VN Others NTR Phone [v0.23.0] [Shybox]

[FatYoda]

The audio included in the animations of Polly were also of poor quality. At least Amber has a reason to cheat because you're too busy at work and planned time with her, so she cheats. Naomi is really hot, and just a party girl from the very beginning so you can't really blame her she's just having fun, even in a slutty way she has her moments but she does care and is sweet. Cathyrn really listens and gives you everything you want. Lilith is really easy to steer the conversation again getting what you want. Rachel is nice at first but she's got a craving for darker skin and its her thing. Mabel is a fun cosplay story. But yeah I could do without Polly. Lol

Yeah i would have liked that more too. I don't mind light NTR with a buildup and then she cheats then she's remorseful and you open the relationship up, those aree fun but her shitting all over you while she's fucking Nick...that hurt, and it just didn't seem to fit her character at all.

 

[salmon312]

You misunderstand. I love NTR. It's not for everyone. I am simply complaining that the angst was not prolonged before the kill shot.

I wish he had gotten hints, had numerous reasons to be suspicious before finally receiving a video confirming his fears from one of her friends. The way she behaved afterwards, cold and callous was perfect. And true to life as many can attest!

Exactly. Polly's story was the most realistic of all. I can understand why players prefer a "sweetened" version of NTR stories, with the sole purpose of having a more digestible product for the consumer. But Polly's story was realistic, with the shock of discovering the harsh truth and superficiality of a person you considered special.
I also ended up feeling bad about Polly's story, but I guess for the same reason real-life people don't like being cheated on.

P.S.: The dialogue between the women in a private group also added a lot of realism.

 

[DressedToThrill]

Lots of good stuff in the Polly story. I just wish there was a timeline where the friend group stayed together and were cheering on the BF, who become more open to share Polly on stream, also with guys on camera, and perhaps with the other girls' boyfriends in the group chat. Cheating kills the story for me, since that's usually a game over in real life. Sharing lets me suspend disbelief enough to believe the story can continue.

Also, a rarity when discussing these phone games, I wish for an option to slow or pause the chat. This was just too fast for me, or to far between MC time to type, and the dialogue isn't even boring to read, so let us!

Also I have no knowledge at all about this real life camgirl, so I have no opinion on that at all. I just think the group of friends working at a bakery, being lewd on the side, was fun and cute.

 

[gotohome]

Polly's story is the worst, the final part is too cold, the whole path was hot, but the final part of the betrayal, it was the worst ending ever played in a VN,

 

[usernameidgaf]

mid update ngl. huge personality change at the end feels rushed and abrupt. there was also no real story branches

 

[leathermax]

I didn't dislike Polly's story. I kinda saw it coming, tbf. If your girl is asking you to push the boundaries of the relationship over and over, it's quite telegraphed where it's going. And if she's growing bolder while at it, it also makes sense for her to not even act ashamed of her own betrayal.
What I wanted to know is if that's where Polly's story end, because I felt that's where it was getting hotter.

 

[salmon312]

mid update ngl. huge personality change at the end feels rushed and abrupt. there was also no real story branches

Why rushed? From the very beginning, it's clear that Polly is a slut.
From the start, she's been sharing nude photos with women from work she's known for a couple of days, chatting about cheating on her boyfriends, and showing interest in stripping on webcam.
There's no rush here. What we're seeing is a betrayal of a man's feelings and the harsh reality of how women behave in packs.

 

[Shybox]

I didn't dislike Polly's story. I kinda saw it coming, tbf. If your girl is asking you to push the boundaries of the relationship over and over, it's quite telegraphed where it's going. And if she's growing bolder while at it, it also makes sense for her to not even act ashamed of her own betrayal.
What I wanted to know is if that's where Polly's story end, because I felt that's where it was getting hotter.

Polly is a character like any other in the game now. She will enter Patreon Polls to get a 4th chapter.

Also what I haven't seen anyone mention. Polly sent her sex video to Anna because she thought Anna could be trusted. I wrote Anna in a way that she was always a supportive character to Polly. But then, Anna betrays Polly's trust right away. Because she developed a sense of guilt for cheating on her Boyfriend. She even tells MC that Sasha was right all along.

Anna's betrayal was something Polly was caught off guard by. So when MC confronts her, she doubles down. Making it seem like cheating is not that big of deal. She knows it's a big of a deal though, otherwise she wouldn't have lied about it. She knew she wasn't allowed to fuck guys.

But spelling all that out in the chat based format is like overexplaining and makes stories boring. We wouldn't have discussions if everything would be explained in detail by the author.

 

[leathermax]

Polly is a character like any other in the game now. She will enter Patreon Polls to get a 4th chapter.

