that piece of fan fiction, Taron would imply violence on Amelia if Frida doesn't comply, which would 100% get Frida to capitulate. She would weather bodily harm to herself to protect someone but harm combined with a veiled threat would work. That said, in this scenario, I'd be the writer so I'm a little biased.
 
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Yeah I thought about the violence on Amelia thing, but at the same time I can't think of a reason why Frida wouldn't just run to the mc for help. I don't really think the Taron thing works unless it's a stranger that get's assaulted.
I should probably quit while I'm ahead but in my world, Taron would be a much more effective villain than what we currently have. Still, this is way out in fan fic land and it's Buu's story. I'm just a mooch when it comes to this particular VN.
 

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I didn't like Eliza's hair down, I didn't like the bang's and the hair was to short, her hair is much longer. She didn't look like Eliza to me. If you do more scenes with her hair down lose the bangs or shorter bangs and make her hair longer. EDIT: The hair was longer than i thought, but i still don't like it. Need to go back to her normal hair even on dates. Just doesn't look like Eliza with it down.
 
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I didn't like Eliza's hair down, I didn't like the bang's and the hair was to short, her hair is much longer. She didn't look like Eliza to me. If you do more scenes with her hair down lose the bangs or shorter bangs and make her hair longer. EDIT: The hair was longer than i thought, but i still don't like it. Need to go back to her normal hair even on dates. Just doesn't look like Eliza with it down.
I agree with you brother.

Classic Eliza hair is the best. :love:

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cause there is no rational or valid reason to do so yet ( for me) other than Selena :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
For me there is. And it’s not just about how your first thing with them went - the more I’m around them the less I like them (and I disliked them on first meeting - before we set sail). At this point it would just be satisfying to know that I’d never see them again. Besides, I don’t see her as a Li yet really, but my second favorite in the game is Brenda - and it would be fun for her.
 

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For me there is. And it’s not just about how your first thing with them went - the more I’m around them the less I like them (and I disliked them on first meeting - before we set sail). At this point it would just be satisfying to know that I’d never see them again. Besides, I don’t see her as a Li yet really, but my second favorite in the game is Brenda - and it would be fun for her.
lol Brenda surprised by that I actually would kill her if I could . Assuming im not mixing characters up but she if she is the one that tried to kill the pirate sisters. Then yeah id kill her as I think she is too risky to leave alive , I wouldn't be able to trust her but I could at least trust the sisters even if I do dislike Kira.

But going back to your first point I get not liking Kira on your first meeting but not Peral , cause I didn't like Kira then gave her a chance and she just got worst for me.
 

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lol Brenda surprised by that I actually would kill her if I could . Assuming im not mixing characters up but she if she is the one that tried to kill the pirate sisters. Then yeah id kill her as I think she is too risky to leave alive , I wouldn't be able to trust her but I could at least trust the sisters even if I do dislike Kira.

But going back to your first point I get not liking Kira on your first meeting but not Peral , cause I didn't like Kira then gave her a chance and she just got worst for me.
Well I gave them a chance, I mean there was a time when this was new and I didn't know anything about them - I was just going to help Eliza but I found them annoying from go, and never at any point grew more fond of either of them - then I wanted to kill them both - then, instead of that, I'm now on a months long voyage to help them. I would absolutely take them out if I could. Basically, in the fight between Brenda and the Pirate Twins, I'm on Brenda's side. My top 5 are Eliza, Brenda, Sylph (because she's Eliza's friend), the Barmaid (who I like enough that I'd let her milk cows) and Lucid because she seems like the most fun of the gods. After that it falls off pretty sharpish (I don't like the rest enough that I'd let them milk cows on my farm.)
 

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Well I gave them a chance, I mean there was a time when this was new and I didn't know anything about them - I was just going to help Eliza but I found them annoying from go, and never at any point grew more fond of either of them - then I wanted to kill them both - then, instead of that, I'm now on a months long voyage to help them. I would absolutely take them out if I could. Basically, in the fight between Brenda and the Pirate Twins, I'm on Brenda's side. My top 5 are Eliza, Brenda, Sylph (because she's Eliza's friend), the Barmaid (who I like enough that I'd let her milk cows) and Lucid because she seems like the most fun of the gods. After that it falls off pretty sharpish (I don't like the rest enough that I'd let them milk cows on my farm.)
For me Brenda id kill , Sylph I find to annoying can't stand her, The Barmaid isn't bad but she is nothing more than a wench to me if she a character was a with some character deveolopment id probably like her. Lucid is a tricky one for me not sure if she is a LI or not I like her character alot .

Overall id say I like Eliza , Amelia , Luna , Peral and Alice about the same

But honestly for me I just think killing the pirates twins is too harsh of a punishment at this point even if I didn't like them ( I don't like Kira) , only reason I would kill Brenda is because I can't trust her to betray the MC or the pirate twins and she did try to take over looters bay and kill the twins.
 
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