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hoping alice gets more attention
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Weird ending in Polly's chat. Went from 0 to 100 in the blink of an eye. Considering the amount of believable build-up the other characters have had before, I expected it to be a lot more natural than it ended up being. Bit of a shame
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You're right, one of the choices at the end was wild and felt out of no where and had very little build up. Probably the weakest update/girl so far.
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Kind of underwhelming update for so many delays. The buildup is all there, but the payoff barely is. Very little choice, very little actual sex. Needed one more 'action' chapter, imo.
Hopefully Rachel next time, or Cathryn. I miss them.
Hopefully Rachel next time, or Cathryn. I miss them.
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What a shitty update. I'm going to put aside the fact of how weird a colab this is or that this new character is based on an actual real person... Just what the fuck but okay.
The first two chapters were pretty good, slow but the build up was nice. The new group chat mechanic is nicely done and doesn't have the same glichty hacky feeling the the Cathryn/Alice chapters did. Chapter three is okay for the most part but the ending just...comes out of fucking nowhere? Like, literally, we were talking about how weird and not cool Stacy's guy friends were then just a few hours later, "jk I'm fucking cheating on you haha! And, actually, you being mad about me doing the one single thing you told me not to do is fucked up." Again just so weird after the bf tells Anna not to cheat and break up with her bf first, only for Polly to now do the exact same thing. I'm also left hoping that this women didn't/doesn't treat her actual boyfriend this way. As the mc felt sorry for Anna's bf I feel bad for Polly's real life bf, what a shitty thing to do to a person.
It's also disappointing that this new character has only the two endings and at the very last second too, almost as if they were an after thought. The first of which seems like it might not even carry over to chapter 4?
Polly feels like another Rachel to me, a girl who lies and cheats on the MC without caring about their feelings, ask for forgiveness not for permission and fuck them if they don't like it. I guess that's a good way to go though considering how massively popular Rachel is but I'm here for characters like Cathryn, Lilith, and Mabel. Characters who involve the MC and care for them and/or for Lilith, ones with a huge variety of choices. Polly is my second least favorite character after Rachel but I guess we'll see how she develops in her next update, whenever the heck that's going to me as we add more and more characters and old ones get left behind. I'm still bitter about the tiny updates that Mabel and Amber got last year.
The first two chapters were pretty good, slow but the build up was nice. The new group chat mechanic is nicely done and doesn't have the same glichty hacky feeling the the Cathryn/Alice chapters did. Chapter three is okay for the most part but the ending just...comes out of fucking nowhere? Like, literally, we were talking about how weird and not cool Stacy's guy friends were then just a few hours later, "jk I'm fucking cheating on you haha! And, actually, you being mad about me doing the one single thing you told me not to do is fucked up." Again just so weird after the bf tells Anna not to cheat and break up with her bf first, only for Polly to now do the exact same thing. I'm also left hoping that this women didn't/doesn't treat her actual boyfriend this way. As the mc felt sorry for Anna's bf I feel bad for Polly's real life bf, what a shitty thing to do to a person.
It's also disappointing that this new character has only the two endings and at the very last second too, almost as if they were an after thought. The first of which seems like it might not even carry over to chapter 4?
Polly feels like another Rachel to me, a girl who lies and cheats on the MC without caring about their feelings, ask for forgiveness not for permission and fuck them if they don't like it. I guess that's a good way to go though considering how massively popular Rachel is but I'm here for characters like Cathryn, Lilith, and Mabel. Characters who involve the MC and care for them and/or for Lilith, ones with a huge variety of choices. Polly is my second least favorite character after Rachel but I guess we'll see how she develops in her next update, whenever the heck that's going to me as we add more and more characters and old ones get left behind. I'm still bitter about the tiny updates that Mabel and Amber got last year.
how can i slow down the chat or is there way to move the chat up so i can read the missing message ?
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are all the nts routes like Cathryn? I don't much like the talk about not being able to make her cum and the small dick shit. The big dick talk was fine til she started talking about MC's being small and being unable to fuck her good. I love sharing but not this humiliation type stuff. oh, and the cleaning her up stuff and eating the cum out of her...that's a hard pass.
I disagree with the Rachel statement as I do like that overall bitchiness/scummy behavior. Only as a fantasy though. If this is indeed what happened irl then it's pretty weird of vixen, especially considering how proud she appears to be over it