Also what I haven't seen anyone mention. Polly sent her sex video to Anna because she thought Anna could be trusted. I wrote Anna in a way that she was always a supportive character to Polly. But then, Anna betrays Polly's trust right away. Because she developed a sense of guilt for cheating on her Boyfriend. She even tells MC that Sasha was right all along.

Anna's betrayal was something Polly was caught off guard by. So when MC confronts her, she doubles down. Making it seem like cheating is not that big of deal. She knows it's a big of a deal though, otherwise she wouldn't have lied about it. She knew she wasn't allowed to fuck guys.

But spelling all that out in the chat based format is like overexplaining and makes stories boring. We wouldn't have discussions if everything would be explained in detail by the author.

Yeah, that's a natural reaction, too. But the situation is different as it is; boundaries being pushed every day, than it would be if she was acting like a normal girl, then sharing herself cheating on her bf while drunk, and him confronting her about it. There's a buildup to it, and the MC is willingly blind about it.

I understand there're conflicting emotions for Polly here; the mixture of feeling betrayed and emboldened, doubling down on it "not being a big deal" is another method of running away, and in a way, mimics what Anna did with her bf. Psyching herself up by saying all men cheat, and that he was a douchebag anyways, just so she could feel allowed to do it herself, lessening the guilt of it all by placing it on someone else.

But that way of doing it is also very "Polly like". By reading the messages, you understand she's the type of girl to bend the rules as much as possible, and breaking them if she feels like she could get away with it, without either feeling bad about it. The "No Rules" tattoo is as clear a message as it could ever get. She's beeing crawling in that obvious direction while probing MC as well.

Normally I don't care about the writing in a porn game, but this particular story was pretty well written; it felt very humanly believable from the core characters here. What I wanted to say is that people here saying that it went from 0 to 100 and that the current ending was too rushed or artificial are not catching the human subtleties in the character and personality of everyone involved in the story. So kudos to you, mate.

There's just a pet peeve I have with MC's reaction to it all. It's either one extreme or the other. He breaks up with Polly, no ifs or buts, or accepts being a cuck. It's too compromising, imho. As a player, I would've liked to get past that part without either ending the story or jerking off to the girlfriend saying how Chad Thundercock fucks her better than me. I'm not one to self insert as the main character (main reason why I enjoy NTR without liking that idea irl), but I also don't really enjoy stories in which the MC can only be the little bitch. At least with other characters, like the goth girl (I don't remember her name off the top of my head) offer more branching possibilities.

 

[Shybox]

Yeah, that's a natural reaction, too. But the situation is different as it is; boundaries being pushed every day, than it would be if she was acting like a normal girl, then sharing herself cheating on her bf while drunk, and him confronting her about it. There's a buildup to it, and the MC is willingly blind about it.

I understand there're conflicting emotions for Polly here; the mixture of feeling betrayed and emboldened, doubling down on it "not being a big deal" is another method of running away, and in a way, mimics what Anna did with her bf. Psyching herself up by saying all men cheat, and that he was a douchebag anyways, just so she could feel allowed to do it herself, lessening the guilt of it all by placing it on someone else.

But that way of doing it is also very "Polly like". By reading the messages, you understand she's the type of girl to bend the rules as much as possible, and breaking them if she feels like she could get away with it, without either feeling bad about it. The "No Rules" tattoo is as clear a message as it could ever get. She's beeing crawling in that obvious direction while probing MC as well.

Normally I don't care about the writing in a porn game, but this particular story was pretty well written; it felt very humanly believable from the core characters here. What I wanted to say is that people here saying that it went from 0 to 100 and that the current ending was too rushed or artificial are not catching the human subtleties in the character and personality of everyone involved in the story. So kudos to you, mate.

There's just a pet peeve I have with MC's reaction to it all. It's either one extreme or the other. He breaks up with Polly, no ifs or buts, or accepts being a cuck. It's too compromising, imho. As a player, I would've liked to get past that part without either ending the story or jerking off to the girlfriend saying how Chad Thundercock fucks her better than me. I'm not one to self insert as the main character (main reason why I enjoy NTR without liking that idea irl), but I also don't really enjoy stories in which the MC can only be the little bitch. At least with other characters, like the goth girl (I don't remember her name off the top of my head) offer more branching possibilities.

Agreed. I will probably change the ending of chapter 03 which I usually never did to a character before. I already have a more interesting option in the ned of chapter 03 in my head now. I'll implement it some time when I have the time. Now the focus is on creating a new chapter for Rachel as it seems since the poll on patreon she's winning.

 

[kikomascado]

Agreed. I will probably change the ending of chapter 03 which I usually never did to a character before. I already have a more interesting option in the ned of chapter 03 in my head now. I'll implement it some time when I have the time. Now the focus is on creating a new chapter for Rachel as it seems since the poll on patreon she's winning.

I have a suggestion: Delete the poll and work on Mabel instead. Hahaha

 

[wolfund]

You misunderstand. I love NTR. It's not for everyone. I am simply complaining that the angst was not prolonged before the kill shot.

I wish he had gotten hints, had numerous reasons to be suspicious before finally receiving a video confirming his fears from one of her friends. The way she behaved afterwards, cold and callous was perfect. And true to life as many can attest!

Exactly. Polly's story was the most realistic of all. I can understand why players prefer a "sweetened" version of NTR stories, with the sole purpose of having a more digestible product for the consumer. But Polly's story was realistic, with the shock of discovering the harsh truth and superficiality of a person you considered special.
I also ended up feeling bad about Polly's story, but I guess for the same reason real-life people don't like being cheated on.

P.S.: The dialogue between the women in a private group also added a lot of realism.

Agreed. I will probably change the ending of chapter 03 which I usually never did to a character before. I already have a more interesting option in the ned of chapter 03 in my head now. I'll implement it some time when I have the time. Now the focus is on creating a new chapter for Rachel as it seems since the poll on patreon she's winning.

My trouble with it is two fold, the first is that this story was very much 'realistic' in how things develop and second that this is also very much tainted by the 'inspired by real event' which in my view taint it even further and less into a game and more into something like the perverse viewing of a man sharing his text message after a bad breakup after his partner cheated on him.

So on one side kudo for implicitly creating such strong emotion for sure, from a purely creative perspective it's great.

But on the other hand I want to ripe her fucking throat out with my teeth and spit in her trachea, and not think of this whole thing for a while.

I like the fantasy of NTR, but it's still a mere fantasy that will very much remain such, but honestly polly story has muddled the line so much in my mind right now that it's hard for me to not react like I would in truth, and not in fantasy. Honestly had not that message at the start been present my reaction would have by far been more muted, I wouldn't have liked it while being more detached from the whole thing (like "gne whatever I'll do the other stories"), but as it stand I really really fucking hate this one, because of this fucking message at the start.

 

[Step3]

My trouble with it is two fold, the first is that this story was very much 'realistic' in how things develop and second that this is also very much tainted by the 'inspired by real event'

All fiction is like this. All of it. The fact this is so good is literally due to the honesty of the creator. If he tried to be less honest regarding his and others own experiences the writing would suffer.

 

[Step3]

There's just a pet peeve I have with MC's reaction to it all. It's either one extreme or the other. He breaks up with Polly, no ifs or buts, or accepts being a cuck.

I was thinking that the issue was that the descent into outright cheating and the MC being aware of it was too quick, but letting the MC have greater granularity in his reaction seems like a good way to improve it as well. Since I first found this project Amber has been my favorite and I've been waiting for more, but Polly is now tied with her. The introduction of new 'chat rooms' and such was great.

 

[Porn_reddit77]

I'm getting the feeling there is no code for this update but I also dont want to miss any content and I'm not sure.

 

[usernameidgaf]

Why rushed? From the very beginning, it's clear that Polly is a slut.
From the start, she's been sharing nude photos with women from work she's known for a couple of days, chatting about cheating on her boyfriends, and showing interest in stripping on webcam.
There's no rush here. What we're seeing is a betrayal of a man's feelings and the harsh reality of how women behave in packs.

realistic perspective? yes. storytelling perspective? nah. guy needs to be introduced and let it stew.

 

[kikomascado]

I'm getting the feeling there is no code for this update but I also dont want to miss any content and I'm not sure.

The new content is free. If you want the paid content you can use the previous version and the previous code.

 

[rroniandmagj]

Gally unlocker not work with this version?

 

[Dave 237]

The audio included in the animations of Polly were also of poor quality. At least Amber has a reason to cheat because you're too busy at work and planned time with her, so she cheats. Naomi is really hot, and just a party girl from the very beginning so you can't really blame her she's just having fun, even in a slutty way she has her moments but she does care and is sweet. Cathyrn really listens and gives you everything you want. Lilith is really easy to steer the conversation again getting what you want. Rachel is nice at first but she's got a craving for darker skin and its her thing. Mabel is a fun cosplay story. But yeah I could do without Polly. Lol

thats a stupid reason to cheat on someone

 

[kikomascado]

Gally unlocker not work with this version?

Didn't update it yet. The version number inside the site is the version it is intended to be used.